First ever peom; this is my poetry corner! hope you enjoy it



You sit there in a chair
I watch i wait
You turn around
I blush and smile and wave
you wave and roll your eyes
fighting always, trying to hide something
I'm here i wish to yell
I wish to tell her how i feel
But no, she is first in our year
And i am dead last
We are friends and this can we ever get past?
Also there is the looming fear
a trio, then a duet, then three solos?
My friendship cannot be wrecked by these feelings
i'll just grab my broom and fly away to the qudditch field
then keep on flying
until
i forget all about you

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My hands shake as i grip my wand
His scarlet eyes are glaring at me
"Today!" he calls "Today is your last night alive Potter!"
Every muscle in my body is tense.
I'm waiting to react
My reflexes are on edge
He smiles, raises his wand
I rais mine just as fast
"Avada Kedavra!"
"Expelliarmus!"
I'm dead, i think
A first year's spell against the most powerful dark magic on the earth
Dead, i think. No more Harry, no more me.
Shame that my mother's sacrifice came to this.
But then i see it!
Our wands are connected!
But how can this be
How can even the smallest amount of good match the largest amount of evil?
I struggle and gain more strength as my mum waves
I grow stronger as my father encourges me
"We can hold him off!" she cries
"To the portkey!" My dad screams
Our connection is broken and i grab cedric's body
And i am back, people staring
I am not proud of my deed
It was pure dumb luck i say
Why did an innocent boy have to be sacrificed through all this
Fate

Theyre great I dont know why you say that theyre not good, theyre brilliant!

Oh *hugs people with excitement* okay then, well i'll keep trying my best, i'm new at this 'poetry thing' and give me some pointers whenever you can. but only if you want... *people are looking at me strange as i hug them* lol.
Okay, deep breaths, i am going to try a rhyming poem. sorry if it's dreadful.

Gillyweed
Three stirs to the right
you squint at the board with all your might
Professor Snape is standing right there
wishing to see you fail
praying to see you fear
His putrid breath; breathing down your kneck
Your potions fizzes, bubbles, quick in the book you check
Nice, you think
You drop your wand with a desperate clank
Forgot a stir clockwise!
What a big surprise!
"I excpect an essay on what you have done wrong."
So that's what you'll be doing all night long
Stupid
Precise
Potions

okay guys, i'd be inspired to work harder if you commented... please! even criticism would make me happy!

Frills, lace, and girly cuffs
What could be worse?
I'm going with a girl that i dont even like
She suppreses a snicker as she sees my appearance
I avert my eyes
Pulling her through the doors
I see... Hermione?
With Viktor Krum?
Can't be true!
He's too old!
He's a Durmstrang!
He's... i've run out of exscuses now...
Leaving me with the raw truth...
I
Love
Hermione
Granger

This is a very strange poem... because i detest Draco yet i'm making a poem about him...


Beyond my sneers
Beyond my taunts
Can't you see i mean well
When you're daunt
I'm pureblood
She's a mudblood
So why do i get glares
When they see Hermione's tears?
It was the way I was taught!
Can't you see I'm caught
Between the bad and good world?
Harry Potter takes the fame
That is why i have to bring him shame
They're all honest intentions
Ingenius inventions.
And why do they have to say rude things about my girlfriend Pansy
She's sweet... somewhere. she can love! Can she?
So maybe you've made a mistake
When you see me again do a double take
And look at me differently.
See past my sneers and my taunts
To my inner being

HARRY POTTER


Harry Potter is grand
Harry Potter is great.
We love J.K Rowling
And Harry's fate.
We get lost
In a world of parchment and ink
When we get a new book
We can barely think.
How?
So how can we like something with characters ranging from nice to
vindictice
Yet we find her books strangely
addictive.
Put a HP book infront of my face.
And you've given me a portkey to a happier place.
Apcession?
Maybe.
Passion?
Yes.
I love Harry Potter
'Cuz it's the best!

Neville

Sweet brown hair
In perfect loose curls
A sweet and caring face
Top of the year
Smart as Granger
If Herbeology was the only subject
Caring; sparkling eyes
Eager to please
Wont hurt a fly
Has to cope
With his Mum and Dad
And his Gran; Snape;
and Draco.
Dont hurt my Neville.
You'll regret it
I know.
Because i'll stick with him through and through
Dont hurt my Neville
Never hurt my Neville!
He makes me happy when i am blue.

these are very interesting.... keep up the good work.

thanks for the comment! someone actually read them! okay, intersting good work shall continue! by the way guyz ive also began a fanfic titled *dun dun dun* "The Horibble Truth" not dun dun dun just the horibble truth ok! another one then!


Wands

Red oak?
Thin, whippy beech?
What suits you best.
One flick
And disaster could strike.
Catching Mr.Ollivander's shop
Alight.
You blush as he
Calmly
Puts out your fire.
He hands you another wand
Looks at you warily
As you
Flick
Sparks appear from the top of a
Birch 7 inch beauty
With the core
Knitted, created, made
Of a sphinxe's mane.
So there it is
Your wand.
Your comapnion for life
That will you get your through happiness
And strife.
Always keep your wand at ready.
Stand abrudtly when you hold it
Treat it with
Respect
Pride
Skill.

So many things
Will chase us.
Fate
Love
Hate
Grief
But there will always be a phoenix
Singing in your ear
There will always be a funny elf
Dancing and bringing cheer.
But there will also be thy fearsome dragon
Spiky horns and tail!
And Lord Voldemort
To kill without fail!
But if you just...
Think about it
The sadness
Grief
Happiness
Cheer
The grief might tower
The sadness tall
But I'd still rather
Put up with it all
For dancing elves
And singing phoenix
They shine the light like a bottle of
Felix.