Wow, thanks so much! I like the Draco one a lot too. Being a Draco fan and all...

hi there fortune_cookie! i just finished reading all of your poems and i think they're all great! i love your James Potter poem... expressive

i'll be checking here for your updates :cheers:

Thanks! I will post another poem soon, I think

Sorry it took so long to update! But finally a poem is here. It's another non-rhyming poem..this time from Tonks' point of view. Please tell me what you think!

Fading

I’m ever so slowly fading
Fading
Fading
Into this dark world
Is there any light?

It’s not only my hair,
Which has turned a mousy brown
Where it used to be bubblegum pink
It’s not only my voice,
Which has turned soft and distant
Where it used to be full of zest

I cannot stop thinking of you
Of your soft, deep eyes
Of your quiet being
Of your strong heart

I know you don’t love me
You cannot possibly know how I feel about you
Are you blinded?
Are you uninterested?
Are you too pained to see that someone loves you?

When will you figure this out?
When will you realize that I won’t love any other person than you?
When will you love me in return?

Remus, the truth is,
You’re not too old for me
Not too boring for me
Not too weak for me.
You are perfect for me.

OMG! Cookie! I had no idea that you wrote poetry. Your poems are absolutely wonderful. I love the Tonks and Draco one and of course the Gryffindor poem!

Hee hee...yes, I adore writing poetry. Thanks so much! Those are my favorites too.

Wow, I just saw my last post, and I thought that it's about time I put up another poem! Here's a short little couplet. Enjoy, and please post your comments!

Fleur Delacour

She waltzes into the Great Hall
Being gawked and stared at by all

Her silvery-blondish hair flows
How it does that, nobody knows

All they know is she is striking
And this is much to her liking

Instantly jealous are the girls
Who’d like nothing more than to hurl

As for the boys, they’re hooked at once
They could care less if she’s a dunce

Curtseying in a perfect way,
She then sits down without delay

The long speech starts but however,
All eyes are on Fleur Delacour.

This is a poem that corresponds with my fanfic, Flying High(Sa13+). It's from Oliver to Grace.

Dear Grace,

I just wanted to let you know
How much you mean to me
You make me feel like smiling,
Dancing,
Shouting,
For joy

You are beautiful inside and out
And for that you’ve forever grasped my heart
You have it all;
No one else
Can take me away from you.

I’ll do my very best to protect you,
Please you
And love you
My efforts will not be in vain,
I can promise you that.

We’ve spent so much time together
And laughed so hard at times
My mind can’t stop thinking of you, because
You’re my dream come true.

Yours always,
Oliver

just came from your fic...

aww, soo cute, I love it!!!

~Amy~

Decided to read this from your FIC and i love it! It's awesome!

Thank you for your comments, both of you.

Wow! It's about time for another poem. Why not some HBP?

Felix Felicis

Are you feeling lucky?
Are you feeling brave?
Change a day-turned-mucky
With felix as your slave!

Don’t use it playing sports,
Because it’s just not fair
That way no one will hurt
And no one’s hopes you’ll tear.

Felix is a good friend
But don’t drink it too much
Don’t go down the deep end:
Don’t look like you’re a drunk!

Just drink a few gold drops
Everything will go right
With a cherry on top
All the way till the night.

This poem is based on inferences I’ve made, and I’m sure you’ve made, from Ron and Hermione’s relationship in the books and movies. This, like my James/Lily poem, is free verse.

Ron’s Secret Thoughts about Hermione

Do you see me?
Do you think of me?
Do you love me?

I’m too simple for you,
too low for you,
too ordinary for you.

You need someone complex,
Someone wise,
Someone extraordinary.

You don’t see me.
You don’t think of me.
I know you cannot possibly love me.

Hermione’s Secret Thoughts about Ron

Do you see me?
Do you think of me?
Do you love me?

I may seem too complex for you,
too clever for you,
too extraordinary for you.

You need someone simple,
Someone adoring,
Someone ordinary to most, but not to you.

You don’t see me.
You don’t think of me.
I know you cannot possibly love me.

aww Cookie! I love your updates ... the Tonks one is so cute for Ron and Hermione is awesome!!! Love them all

I love your poems...especially the Slytherin ones, and the Ron/Hermione one. "yes: Keep them coming!

~Alanna

Hey Lala! Thanks for reading!

Thank you, Alanna! *huggles* And thanks for the user note too!

This poem is in honor of all my fellow Draco-is-ultimate-hotness fans.

Draco Malfoy’s Swooning Power

His cold, blue eyes sweep through the room
His slim face as pale as the moon.
A scowl is etched onto his face
A look of torment and disgrace
Yet he still causes girls to swoon.

Slicked back and blonde is Draco’s hair,
Causing us girls to gape and stare
Does he notice? We do not know
But if he does, he doesn’t show
No one can hide from his death glare.

There’s a Quidditch match about to start
You Slytherins will do your part;
You have the great seeker, Draco,
Who is sure to be on the go
When he looks up, it warms our hearts.

Rich, superior, full of pride
Is what Draco is like inside
Don’t mess with him; he’ll get revenge
He will hurt you; he won’t defend
So by his rules you must abide

The final question that I ask
Is “why in Draco do we bask?”
So stop and think and ponder this
About this boy we’d like to kiss.
The explanation is my task.

We like Draco ‘cause he’s no fool
His beautiful face makes us drool
He is a complex character
Though others he likes to deter.
Basically, we love him; he’s COOL!

This is the first task of the Triwizard Tournament from Harry’s perspective. It’s, again, free verse.

First Task

My heart is beating
Throbbing
Palpitating
I can hear shouts
An occasional roar
And cheers
Why did I have to be last?
Why couldn’t I have been first to go?
This is doing nothing for my jittering nerves
I can hardly bear it
The minutes feel like hours
Finally, I step into the sunlight
Taking a deep breath,
I calm my shaking body
My muddled head
My weak heart
I face the Horntail
Look into its savage eyes
Everything passes me in a blur
I only remember soaring
Feeling the wind on my face
Something sharp pierces my skin
It penetrates hard
The blood doesn’t stop
I will myself to press on
With a final swoop,
I nab the golden egg
My prize never looked so dazzling before
As I hold it up
I hear the same loud applause
Then I know that I’ve completed my first task
One down
Two more to go.

these poems are good

Thanks!

Cookie! I just finished your latest poems... I luff the one about Draco. You should write some more. Definitely!

luv yah!

Thanks for the commet, Lala!

Here’s another one of the poem formats I’m experimenting with, called a diamante. The outline is as follows:

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

The subject of this poem is contrasting Cedric Diggory and Draco Malfoy (two very different personalities. As you see, the poem starts with a word but ends with an antonym, or opposite, of the word.)

Cedric Diggory
kind, humble
giving, understanding, daring
dark-haired, Hufflepuff, light-haired, Slytherin
conniving, intimidating, bullying
mean, bitter
Draco Malfoy

thats awesome! we were just doing those types of poems in school . . but i stink!! lol, anyway, i really luv these poems, you shud definitly keep at it!!! i especially like the one about Ron and Hermione's feelings about eachother, that was so nice!!!!

This poem is called a cinquain. It follows this pattern:

Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

So, here goes my poem about dementors:

Dementors
Dark, menacing figures
Roam around, draining happiness
Coldness and hopelessness floods them
Guards of Azkaban

It’s kind of odd, I think, but I did it just for the fun of it You know, just to try something interesting and new. Just to warn you, I may be experimenting with more types of poetry.

Here's a lively beat...

Beauxbatons lines are in blue, while Durmstrang lines are written in red.

Beauxbatons and Durmstrang

We are gorgeous,
We are stylish
We are graceful
We are polished.

We are intense
We are sturdy
We are strapping
We aren’t wordy

We are wear silky things
With a blue hue
Complete with a hat
As well as shoes

We are dressed in furs
From the head to toe
With a staff on hand
We can defeat foes

Hogwarts is okay,
But does not compare
To our lovely school
And we belong there.

Hogwarts is quite fine,
A school with big hearths
We can warm ourselves
The moment we berth

The students are kind
Which is good for us
Let’s work together
Yes, it is a must.