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08-02-2003, 09:42 PM
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| | Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: The olympics, 4 Figure Skating, 2010, move over Sarah Huges and Sasha Cowen
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SOMETIMES
by: Quest4goldensnitch (Caitlin)
Sometimes when i cry,
no one sees my tears
Sometimes when i'm happy
no one sees me smile
Sometimes when my
heart is broken,
no one comes to mend it.
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more tomoro, but what do u think???  | 
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08-03-2003, 12:10 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Earth ( most of the time )
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Short, yet really good! :up: I think you should add more to that one, quest. Don't try and put "I'm laughing, but no one can hear it", though! You and I both know that would be totally false!   | |
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08-03-2003, 06:09 PM
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| | Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: The olympics, 4 Figure Skating, 2010, move over Sarah Huges and Sasha Cowen
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sometimes when
I fall no one comes
to pick me back up
Sometimes when
I laugh no one hears
my laughter.
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so on u Firebolt.
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08-04-2003, 04:08 AM
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| | Gnome
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Quote: Originally posted by quest4goldensnitch@Aug 3 2003, 05:16 PM sometimes when
I fall no one comes
to pick me back up
Sometimes when
I laugh no one hears
my laughter.
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so on u Firebolt. he, he! | |
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08-06-2003, 06:28 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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This sounds as if the person is invisible and unhearble,or just completely ignored.I'm not sure which.
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08-06-2003, 09:05 PM
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good and ineresting
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08-14-2003, 06:41 PM
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#7 (permalink)
| | Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: The olympics, 4 Figure Skating, 2010, move over Sarah Huges and Sasha Cowen
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I can't think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!1
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08-19-2003, 05:47 PM
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| | Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: The olympics, 4 Figure Skating, 2010, move over Sarah Huges and Sasha Cowen
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ok, heres a dirrfent poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
my prince
someday he will come,
his sward shining like the sun
he will rescue me from this tower,
hold me in his arms,
but only so an hour.
the sea
I look into the sea,
it is sometimes calm,
sometimes wild
and somtimes I
play in the water like a child.
the fish in it's waters
remind me of the people here on earth,
all unike, all differse
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08-24-2003, 08:02 PM
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#9 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Earth ( most of the time )
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hmm, very, um good! it's really good! i like the think about the prince with the sword. keep it up!  | |
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09-09-2003, 03:37 PM
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| | Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: The olympics, 4 Figure Skating, 2010, move over Sarah Huges and Sasha Cowen
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well, what do you think? :sorcererdragon:
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09-09-2003, 03:43 PM
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#11 (permalink)
| | Red Cap
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: The olympics, 4 Figure Skating, 2010, move over Sarah Huges and Sasha Cowen
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time
By: Quest
roses are red, violets are blue
and no matter what I love you
time passes fast, and love passes slow
but after it's done...
roses are still red, violets are still blue
and no matter what, I still love you.
dedacated to: MP3, (fireblot knows what I meen)
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