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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
07-13-2004, 05:42 PM
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|  Queen PhoenixSnidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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|  Sickly Pale Brilliance
Thanks Leah  Your poems are nice too, so you have nothing to worry about.  :cat:  ~~~~~~~~~~~~ -- Sickly Pale Brilliance -- Paint yourself in the most vibrant colours Use that acid green and clash it against majestic purple Keep away from those darker shades (They make you look pale) Hang up your work in an exhibition Invite everybody to come; Let them awe at your breath-taking genius While collecting entrance fees behind their backs. It never was easier to get stinking rich. Buy even stronger turquoise and sunny yellow Make yourself another new identity Drip crimson red on your black heart Splash royal blue over your dead eyes Give it all a finishing touch with the gold brush. But, please, don't expect me to come. I refuse to spend my poor salary On lies that are sold as the truth. Cash is too hard to come by these days So understand that I won't waste it on you. You must be aware of the fact That I see through the façade Remember: I knew you before I knew myself And I have not forgotten all you are Is a smudged black and white drawing. You are as transparent as a ghost. But you don't haunt me (Not anymore) If I traced my finger over your paintings We both know the colours would come off I could give your audience the chance To see you in a new light If I tugged at the paper a bit We both know it would tear in two You are cheap, you are fake You are an imitation (Your lies are paper thin) It would take very little from my part To bring your carefully constructed multicoloured world down Aren't you afraid of that? I could wrench your tales apart if people listened And if I had the money to enter your exhibition of lies.
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07-24-2004, 11:13 AM
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| | Murtlap
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Germany
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Here, in my fantasy world
I can dream
I don't have to see destruction
I don't have to see despair
I don't have to see fight
It's shut away
I love this paragraph of yours. Thanx for the comments I really appreciate it. 
-Perfection doesnt always mean beauty.-
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07-24-2004, 04:40 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Thank you! 
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07-26-2004, 04:57 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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keep up the good work beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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07-26-2004, 05:03 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Pigfarts (on Mars)
Posts: 6,881
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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I really like your poetry it is really good. I was wondering if other people like me for instants could post some poems and get some feed back? well yeah your poems are really good. i like them
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07-26-2004, 10:38 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
Posts: 2,929
| Checkmate
Thank you both so very much! Yes, anybody can post poetry in this forum, Harry Potter related or not Here is another one, my most recent poem. I like it. Kinda.
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~~~~~~~~~~ Checkmate No, I have not figured it out yet I have problems when it comes to defining you. Things are usually kept in black or white But I'm unable to place you on a chess board. You are grey. And I can't fit you into my concept of this world. Where am I supposed to put you? You deny me the right to checkmate your king Because you have none. Ghostly shadows surround your pulsing aura Misty fogs obscure your shapes and forms You never say what is right You never say what is wrong Maybe you are just undecided. You frighten me; You are a silk-wrapped stone mystery.
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09-16-2004, 03:48 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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More to come soon =)
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09-19-2004, 01:52 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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yet another master piece by a great person keep up the beautfiful work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! leah mae | |
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10-25-2004, 02:37 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
Posts: 2,929
| Tequila Sunrise
-- Tequila Sunrise --
A dusky sky of rising dawn
Filters rays of light through carelessly closed blinds
The sun won't wait for your headache to pass.
She never really has, never will care
But maybe the moon does?
How would you know though,
When you only see what you want to
And opaque darkness is nothing to your eyes.
Learn to cope with being alone then
And remember for one of the next times:
Drinking simply does that to you.
Nothing tragic, it started off with a Lager
The glass was topped up a couple of times
By the waitress in the silver bikini.
Not that you looked at her of course
But she was more of a sun than I can ever be.
Why you ordered that drink in the first place still mystifies me
You hate the taste of beer.
But across the room, others were drinking it
And they seemed to be having fun, right?
As if a drink could swallow your misery, honey
You knew it was stupid to think so.
No drink of the world can do that, and you'll say I'm right
You learnt the hard way
And no light crept into the shabby darkness of the bar
Or into your mixture of Chardonnay, Vodka, Mai Tai
Strawberry Limes, and a shot of ginger Whiskey
Served in a long glass with ice, a green umbrella
And a slice of lemon.
Things didn't look any better
They stayed sour.
It was after your fourth shot of Tequila Sunrise
—Beautiful colours if I may say so—
That I thought it was enough and took you home.
I doubt you really noticed.
Everything was so dark, you told me;
I asked you if you ever marvelled at the beauty of a night sky.
Only the sun, you said.
But she has set for good now
She won't come back, no matter how often you drink
Tequila Sunrise in memory of those days.
I'm here for you, but you don't see me;
I don't have her shine.
I try and replace her the best I can
But all I can show you are pale moons
And small diamonds in the black sky.
So that's why you find yourself alone in bed
With a hangover, and nobody at your side.
It will give you time to think.
And when you get up,
I hope you'll find the note I left you
My phone number is on the back.
Call me if you want to meet me at sunset
When the moon comes up.
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