When all has failed Dont Give up
Think of the rain that holds you in your place
Also Think of your good times and forget the past
listen to these words of Truth and Love,
to find the faith inside..

I guess its ok could you rate it 1-10>

:ike it?

I don't like it...........I like it a lot!!!!10

Here's something I've been working on...

You words are like poison
They take away my senses
You look at me like
Life has no consequenses


And I can't seem to go on.... Will you guys please help me???

I dunno short poems like that can have powerful meanings. I think it's fine just by itself

All right... then I'll just leave it as it is! Thanks

I made this poem for Luna Lovegood.

Outcast

Everywhere I go,
people point and
laugh at me. My
oddness,my clothes,
everything that I show.
My personality,my fashion
laughing at that I think is
their passion. I'm normal
jsut like everyone else,
you laugh at me because I'm
different,but I laugh because
you are all the same.

That's awesome..

Here's one I made today...

Free.

Hope fills me up inside
There is no need to hide
I finally broke free
I am all that I can be
No longer under your spell
It's just a nightmare from hell.

Here's my Luna Lovegood sonnet from my other forum!

You won't accept me
I don't understand why
I wanna be free
Instead I continue to cry

So I am different who cares
I'm still the same as you
I have feelings that no one hears
No one believs I am true

The words stab deep inside
You may not realise it but it hurts
I feel like just trying to hide
As the tears silently pour

I wanna friend that's all I ask
Is it that difficult of a task

Speechless.

A big black wall
I feel so small
There's no way back
Of spirit I lack
I want to get out
But can not shout
I'm going speechless
Swallowed by darkness.

What do you guys think????

i miss you my dear friend
you are off in another land
you are there
and i am here
i ponder on what you are doing now
while i am sitting here on the ground
i miss you Julia
our friendship will never end
its a everlasting gobstopper my friend
oh dear how i miss you so
while i am sitting here
all alone
you had to move and leave me here
the dread is creeping closer
and my fear is growing stronger
i wish you could be with me
we could run away
and stay astry
what are we now
a little speck in the dust
i miss you Julia
very much


this is a poem of how my BFF moved away! :unsure: i hope you like it

Well I think you guys can tell what I'm writing about here...

xxxxxxx

He makes me feel weak
His guidance I seak
He completes me
We are forever to be
I am in love
It is like heaven above

I don't really know what to say about this poem:

A hole in my heart,
A big gaping mass.
It shattered to pieces,
Like fine thin glass.
This could not be right,
This could not be true.
My throat was tight,
That December day, 2002.
As I stared into the casket,
Memories flashed by.
She had once put eggs in my basket,
But that was before she had to die.
But the memory that stood out,
Was just the past day.
I had screamed, cried, and shouted,
Like a horse stuck in clay.
Six bullets in her body,
Two in her chest.
My step-dad was naughty,
The doctors tried their best.
If I could hold her one more time,
That would be enough for me.
She was beautiful, sweet, and kind,
I'll miss you, mommy....

I hope you like it....please tell me what you think...
Oh, and your poems are awesome Baby Norbert and Gymchic321!
wish i could write like that....

Oh thats really good... It reminds me of my friend Mads... he died in 2002... That is really really good...

thanx, but i still think yours is better...i just wanted to know what people thought.....other than my teacher...

sry about your friend....

Thanks... and sorry about your mum...

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Where are you?
I miss you
I hate you
I love you
I wish it was me and not you...

I dedicate this to the man who never knew he was the only one...and probably never will...to the man who will never know how dearly I hate him and how terribly I love him, to the man that sparked that first fire deep in my heart.
Fire Eyes

Your eyes
They glow with a firece intensity
Watching me
Watching me fall.
You know me
I can tell; I can see
How can you say you don't
When you've just met me once before?
I put a guard up
I put it up so no one could penetrate
Deep into the locked gates of my depth
But you do it easily
Smoothly
Like fire through water
Like fire through ice
You mystify me
You hold the key
To lover's caresses
And sweet melody
And me.
Shall I?
Your eyes invite, offer, tempt
What only cna be given
If I keep it out of reach
And do not let my friends see.
Black seduction and red silk pillows, I think.
But there is more in your mind
Than there will ever be
In me.
Fire eyes, you frighten me
Like flames licking the walls
Coming closer ever closer
Trapping me.
You smell my fear
And excite in it.
We share a glance, a look
But the fire burns
And I must turn away
Else you would feel my longing
Confused desire
Repressed want for you.
Your eyes
They glow with a fierce intensity
Watching me
Watching me fall
For you.

I had a sudden burst of inspiration looking out of my wingdow seeing a wind hover over the woods next door the other day:
Higher, higher , higher still.
I soar through the air,
Teasing the ground that will never claim me.
I am a Kestrel, Lord of the skies,
King of my territory.
Hovering for a second on silent wings,
I dive sharply, plummeting towards the ground.
The earth welcoming my fall,
The ground that will not claim me.
Turning swiftly,
I alight on a tree and survey my kingdom.
It's field sewn together with rows of hedges and trees,
Like an autumn coloured quilt.
Fields of corn shaking hands with the wind,
As it waves in the breeze.
Tree leaves murmur and whisper,
As they sway from side to side.
Amber orbs flare as they spy a movement,
One life to sustain another.
With a renewed burst of energy,
I lift to the skies once more.
The Sun beating down on my back,
Casts the shadow of death on my quarry.
Falling, plummeting, diving,
Like the arrow flying towards the bullseye.
My target.
A peircing cry,
Disturbs crows from their roost in a nearby tree.
Higher, higher, higher still,
I soar through the air.
Teasing the gound that will never claim me.
I am a Kestrel, Lord of the skies,
King of my territory.

How can you guys make your poems so long??? Mine seem so awfull short next to yours!!!!!

Great poems!
They are not awful! Your poems are fantastic!

Well thank you but my poems are just really really short...

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You turn away
Why don't you stay?
With you by my side
There's no need to hide
With you I can be myself

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I'm going to cry
Why do you say goodbye
I'd miss you so
I can't let go
Stay with me
And you will see
The world through new eyes
A world without lies

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He looks at me
With his big brown eyes
And I can see
He will never tell me lies
My heart beats so fast
Does he like me?
And would it last?
Can he see?
With him I want to be.

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Wow! That is good. This is how i really feel. I don't know. She makes me cry. But not in THAT way.


She isn't Pretty


She isn't beautiful.

She's not even pretty.

She's smart

Smarter than I'll ever be.

I thought it was just admiration.

I still think it is.

But something makes me want to watch her.

Something wants me to laugh with her,

hug her,

Talk to her for hours

Some people think she's boring

I think she's fascinating

She isn't beautiful.

Or even pretty.