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07-20-2006, 08:17 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
|  Rose's Rhymes - Sa9+
 Hello! I'm Rose! Welcome to my poetry thread!
I only accept consrtuctive criticism! Whatever helps me become a better writer!
Sometimes I write short stories in the form of poems. Yes, that was random. Oh, and if there is a certain character or situation written about, go ahead and request!
Anyhoo, I hope you enjoy reading my poems as much as I enjoy writing them.
This is a Luna Lovegood one:
True 'Claw
Ravenclaw; She must be smart.
Blue eyes that are dreamier than art.
Her sweet laugh is the last to die.
She's out spoken; she's not shy.
Thank you! I'll put another one up soon! Enjoy!
~Rose | 
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07-21-2006, 04:14 PM
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| | Diricawl
Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Hermit town
Posts: 26,826
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Gendry Elwes
Third Year | NARGLES! |Tree Hugger | Wears a Penguin Suit & Tie | Snape on a Stick
That's great Rose...I would have added more of her quirkiness...but I liked it anyway...  first to post... 
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07-21-2006, 11:01 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Thank you, Lumus!!!!
This next one is from Dumbledore's point of view.
A Thousand Years
I have lived through the pain.
I have lived through the tears.
I have lived through the losses.
I have lived a thousand years.
Books line my office walls.
Clocks tell the time.
I rest my head on my desk.
I try to find my piece of mind.
The clock strikes twelve.
Fawkes cocks her head.
I rise from my chair.
And look ahead.
I begin to pace,
Fearing my worst fear.
There’s no time left.
The day is here.
I have lived through the pain.
I have lived through the tears.
I have lived through the losses.
I have lived a thousand years.
The human-like figure enters.
And I stop pacing.
He smirks at me.
My heart is racing.
I raise my wand.
He does the same.
It’s either live or die.
This isn’t a game.
No words are exchanged.
Only one quick glance.
One curse and it’ll be over.
This is my last chance.
I have lived through the pain.
I have lived through the tears.
I have lived through the losses.
I have lived a thousand years.
Let me know what you think!!!!
~Rose | |
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07-21-2006, 11:05 PM
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|  Prongs' #1 FanPuffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: My Name Is Joanna c:
Posts: 2,491
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Brenner James
Fifth Year | Joanna Katherine ✞ Je crois ✞
OMG rose this ish awsome!! it is i Joanna...
__________________ I'm Sorry For The Long Absence! </3
Is It Just Enough For You To Breathe? I'm Begging!
Is It Not Enough To Have Just Me?
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07-22-2006, 02:09 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Joanna!!! I didn't know you changed your username!!! How are you????!!! *huggles*
'Nother poem about Luna Lovegood...
Unsuspected Admirer
I saw your blonde hair from across the room.
I was standing in a corner holding my broom.
You were sitting in chair flipping through your precious magazine.
I thought you looked more beautiful than any queen.
The deepness of your eyes made me want to talk.
But when I was near you, I couldn't even walk.
Your strangness and your beliefs are in my dreams.
When you commentate quidditch, it's odder that it seems.
Once you talked about the sky and even weather.
No one could ever put it any better.
Well, now I have to say goodbye for this time.
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07-22-2006, 02:14 AM
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| Prongs' #1 Fan Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: My Name Is Joanna c:
Posts: 2,491
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Brenner James
Fifth Year | Joanna Katherine ✞ Je crois ✞
i am pretty good!! well i think that was sweet!! but me being a Nevill Luna shipper....can you make one for my ships??
They are:
Harry-Ginny
Ron-Hermione
Draco-Ginny
Neville-Luna
Cedric-Cho
__________________ I'm Sorry For The Long Absence! </3
Is It Just Enough For You To Breathe? I'm Begging!
Is It Not Enough To Have Just Me?
I'm Trying To Be The Person That You Need<3
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07-22-2006, 02:17 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Yesh, I can!!! And Thank you!!!!!! I'll start at the top of the list and work my way down starting now!!!!!!! | |
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07-22-2006, 03:07 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Here is the Harry - Ginny one:
This Far
Red hair, green eyes
I don’t want to say goodbye.
Sweet hug, long kiss
I only could imagine this.
Black hair, lightning scar
Your love as brought me this far.
Brave soul, great pride
I never want to leave your side.
Let me know what you think!!
~Rose | |
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07-28-2006, 03:11 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun  Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
Posts: 26,363
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maisie Travers
Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
Wow. You are very amazing Miss Rose!!! Told ya I would come and read them. I love them!!! | |
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07-28-2006, 03:15 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Ashlyn!!!! *tacklesglomps* Welcome to the very first Rose's Rhymes!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
I'm working one your other ships, Joanna!
~Rose | |
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07-28-2006, 03:18 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
Posts: 26,363
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maisie Travers
Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
Welcome!!!I mean Thank you. Hehe. Maybe during the school year when I need to do a poem for LA, you should help me. I'm horrible at LA and I was surprised when I got a good mark this year!!  More more more!!!! *giggles* | |
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07-28-2006, 03:23 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Rose
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Hehe! English is one of my favorite subjects!!! I think reading Dr. Suess helped a bit... lol and thanks again!
~Rose | |
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08-02-2006, 01:27 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Rose
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Here ish one!!!
Touched
A mop of ginger hair walked on bye.
Oh, how I longed to mutter a nice 'Hi'.
He sat next to me with a long sigh.
And I was reminded of all the times I cried.
The graceful girl next to me stood up to leave.
How could I have been so naive?
I reached out my hand for her to retrieve.
She touched mine; I couldn't breathe.
What do you think??
~Rose | |
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08-06-2006, 08:21 PM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Indiana
Posts: 5,861
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kendra Lupin
Seventh Year | Starving College Girl
pretty cool, although poetry isn't my style this is still really nice
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08-10-2006, 02:28 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Thank you! I don't think you were the one a dared, though... Thanks anyway!!!!
This next poem is featured in my very own fan fic, When the Magic Dies. You can check it out... the link is in my siggy... lol Self promotion rocks!! jk jk
Hope you enjoy!!!!!
Think of Her
Loud music always blaring
My eyes are use to always staring
My hope is shattered
My heart is battered
And I only think of her
A hurtful reminder
I never minded her
Out the door, into the cold
The path is worn out and old
And I only think of her
The scene is pure white
But the moment isn't right
Walking on ice is quite a trip
Surprisingly, I did not slip
And I only think of her
With a 'watch out' and fall
Maybe my heart isn't broken after all
I grin and smile
It's been a while
And I only think of hope.
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08-10-2006, 02:31 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maisie Travers
Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
OMG Rose!!! Poor Oliver!! *shnuggles* He can have me if he can't have Cam...  Me love your poems....
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08-10-2006, 04:33 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Thank you, Ashlyn!!!! I'll keep that in mind... lol
*huggles teh Ashlyn*
Thanks!
~Rose | |
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08-11-2006, 06:00 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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This ish one that also goes with When the Magic Dies.
All I Need
You could be my heart, my song
You could be my right, my wrong
You could be my hope, my light
You could be my life, my sight
You could be all I need
You could be my thoughts, my soul
You could be my energy, my toll
You could be my inspiration, my wish
You could be my dreams, my kiss
You could be all I need
You could be my smile, my tears
You could be my faith, my years
You could be my joy, my fate
You could be my love, my hate
You could be all I need
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08-13-2006, 02:29 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
Posts: 26,363
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maisie Travers
Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
*sniffle* I love that one!! It made me cry... I'm not kidding.. came to tears and everything... *steals* I'm so asking Niky to see if she can out it on avvies.. then I can proudly sport your poems and story everywhere I go And it sin't self promotion *runs around in circles* More pretty Poems!!! | |
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08-13-2006, 03:38 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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OMG, Ashlyn!!!! A siggy?!?!?! I love you!!!!!
Next poem ish going to be dedicated to you!!!!!!! Promise!
~Rose | |
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08-13-2006, 03:40 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maisie Travers
Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
Yeah!!!! I'm changing my siggy right now Thank you for dedicating it to me!! I feels special  I finally read your avvie... *dies* Rascal!!!! *luffs on the pretty avvie*
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08-26-2006, 09:31 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rose
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Thank you, Ashlyn! Love ya!
Here's a new one. It is sad. And it is in Pansy's PoV. Sort offfish
Hear My Dead Voice
Being threatened, I hid my outer bruises from view.
No one bothered to give me the time of day.
Speaking out, no one heard me cry for help.
Why would they? My family was perfectly fine…so they say.
Well, one night it got too out of hand.
My heart ceased to beat; I failed to breathe.
No longer could I defend myself from your powerful blows.
Too bad no one discovered the true me underneath.
Whistling, the wind blows through the cement stones,
Leaving an eerie sense behind.
Shining, the sun beams on my polished grave,
Reflecting my past name and forgotten lifetime.
My death was just another date on the calendar.
My life was just another one spent alone.
My dream was just another unreal fairy tale.
My name is just another one scratched into stone.
You probably do not even remember me.
Me, your own son, who died because of your choice.
I was too young to die; too young to live.
Now, hear my dead voice.
Last edited by halfbloodprincess92; 08-28-2006 at 01:17 AM.
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04-07-2007, 03:26 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: well...my nose was in the middle of DH, but I finished it, apparated here and idk where my nose is..
Posts: 248
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ambora
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I love the Dumbledore one!!
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