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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
04-29-2004, 07:45 PM
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|  Queen PhoenixSnidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Yup, another one up. I feel good about it. Uhm. Not about the poem as such, but I meana bout being able to post some more. As I said, I don't write poetry that frequently, I usually stick to fiction. Anyway, I wasn't depressed yesterday, but I still wrote. So it might be really bad. Okay, you're right, I should stop babbling away.  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Distance ~ Nightfall, moon rising The shadows grow, forming patterns in the dark Unreal they seem to me, like dreams They exist, but at the same time it's merely imagination. On a sunny day The distance doesn't seem as far As it does right now I want to feel you A person I barely even know; yet it seems Like I've read your every feature, Your every single trait, every single dream long ago. On a sunny day We could share some time and talk, Find the hidden secrets The matt full circle Lies in the velvety sky like a plump goddess Or rather like a streetlamp Surrounded by fluttering moths, blinded by the glow. On a sunny day A quiet walk in the park Just the two of us Some might call it dumb, Sheer madness, an obsession, blindness even Like moths forever encircling danger Others call it quite simply—love. On a sunny day When the distance is overcome When the moon has waned…
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04-29-2004, 09:58 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jan 2004
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wow, that poem just conveyed a message of quiet serenity, part of my first line in my ff. Lol...wonderful writing~ I haven't written a poem in so long *looks around guiltily*
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05-02-2004, 04:10 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
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Wow Rox. All of these are beautiful. You Go Girl! 
*cough*PhoenixandHendrikshipperalltheway*cough*
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05-02-2004, 09:07 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Nevereverland
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I like ur poeetry! post more soon!
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05-04-2004, 06:03 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Thanks all! I'll post more as soon as I have something, but at the moment I'm working on a few of my fics. If you're interested, I have a songfic posted here in the Poetry section, I think the name of the thread is simply 'songfics'. I've got one finished one in there, and one I've only just started posting  Check it out!
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05-07-2004, 05:01 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Haha. Hahahaha. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA.... Okay, uhm, I wrote a very stupid poem today in class. I guess I was bored (hence the title) and hungry (hence the words). Err. Yeah. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Boredom ~ Rhubarb crumble Apple pie Chocolate cheese cake: All mine. Raspberry sauce Hot and sweet Custard and cream: That's neat. Cappuccino And whipped cream Sprinkled cocoa: A dream. ((A little rhyme / And I send / This daft poem / To an end.)) mmmmm...I love cappuccino's.....
*sighs* Me too... (PS: Using another computer without MSN, if you're wondering why I'm still online :/ ... dunno how long I can continue this though lol...)
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05-07-2004, 05:19 PM
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|  Retired Headmaster Hippogriff HappyLoved by Kris & Touz Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2003
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It's been a while since I've posted in here so I thought I would just drop by and let you know that your work is wonderful! Please keep writing both your poetry and ff's. They are a welcomed distraction to the busy-ness of all the other things that go on around here.
Maybe someday I'll try my hand at a ff or even...*gasp*, poetry. 
Do you tutor?? 
Roxanne: *slaps you playfully* No, and I suck at poetry, so I don't think I'd be any good at teaching lol. I know theory (Literature class at school...), but I can't seem to be able to put it in practice. Well, as long as I only need to analyze people that can...
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05-09-2004, 11:09 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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~ Never Again ~ Swift as a shadow It takes over I'm drowning I'm aching It's gone. The happiness of the moment Lasted not long I'm attached I'm bound To loss. If you ever read this A secret well kept I'm torn I promise myself To never love again… Yes, we all have secrets that we keep...but to never love again....don't sell yourself so short. I'm sure he's out there now....waiting only he doesn't know what he's waiting on. Hee hee! Boy isn't he in for a surprise!
*laughs* I was in a weird mood when I wrote that, I guess it explains it. At the beginning I had 'To never fall in love again, but it didn't fit in so nicely with the rest, so I made it...harsher. 
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05-11-2004, 04:14 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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 ello tis me leah again ur poems are great never stop writing cause i know i wont lol well ill check back soon | |
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05-11-2004, 02:16 PM
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|  Official -()- Seeker*lives in a zoo*Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Up North
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Your poems are really, really beautiful...but somehow also so sad. They really touch my heart. Keep writing! :flowersmile:
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05-12-2004, 03:55 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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I try to write... happy ones, but somehow I can't do it. It's weird because I am one of the 'happiest' people I know, or at least on the outside. I'm rather optimistic and out-going and fun-loving, but I can't write happy poems 
I'll hopefully have some more soon.
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05-12-2004, 08:00 PM
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| Retired Headmaster Hippogriff HappyLoved by Kris & Touz Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2003
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ha...perhaps the sadness in your poems is how you are feeling subcontiously and in writing them (the sad poems) you allow that emotion to escape and deal with those feelings that you normally keep very private and enclosed. I know I tend to be outgoing and generally in a good mood but every now and then I think my inner self needs a port to vent. Usually in the form of ICE CREAM!
Seriously, your poems are very good but what do I know, I barely passed English Lit in high school....and don't even ask about my Humanities in college....Sheesh! 
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05-12-2004, 08:02 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Andover!
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Intense stuff... Keep it coming lol! Its Fantastic! | |
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05-15-2004, 03:08 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Thank you all for your comments. Dave--you've got a good point there. But I think it's better to use poetry than ice-cream ~~~~~~~~ ~ Lone Time ~ Quiet Peace Keeping to myself Thinking my thoughts. Excluded, Solitaire? Maybe. Calm Silence Only interrupted by the drip Of the coffee machine. Lone time. Outside Wind I see you pass by You ignore my presence Like you always do. Like you always will.
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05-16-2004, 07:22 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
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Your poems are absolutely amasing!!Keep posting them!
xoxo.Angel
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05-19-2004, 03:23 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Thank you!
:cat:  ~~~~~~~~~ ~ Circles ~ Been here before Close my eyes This must be a déjà-vu I've felt this before Been hurt before Memory It was you, it always is Should have learnt before Been void before Emotions Put my trust in you again Done it all before Circles Endless rings Repeating patterns Waves on the water Clouds in the sky above Seen it before Heard it before Felt it before I need to get away from you.
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05-21-2004, 04:52 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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ello again love tis me leah and of course your poems are really good i tend to write poems about whatever im feeling at the time happy sad but when i first started to write i wrote alot of poems about finding my true love so go figrue everyone has there own style whatever floats your boat love just keep on writing oh and btw ive posted somemore poems so please read ok bye now leah mae | |
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05-23-2004, 05:21 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Thanks! I like your poems very much as well, I just haven't had much time to reply. And as I have a few wonderful tests coming up, I guess it's gonna stay that way for a while... :/
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05-24-2004, 10:04 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Oh dear, double posting. Tsktsktsk.
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~ Illusional ~
Freedom calls
Through the touch of wind on bare skin
Through the pearls of rain on rose-coloured cheeks
Paints a sketch of eternal delight
Tentative lines and smudged images
Freedom binds
Through the belief in absolute control
Through the thought of ruling one's own world
Shatters the dreams of individuality
Fragile bubbles of transparent glass
Freedom is only a word
For something nobody has ever experienced
Freedom is only a phrase
That nobody understands, yet all claim as true
Freedom is only a lie,
An illusion for broken minds
And we all fall for it.
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06-15-2004, 05:30 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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very good my love keep writing leah mae | |
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06-19-2004, 09:33 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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~ Captive ~
A rush of colours dances in front of my weary eyes
Twisting and turning in dizzy circles
Rainbows fading to black
(Whirls, whirls, whirls)
And I turn back to my cell; I see it all
Hallucinations and lies
At my tender age, my spirit has given up the fight
Long ago, I stopped believing in miracles
When the world became dirty
(Broken, I'm broken)
And glowing beauty paled, proving itself as a mere
Temporary sight
A decayed shell holds me captive, my body hides ruins
Soul imprisoned by a cage of icicles
Heart long torn from the pain
(The everlasting tension)
And mending it would be as futile as constructing
Reality from drawings
I am a prisoner in my own territory
Battling invisible forces in my own land
And as it crumbles away beneath my swollen fingers
I realize—
I need someone with a clear eye
With a free mind
To break me free
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06-23-2004, 07:30 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Uh-oh, I'm double posting. Well, I'm really sorry about it, but I don't want to edit the post above, because this poem just needs a seperate post. Well, I went to bed last night with my head spinning, and I couldn't get this line out of my head: 'And I love to watch you fall... And I love to watch you fall...' It just wouldn't go away. And this morning on the bus and in history, during English and maths, I got the poem written. So i'll just bring it on. :unsure:
:cat: ~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Twisted ~ (Are you sore yet?) So there you lay on the cold stone floor I believe you tripped over my foot, didn't you? It was sticking out a little more than necessary… I could ask you what the world's like from down there But, you see, I already know From all the times you let me stumble… It's my turn to play now, my dear Now it's my turn to hurt. And I love to watch you fall, time after time Love your hurt, your obvious pain Your loss, your ache, your bruises big and small Your ugly scars from the deeper, more serious wounds Oh, they're invisible to most, don't try to search for them Nobody sees the marks left behind on your immortal soul Can you feel it shattering yet? Today, finally, is payback day. Revenge is sweet, or so I've been told And good it does taste on the tip of my tongue With a touch of bitterness, the tiniest tinge… I'll bear it for your sake, my dear. Revenge on you, I will have Even if it is the last thing I do, Retaliation for all the times my hands Were bound behind my back. All that makes you bleed has me smile All that tears you up becomes my power, my strength And you're becoming a good actor I enjoy what you offer, enjoy the show Are you sore yet? It hurts, doesn't it; it's not that much fun When you're the one enduring the pain But you should have thought of that before. I don't know about you, but I'm starting to like this game And I think we'll continue playing a little while longer. Your burning anger soothes my thirsty soul and Your flaming wrath tickles my defences, that's all— You can't penetrate through them anymore, I won't let you. Nevermore will I be your toy, my dear I play with you now. Are you longing for release yet? Oh no, I don't think so; it's too soon You never showed me the kindness to stop When I was falling apart under your sharp tongue. And I won't hold it against you anymore Because I'm only starting to appreciate The fun your torment brings The fun mine must have been, too.
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06-25-2004, 12:04 AM
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| | Firecrab
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Wow.... Twisted is amazing! I love the variation in the words, and your metaphors. Keep writing.
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06-29-2004, 10:22 PM
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| Queen Phoenix Snidget
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<I>Thank you very much. *bows* Stupidly enough, I showed my Mum that poem, and now she's worried about me :/ ... I dunno what to say. I may write kinda twisted poems, but eh... well, weird. Maybe she'll get over it <IMG class=inlineimg title=">_ </I>
:cat: ~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Chestnut Gleam ~ Pitiless, dark tunnels, cold, and void of light They are matt, your eyes, and full of darkness. An empty façade that you must uphold day and night But to night, your entire life has turned… Take a look at what you've become. You are tough, and you have to be in your new ways. Emotions, such as friendship, fear and love Only make you stumble and fall these days And it costs too much to get back up again… But you've fallen for their lies. To small slits, your eyes have morphed "All the better to see you," your claim As you squint around this damp and dusty loft. Find the suspicious characters, find them… You've forgotten your almond-shaped splendour. But in my memory— And they can't take that away from me— I remember your beautiful eyes And their chestnut gleam.
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07-13-2004, 04:33 AM
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| | Streeler
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wow one day i hope to write like you darn your good hun kepp it up sorry i havent replyed in a while got in a bit o trouble so i hope to read more soon leah | |
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