| |
If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above.
You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed.
To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.
| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
12-22-2003, 12:12 AM
|
#1 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
Here's one, I'll post more when I get some replies.
Shadows
In my world
I
Am trapped inside
My own mind
Let me out,
Please
I cannot stay like
This forever
Down I shall
Plummet
Into
The depths
Of despair
Spiralling downward
Out of control
That is me,
Myself
But who
Am I?
I know
Nothing
Yet
I know everything
I need to run,to
Escape
But I
Cannot
I am a
Prisoner of my
Own mind. | 
| | |
12-22-2003, 12:14 AM
|
#2 (permalink)
| | Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Posts: 10,259
|
hey Amber! luv the poems read min please
| |
| | |
12-22-2003, 12:19 AM
|
#3 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
I will, Lyssa. Here's two more
White rose
Grace,
Beauty
Completely and utterly
Pure
It is
Stunning,yet
Nieve
Still,
The rose shall
Change.
^Lyssa adores that one
Release me
From my
Prison cell...
Me
It's so confusing...
How do I
Escape
When I
Am the one
Trapping myself
In? | |
| | |
12-22-2003, 12:23 AM
|
#4 (permalink)
|  *lurks*Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: UK (In an Embassy for Lovely)
Posts: 1,290
|
These are great poems!  | |
| | |
12-22-2003, 12:39 AM
|
#5 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
Take away
The hurt
Take away
The pain
Leave me here
To become insane. | |
| | |
12-30-2003, 01:27 PM
|
#6 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
Posts: 4,892
|
You have a lot of talent please write some more! :flowersmile:
__________________
every me & every you
| |
| | |
12-31-2003, 11:29 PM
|
#7 (permalink)
| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 164
|
Can't believe I haven't read these before now, they're excellent! I like your style, never had much talent with it myself, but it makes for some some really moving stuff. Good job! :flowersmile:
| |
| | |
01-01-2004, 05:29 AM
|
#8 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
I shall die
Upon a paintbrush
My throat red
Red like blood
Red with paint
I shall tumble
Onto the ground
Fallen from my paintbrush.
That doesn't make sense, but I still like it. :ermsmile:
| |
| | |
01-10-2004, 07:27 AM
|
#9 (permalink)
| | Banned Chizpurfle
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Posts: 10,259
|
Quote: Originally posted by ~Parvati Patil~@Dec 21 2003, 05:59 PM
I will, Lyssa. Here's two more
White rose
Grace,
Beauty
Completely and utterly
Pure
It is
Stunning,yet
Nieve
Still,
The rose shall
Change.
^Lyssa adores that one
Release me
From my
Prison cell...
Me
It's so confusing...
How do I
Escape
When I
Am the one
Trapping myself
In? Hey I like it! And I'm gonna read it to my creative writing club lol
| |
| | |
01-10-2004, 07:33 AM
|
#10 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
Posts: 2,766
Hogwarts RPG Name:
William Ashlan McCollam
Graduated |
These are really good.I have some really good ones.If you want to hear them just reply to this or pm me and if its ok post them here.
__________________  | |
| | |
01-10-2004, 10:00 AM
|
#11 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
|
i love the last one. the rest of them are really nice, too. keep up the good work! :flowersmile:
__________________ My fanart Love, torn at the seams... | |
| | |
01-11-2004, 10:34 PM
|
#12 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
Breathe
Live again
Be reborn
From the ashes
And...
I know your face
But I don't know your name
Why do you think you know me?
You only know my face
And...
A cold wind
Blows across my heart
I
Am shattered into a million
Bits of glass..
Glass roses. | |
| | |
01-13-2004, 02:34 AM
|
#13 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
o.O
I remember
What happened
Even
Though I don't want to
The way
You were so cruel
Shall stick
Into my mind forever
All this poetry is an expression of what's going on in my head...
| |
| | |
01-14-2004, 03:36 AM
|
#14 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
o.O what is going on in my head?
Rush
Up to the mountain
Plunge
Into the sea
Race
Along the fields
And sleep
On a bed of roses
Rush to yourself
A rush of you
Rush. | |
| | |
01-14-2004, 05:56 AM
|
#15 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 5,033
|
These are really good! Keep going!
| |
| | |
01-15-2004, 05:59 PM
|
#16 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
You touch me
But I don't feel
You hurt me
But I don't cry.
I've gone numb,
Numb to the pain
I've gone numb,
Numb to the hurt.
You scream
But I don't hear
You hit
But I don't hurt...
I've
Gone
Numb. | |
| | |
01-16-2004, 04:50 AM
|
#17 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: B.C., Canada
Posts: 2,477
|
Scream
Until your throat
Bleeds.
Run
Until your ankles
Break.
Laugh
Until your cheeks get
Sore.
Live
Before the time
Ends. | |
| | 
Posting Rules
| You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post attachments You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
| | | All times are GMT. The time now is 04:04 AM. |
.jpg)
