i checked out your thread!

This isn't one of my best and its a bit sad but its how i was feeling at the time

Help
I don't want to have these feelings,
I can't help what's in my heart,
Though I never saw this coming,
It must have been there form the start.
I know you felt like I did,
It wasn't too long ago,
But I was scared and walked away,
Too afraid to let it show.
I tingled when you touched me,
Put your hand near mine,
And now my heart beats faster
And I think of you all the time.
Sorry I had to tell you,
But I thought you felt the same,
Now you don't come near me,
Like the whole thing was a game.
Well that's all I have to say now,
I won't mention it after this,
But I know you feel like I do,
And it's me you'll always miss.

This is about losing someone, not necessarily through death.

Please.
Don't ever leave me,
Please stay by my side,
Please, never leave me,
Just stay by my side.
Please, you just have to,
You can't leave me now,
Please just stay with me,
Please just make one vow.
Cos I need you to hold me,
Please never let go,
Wipe up all my tears,
Please don't let them show.
Please don't leave, I need you,
Please don't go yet,
I need you to promise
That you'll never forget.
If there's a heaven,
Please wait for me there,
Why did you leave me?
My heart is so bare.

Wow. All this stuff seems like something I could have written...but didn't. Only better. *claps*. <That's for writing down what's in my head. It's such an elusive thing to catch. And you've got it. *coughreadMYthreadcough*. Yours are better than mine, but IDK...I like to hear what people have to say. About them.

Love that one! It sounds like one of my poems, about thinking the other person felt the same, then after finding out, they stay away. then hoping i didnt feel that way...

Yea, kinda sucks when that happens doesn't it

Bleeding Heart.

My bleeding heart,
It cries for you
Tears of blood
That soak me through.
Laying on the cold hard floor,
Letting everything pass me by,
Cos the whole world seems to hate me
No matter how hard I try.
My bleeding heart,
It screams for you,
Screams in silence
That can't break through.
Still laying on the cold hard floor,
Waiting for a hero to find me,
And rescue me from my broken dreams
But maybe fairy tails just cannot be.
My bleeding heart,
It bleeds for you,
Screaming and crying
For what you do.
My hero still hasn't found me,
My hopes are still in shatters,
I'm drowning in my nightmares-
My dreams are all in tatters.

it sounds like a song... that's awesome!!

Wow. That's kinda...sad. Does this just come randomly (and follow the thread title) or does it have a source? Cause well nevermind that I think everyone feels like that sometimes....erh...yeah it's good. Ha ha thanks for reading my thread. I feel much loved.

Just randomly, im loving your siggy <3

OK I just did this one, i was quite excited when I wrote it (makin the plans for going to see MCR woo!) but it turned out to be quite dark.

Drowning in my broken dreams
Choking on my fears
Take me from these nightmares
Save me from my fears.
What I can't see won't hurt me
Scratching at my eyes
Still haunted by reality
Please hear my silent cries.
Holding on to the nightmares
Reality is worse
I can't hold on much longer
Please save me from this curse.

it's not that dark. well, just a tad bit, but just the thought of reality scratching at you is kinda scary...

hehe *giggle*

Never
I'll be here till the end of time
Waiting to get you back
For what you did to me.
I'll never let go.

You said you'd do anything
Well would you die for me?
Rip out your heart for me?
The only thing you did was lie to me
And I'm never letting go.

You won't forget what you did
I'll never let you go
Forever mine, for all of time
Cos I'm never letting go
Chained to me with lock and key...
You'll never get away.

was that a waiting for revenge kind of poem?? you sounded kinda scary there! it's like, no way out, YOU'RE MINE!

Awww...those are...I don't know, sad, good, whatever...anyway, nice. :thumbsup:. And before I forget.... ....Intentional? Or subliminal?...

subliminal

That freaking rocks. Yeah when I'm writing my stuff there's nothing in mind but then I'll look at it and be like "there's something here that sounds like something else"...that's the best way for you to be influenced by something or someone: when you don't even realize it's happening. \m/ \m/ \m/ (<--yes I have three hands because I'm special)

lol, couldn't agree more =)

that last one I found quite scary, it sounds like I've been possessed or something and ive gone evil and won't let go of someone. Yikes.

The things I dream of won't come true,
I'm too scared to see them through.
I'll sit here on my **** all day
Because I care too much about what they say.
I should give the world the finger,
See what they say to that,
Do what the hell I want to
And see what they think of that.
But I don't think I could take the stress
Of my whole life crashing despite my best.

I loved that!!!!! It has such a punk rock vibe! (That's a good thing). Thumbsupthumbsupthumbsup.

I agree! Made me wanna say "YEAH!" woooooo.. That one was pretty cool!

tehe *giggle* thank you, thank you =) I like this one better cos its a bit longer lol and it talks about converse (oh yeah!)



Staring through my window
The world is staring back
I could go out and make my mark
But I'd rather just do jack.
My perfect, beat-up converse
Lead me through the street,
Stamping stars into the pavement
That seems to shine beneath my feet.
No one seems to care though,
They don't see what I can do
They say I have no future;
They haven't got a clue.
I'll make my mark to show them
Then I'll come back one day
And 'Hey **** you, I made it'
Is the only thing I'll say.


over and out.

I think you're writing about me, secretly. I'd rather just do jack, too. Plus I just like to say that. But yeah, I understand about no one seems to care and whatnot. Read this. I have a lot of feelings right now, being the end of my freshman year and one that didn't go so well, and all this confusion. :/. But yeah, good poem (again!) and I still think yours are better...

awesome. Hold up, when you say 'I still think yours a better' what do you mean? I don't have much to post, just a mini bit

Take me to that place you know
Cos I don't have a place to go
I don't want to leave you yet
But maybe I have to
I'll meet you there, don't ever forget.

I'd add more but it kinda sums up what I wanted it to say.

That's pretty cool. And I meant that I think you do a better job of expressing the feelings that I have such trouble with than I do...I'll meet you there/Don't ever forget...Hmm...I'll be there - keep in mind - I'll be there for you. keep it up.

OK *pretends not to be confused*

Ha ha yeah I thought of the song Poprocks & Coke with that line...yeah sorry I confused you.