Star!!! You never told me you write poems ASWELL as FF's, geeze, well, I've been missing out. They are REALLY, REALLY good. I hope you get one up soon. Really good job Star.

Quote:

We have had one chance
But that’s not enough
All I wish for now
Is a second chance

^^ I love that, its so pretty and sad.

Wonderful job!!


ps. I just put one up...you don't have to read it, but I am say this so you can't say I didn't tell you

jer- thanks! Wotcherness! savvy? But why the rum?

tinker tonks- Thanks tonky! I am off to read yours i jsut saw it up and was like i'll check mine then tonks! haha I didn't know you wanted to know haha I need to work on my FF haha thanks i am happy you liked the stanza thats prob. my fav. out of the whole poem

i noticed i have not written anything on Harry Potter and since this is a HP web-site I should have at least one HP poem well i decided to write it on one of my fav. charactors... just another quickly written little poem... kidna just what i thought of Sirius.... enjoy sirius fans!

A friend to all those who knew the truth
A dog for those who wanted to see him
A godfather, for his best friends son
An all around great guy, padfoot

Always wanted to help others
More then he wanted to help himself
Put himself into danger
Even if it meant facing death

His family was all sorted into Slytherin
But this was not right for him
For he was too brave
And cared too much for the ones he loved

He fall through a veil
And hasn’t been seen
But the ones that loved him
Knows he shall return someday

ok thats all for now... feel free to request a topic for a poem... because I don't know anything to write about at this moment

Great job Star, again, lol..... He better come back


Just write about what you are feeling when you write another one.

Awww your poems are awesome! I wish I could actually write. You make me feel bad. lol

Thanks Tinker tonks, ok i'll write about what i feel the 2nd to last love one is kinda how i feel but i'll write one on how i feel i think those type of peoms are the easiest! And i am still hoping that Sirius comes back alive haha as the poems states!

Emily- i am sure you can write... trust me i can't write either... haha but with a little practice i have gotten some what better... trust me i never thought i would get complamnets on my poetry! If you ever need some help or want some1 to review your work or anythng don't hesitate to PM or IM me! I'll be more then glad to help you out. Also i don't want you to feel bad... DON'T FEEL BAD! :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

hi love i read them and there really good cant wait to see more! leah mae

Here is another one...

The Dream


No one loves me
No one is here to care
I sit and cry by day and night
Yet nobody ever notices
I hide my sadness behind a smile
Even my close friends can never tell
I act as if everything was all right
But deep down I feel the tears and pain
And the loneliness I suffer day after day
That was until I met you
You have changed my world in every way
You love and care for me
You listen and comfort me
Day in and day out
You can look into my eyes
And see the sadness that I hide
I thought you were perfect
Until I woke up
And realized that you
Were nothing but a dream

Star, that is SOOOO good and sad. Like really, it completly describes how I feel sometimes.
Really, really good job! :flowersmile:

Keep going Star!!

thanks tonky (if you ever need to talk you know where i am)! yeah I kinda wrote that about how i feel sometimes... I hope it didn't make you cry... i already made two people cry when they read it... lol thanks for the complaments... i'll be writing another one tonight or tomorrow morning! :sorcerer:

I can't wait for you to write another. I didn't cry, but I would have I think if I were alone reading it, I was at school.

I love your poems, they rock!

OMG, star! That was so...WOTCHER! I really like your poems! They are sooooo good! Ah, you're amazing, Amber! BUMPS and PAMS! :flowersmile:

Thanks for the replies i appreciate them so much words can't say (and thats saying a lot lol) Thankies to my oreo and tonky!!!!! here is another one i just wrote enjoy...!


*Letting Go*

I thought we were perfect
Like to puzzle pieces
That fit together perfectly
I thought that was us

We never fought like others
We always understood each other
Everyone thought we would be together forever
But then something went wrong

You started not calling
Or talking to me at school
You looked into my eyes
But never with the same look of love

I know it’s all over
I know it’s all gone
But I can’t think stop thinking of you
I can’t let go of you

hm... i keep writing my poems in the same style... sorry i'll try to get out of it lol hopefully i'll have another one up soon!

heres another poem in the same style i am sorry, its just a quick writte one again because i need to get back to homework! haha this one is happy, i felt after a sad one i needed to post a happy one!


*Nothing Became Something*

It started out as nothing
Nothing but an occasional chat
And a few words to each other
But soon it was more, more then we thought

We started talking,
Realizing our same interests
It grew on us
And we became friends

Yet, still this did not seem right
We got even closer
After many late and early talks
And knew there was something more

We both saw something rare
And beautiful, that shone like a star
It was the doorway to are hearts
We were in love

hi tis me leah here and of course your poetry is beautiful so please dont stop writing! leah mae

Thanks-you! Your poetry is really good too! :flowersmile: for you.

Really great Star! :flowersmile:

Thanks tinker tonks! Tonks you rock, and you know it! haha Ok well I was out of town the last 2 days so I didn't get a chance to write anything but tomorrow morning i'll write something, so it should be up by tomorrow morning or afternoon!

hey love thanks alot and dont stop writing! leah mae

Ok well I just wrote this poem its really short and probably my worse so far... but every writer has there up and downs i think this is one of my downs haha! Well here it is...

Still Waiting

Everyday I sit here
All alone
Day and night
For once I wish
That you were here
Sitting next to me
To hold my hand
To comfort me
But no…
That’s only a wish
Still waiting to happen

Hopefully (if i finish my poetry project for school) i'll be able to write more later!

Once again thanks to all of those who read my poems!

Ok, i got sick of my homework and wrote this... i actually like this one... its cute and straight to the point! lol haha Hope you enjoy!

One Wish

Each night
After the sun goes down
I wish upon
A wishing star
I wish upon this little star
So maybe one day
My dream can come true
I wish for…
I cannot say
For if I do
It will not come true
But deep down
I know that you know
Because there is only one thing
I would wish for

Here is another poem... enjoy...

Missing You

We were always together
Fitted as one
We did everything together
No matter what it was

I didn’t care what it was
As long as I knew
That you were seated by my side
To hold and comfort me

I never knew how much
I would be missing you
That was until
The day that you left

It hit me hard and straight on
And tore me to shreds
And shattered my heart
To a million pieces

I will be missing you
For now and ever
I never should have let you go
And now all I can do is miss you

ello again star love tis beaitful poems u write so dont stop leah mae :flowersmile:

OOOOOOh! Star awsome! I love them! You're so good! Please do more! They are...WOTCHER! :flowersmile:

Hey Amber!
Christine here! YEA! I loved your first poem. It got me hooked. The pink one was really cute. Keep writing.
<3 Christine <3
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