I am betting the details are icky. Please read my poetry its really easy to know that I wrote it,because it's entitled Harrypotter4eva5's Poetry.

So Ill walk the plank
and Ill do it with a smile
If I'm gonna go down,
I'm gonna do it with a style
and you won't see me surrender
and you won't hear me confess
cuz youve left me with nothing
and I've worked with less.

Like it? Yes, no?It's about when my boy friend cheated on me with my best friend.

I just replied to "Memories"!!!

I know you replied to memorys I read it thanks!

I love this,also about your boyfriend forget about him. If he cheated on you with your B.f.F then he is blind,because he didn't see the many talents you have.

All of you are so talented!!! Will you check 9out my poetry? It's titled Poetry( Not HP related, Sorry!!!)PlEASEEEE!!!???!!!???

Rock On!!! :music_band: SPAM!!!! ( SORRY JUST CANT HELP IT!!!)

What HarryPotter4eva5 said!!

AWWW!!!!! Thanx Harrypotter4eva5!!!! You just made me feel sorta kinda a little fuzzy inside!!!LOL!!! I take it you like it.

Rock on!!! :music_band:

Your welcome!

Ok This is one I thought of when I saw me and my older sister standing in a photo together with my mom and dad.

Memorys

I'm sitting by the window,thinking of all the fun times I had.
I look at old pictures,seeing me standing with my sister,
mom, and dad. I grew older and mature now,
though I still have a little kid in me. I'll miss my
family when they leave me someday,so I cherish
the times I have with them now,before someday they are all gone,and all I'll have left are my memorys.

Wow!! That was good! I actually cried! Keep it up!@!

Thank you! Sorry I made you cry!

ok this one is a little weird but ohh well!

why do you push me
do you like to watch me suffer
would you like to see me suffer
is this the game you play
to watch little children
drown away
i will not let you make me suffer
you've got the wrong girl
i will make you suffer
in my own speacial way

Oh My God! That's like totally like I feel towards a friend of mine or should I say a girl who used to be my friend... I love all your poems (I wish I was as good as you guys...) :flowersmile:

yeah that was a really good poem...actually right now im having that problem with my friend lena...what a coinky dink

Me too. Here is one about my ex-friend.

Sorry

I'm sorry that you're not my friend.
But just so you know I am strong.
You were wrong from the start.
You threw away all my gifts
to you from the heart. I
really don't care anymore
about you. You can be wrong
and have no one beleive in you.
When you turn to me I won't
Believe in you like I used to.
You're two faced and you think
I don't know. But really mostly
out of all your two faces the rude
one always shows.

Betrayed

I feel so mad,I feel so betrayed.
I thought you were my b.f forever
to stay. Yet you lied and you gossiped
just because I wasn't there. Though
just so you know. No one realy cares.
They don't believe you anymore
and trust you like I used to,
because all of your lies are
just insecurties from you.

Backstabbers

Backstabbers,you think they're your friends,when really their lying never ends.They say all these lies,and make you beleive,when all they really do is decieve. A true friend would stand by you,though backstabbers never do. A true friend would tell you all lies kept from you,though backstabbers never do.

Hey these are good! Seems you discovered what I have discovered that poetry is a great way to get your feelings out without hurting someon! please read mine Sonnets from Alyssa I'd love to hear your comments

Thanks! Poetry is really good to let your feelings out. It makes me feel better after I read them. ^ _ ^

thanks*blushes* hey Harrypotter4eva5 dat waz relle good!!!

Harrypotter4eva5 your poetry is really good! Can you'll check out my poetry HP_Gem54's Poetry

All right here's one of my best poems... I think

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She Lied...

I don't care
She's my nightmare
She lied
I cried
I don't care what she says
I hate her these days.


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Deceived

You told me I wasn’t strong
But I know that you’re wrong
You’re the one who’s weak
My advice you always seek
When will you realise
That I won’t compromise
The person that I am

You have nothing to say
Think you’re in control day after day
You had us deceived
The lies we in believed
Were is the girl I though I knew
A soup of lies you always brew
Who are you really?

You think it’s your right to be mad
But to be honest you’re really sad
Your friends is running away
They have seen the real you one day
Now your sitting in the darkness
With no one to bring you happiness
So what have you become?

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That's all for now...

Will some one please tell me what they think?

ooh these are good can you read mine? (Sonnets of Alyssa) I would love to have your comments! Keep up the great work