Thanks very much!

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When my heart stops beating,
I don't want you to cry,
I won't ever leave you,
So don't say goodbye.

If you ever miss me,
Just look at the stars,
That's where I'll be waiting,
With wide open arms.

You will see me again,
But until that day,
I'll be there to guide you,
Every step of the way.

Look into my soul through my wide open eyes
Let your eyes burn through me, burn through the disguise.
Have your eyes found the truth? What words can't say
What I've been trying to tell you but I can't find a way-
I need you to guide me, take away my fears
Share my sadness, catch my tears.
I need to hear that you'd die for me
Love me forever till time's set free.
Give me everything and so much more
Tell me you'll love me till you breathe no more.
Or you could maybe tell me you love me too
Cos hopefully someday I'll say all this to you.

Unknown Soldier
Gun in hand, death in mind,
It's victory I wish to find.
Fighting for country, mum's so proud,
I've shot 10 men into the ground.
I'm a hero now, but in nobody's eyes,
Nobody saw me or heard my cries.
Head in hands, my wound in mind,
Unknown soldier they'll soon find.

Shattered
My shattered hopes, they cut me deep
They slash my dreams so I can't sleep.
But everything will be alright,
Cos someday soon I'll say goodnight.
And my tattered dreams, they'll come to me,
Unbind my dreams and set me free.
{Unfinished.}

No readers, eh? oh well.... PLEASE READ!!

Green Eyes

What was the colour? You're fading fast,
You're no longer my future, but in my past.
I can remember your hair, I still see your face,
But your eyes, with you, are without a trace.
Now I remember, they were a sparkling green,
They were the strangest eyes I'd ever seen.
But now your just a memory, you're not coming back,
Your image fades quickly, my mind goes black.
Even now, I miss you, with all my heart and soul,
And no-one in the whole wide world can fill the gaping hole.
My life will be spent waiting, for my spirit to be free,
Then I'll join you in our Paradise, your green eyes, you, and me.


Danz_angel x

Sit here staring at the wall,
Only my shadow to talk to,
I can't think of a word to say,
But there's only my shadow to talk to.

Nobody hear to say a word,
Only my shadow to talk to,
Your in my head but not with me,
And there's only my shadow to talk to.

Still I'm staring at the wall,
Still only my shadow to talk to,
Nobody's listening cos I don't say word,
There's only my shadow to talk to.

I'm sure you can all manage to find a word to replace those in bold

Truck em all.

I know truck all about Politics
But I know our 'leaders' are a bunch of kicks.
'Let's make peace n shoot em all,
Blow the truckers up, we'll be standin tall.
For peace we'll kill and for virginity, truck,
Blah blah blah blah the record got stuck.'
Truck the dumb @s$ leaders, truck everythin they say,
Truck the twats who vote for them, we'll lead ourselves our way.
'I don't give a truck about innocent lives,
Bombs away is what I say, hope you all survive.'
Well 'bombs away' aint meant for me,
Cos I lead myself,from guilt I'm free.
Truck the dumb @s$ leaders, truck everythin they say,
truck the twats who vote for them, we'll lead ourselves our way.

Sorry I'm not what you wanted,
Sorry this is all I'll be,
Sorry I'm not perfect,
Sorry perfect isn't me.
Sorry I don't blend in well,
Sorry I'm not you,
Sorry for not acting,
Sorry for being true.

I'm sorry that I'm a coward,
I'm sorry for the pain,
I'm sorry their words cut deeply,
I'm sorry I'm crying again.
I'm sorry I have to leave you,
I'm sorry I have to go,
I'm sorry that you'll miss me,
I'm sorry it has to be so.

Please dig my grave,
Please dig it deep,
Don't let the angels hear me weep.

I love your poems. i can tell your writing from your heart, at least it seems like you are.

thanks a bunch

OMG, These poems Rock!!!
I'm really into writing down what i feel, and i guess we're feeling the same!!!
This is so good!
LOl, I'm printing all of them!!!!!!
Write more!!!!!!!!!
TY!!!
Tina

Thank you thank you thank you Here's another I just did so no fine tuning as of yet. (Note that there are no comma's, just read it straight through)

Insane Mind

There's a stain on my hands and it wont go away
There's a voice in my head and its there everyday
And it whispers things no one ever must know
And I beg on my knees but still it wont go
So I'm rinsing my hands to get rid of the stains
So the voices Im hearing will give up the games
But they wont go away they wont leave me alone
But they do say your name and they do hear me moan
Then I'm down on my knees and I beg and I plead
Then the voices get louder and my hands start to bleed
Because I'm biting my hands to rid me of the stain
Because your blood won't budge and nor will the pain
I'm sorry I hurt you but I meant what I said
I'm sorry your hurting me even now that your dead
It hurts me to say it but nothing was ever more true
It hurts me to love you and I truly hate you.

I just found these two I forgot to post:

My Shadow
Sit here staring at the wall,
Only my shadow to talk to,
I can't think of a word to say,
But there's only my shadow to talk to.

Nobody hear to say a word,
Only my shadow to talk to,
Your in my head but not with me,
And there's only my shadow to talk to.

Still I'm staring at the wall,
Still only my shadow to talk to,
Nobody's listening cos I don't say word,
There's only my shadow to talk to.


Shattered
My shattered hopes, they cut me deep,
They slash my dreams so I can't sleep.
But everything will be alright,
Cos someday soon, I'll say goodnight.
And my tattered dreams, the'll come to me,
Unbind my chains and set me free.
To a place I saw when my mind was sane,
Where no one suffers fear or pain.
That's where I'll go when the chains unbind,
To the unknown place in my unreal mind.

why do poetry make everything sound sad?

The second one nearly made me cry. It's beautifulm and you are really talented!

Wow. I just adore yoru poems. My favourite would have to be the first one, so gentle and sweet.

Keep it up, your doing GREAT!

thanks alot I've got nothing yet, but here's some little bits that came to me but were dead ends.


Pain makes it better,
Heals the mind,
Focus on the bleeding,
To all else I'm blind.

It's not that I dislike you, I'd call it hate.

I'm so happy I feel like cryin,
I can't explain it but it seems im flyin.

I'm the one they call death,
The one they all fear,
I'm creeping up closer,
I'm ever so near.
A moment they waste,
One forward goes me,
It's like grabbing at water,
Time trickling free.

Fly way above the highest star,
leave this world behind,
That's where I go when I close my eyes,
Reality of the mind.

hehe

Oh and can anyone who visits give me a rating pretty please? (be kind )

these are great i love 'behind the smile' and 'do not cry'

The emotion you put into these poems is brilliant.

Thanks a bunch!! This one's kind of about a secret ambition that I dream about but I don't realy want to share with everyone...

Fairy Tale

No I don't know what the **** it is
That makes my head ****ed up like this
But I can't sit still and I just can't rest
And there's the weirdest feeling inside my chest.
There's something I really want to do
But I don't think my dreams ever will come true
Cos I'm so scared that I might just fail
I'm never gonna get my fairy tale.
It's just not me to do these things
I can't be free and stretch my wings
But in my dreams I'm flying high
And I don't let life just pass me by.
Back to reality and I'm still just me
I'm still not letting my dreams go free
Cos happy ever after's just not my thing
I don't want a Prince Charming or the crown of a King.

no readers *tear*

they r gud..........

No-one can see my efforts,
However hard I try,
They only see what's wrong,
The good stuff passes by.
Am I on my own here?
I don't need your map,
I just want your support,
I've had enough of the crap.
You've always said you'll support me,
It's my choice what I do,
But I'm not doing what you wanted,
So all the support is through.
Well this is my **** life,
And I'll do what the hell I want to.
I only want to make you proud,
If only you could see
That I'm trying my best here
Why can't you let me be?
I'm not too great at anything,
But you could still be proud,
Average might not be high standard,
But my best should be allowed.
Well this is my **** life,
And I'll do what the hell I want to.
So, I didn't get what you thought,
At least I did my best,
That should be good enough
But I didn't pass your test.
No matter how hard I try,
I'll never make you proud,
I'll never be perfect,
And imperfect just isn't allowed.
Well this is my life,
And I'll do everything I want to.

wow, ur poems are cool. Most of them are short, but sweet. I like it!

Hey nice poetry its awesome. Well keep posting. Later. ~Paige~

hmm... i don't think i posted these. maybe i did. oh well

Memories
Taking over my mind,
These thoughts in my head;
Shredding my sanity,
Those voices I dread.
I don't want these words,
They're torturing me;
I don't want these pictures,
Be glad you can't see.
Memories are all I have
They're stalking my dreams
I can't close my eyes
For fear of the screams.

And a mini thing...

Not all wounds scar-
You can hurt inside;
Nothing can show it
But the tears you've cried.

whoa. dark. i feel it though... kinda like one of my poems. only one of them. *coughreadmythreadcough* hehe