Though several minutes seems like an eternity
I will remember your stillness
Your love
Your heart beyond the soul

Sometimes, the memories fade away
And I miss you
Need you
Those memories are what I should hold to

When you leave to do your stuff
I nurture your wounded heart
I carry your pain like it's my own
I stand beside you day after day

When I watch you play on broomsticks
I hold my breath with every move you take
I am like you
I am with you

When your done
I congratulate you
I hug you
I missed you

Now, many years later
I am still with you
I may be gone
But I am still with you

When you cry
I lend a touching shoulder
For you to cry on
As I plan your life

Now you life is ending too
And I await your return
Like I did when I was with you
Alive

We will reunite
Day after day night after night
I miss you
I love you

My dear
I'm with you
My Oliver
I'm with you

Its good, touching

this is deep

its really good *wipes tears from eyes away*

awwwww!!!!!!! that is wonderful 'n' v. touching!!!!!!!

nice job nice use of words

thats really pretty. I like it.

sorry I have to say it again it's good

I love it, it's really touching... :flowersmile:

I hope ya'll like it!

Chocolate Cherries, PART 1

Our favourite was Chocolate Cherries
Really sweet and secret
Like our hearts and love
They were always great

But ever since our life's renewed
The Chocolate Cherries spell broke
The love ended
As did our time together

Our Chocolate Cherries lay forever
In the past
Our Chocolate Cherries forever
Lie in our future too

very good. i like it its a bit on the sweet side, not something i usually write, but you make it work really well! nice job, keep up the good work!