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03-28-2007, 08:24 PM
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| | Horklump
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ooh they are...weird
but i luv them!
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03-29-2007, 06:34 PM
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^  The Strange one Strikes Again! Thanks!
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03-30-2007, 08:21 PM
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I wrote this in the request thread....a strangely okay one  When I first saw you I cried,
The thought of you made me want to die,
The scar so burdened upon you haunted my dreams,
The bright green eyes did so as well it seems.
Speech fails me from sight and sound,
I can barely touch the baren ground,
When you looked at me my face turned red,
My brain a useless block of lead.
I talk and cry for you day after day,
There is so much that I want you to say,
And yet I flutter from child to child,
Longing for your love, bitter-sweet, never mild.
I forced the words out of my mouth,
My eyes facing firmly south,
Waiting for the day Hermione said,
I will kiss you before going to bed.
You caught me in the tapestry,
Anger was all I could see,
I fretted along my life ahead,
Until the day turned red.
I forced myself to play my best,
Though my heart was with you,
I saw you walk through that door,
And I couldn't have held.
I ran to you, your arms spread wide,
What I didn't expect was the kiss, a wide ride,
I broke away, my brain a fluster,
You around for my dearly annoying brother.
I must hold on.
Last edited by Obi-Wan K'Lari; 03-30-2007 at 08:22 PM.
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04-05-2007, 08:37 PM
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This is for H/R!!!! It's a perfect ship!
I smile, because I cannot laugh;
It's been a while, since my heart's been cracked in half;
And I'll wait for you, because you said you'll be here;
And there you are, the reason that I will never fear you
*********** Is**************
Your love, is the rose I settle on;
The pillow I hug close;
The satin of my life;
I decide, to survive and wait for you.
I try, to love you;
but can I try that hard?
Your love, the bitter-sweet chocolate,
Of life, is ripe, and I have to seize it.
The flame, that alights in you;
Is the kind of thing I like in you;
'Cause I find, my mind is lost,
And I will never find it. | |
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04-07-2007, 02:02 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: well...my nose was in the middle of DH, but I finished it, apparated here and idk where my nose is..
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hey - I've been reading ur poems and I love them all! I wrote my own 12 days of hogwarts - come check it out in my thread! (second page! - hope you come see it!)
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04-07-2007, 02:47 PM
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 thanks so much!! I'm running off to look now!
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05-01-2007, 05:42 PM
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Second Year x1
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It's not long until the world crumbles,
The trees grow tall, all hamsomeness gone,
The song heard all day; forever gone,
Never to be felt again, the happiness that I long for,
The touch and the smile of one,
Hopelessness fills, ever eternal,
Steel, coldness and fate;
Crash, burn and horrifing hate;
The evil envelopes us all as we hid in fear,
All hope gone,
For evil is near.
Tears spill and love is cast,
Hoping that it will fufil it's task,
As the hope starts to fad away,
There is a cry for another day,
The strugle can only be almost over,
Love, and hope, things once forgotten,
It's dim light, the only sight,
The only hope, the only time,
The one and only sign,
That the land has returned,
The sky has parted,
We breathe once more, never depated.
Relief and joy,
Alights the hope,
Which has not been felt,
Since he asended the slope,
With breath bated,
And a song in our throats,
The young and the strong,
They try not to gloat.
A bleary eye opens,
A bright one greets,
A smile unseen for years,
Brings you to your feet,
Open arms, open minds,
Surely hope, has its time.
Guess what it's about! It's Harry related | |
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05-09-2007, 04:51 PM
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Father, Dearest
As I watch him, I feel overwhelmed;
The hope and the trust, if it just could have held;
One step is uncertain, one breath withheld;
Fear ropes me in, of what I cannot tell.
A squeek is heard, a story untold;
Stepping backwards, into her protective fold;
Mouse brown hair, little grey eyes;
If only she could soar like the fireflies.
He looked up at her and a frown met her soul;
This passionate hate was taking its toll;
Must a child sufer, her hope crushed hard and fast;
Only until she comes in dead last;
He should only know so much, to care at all;
He had never bothered to pick her up after a fall.
Father, Dearest.
This is what I think Tonks' father was like....  maybe
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06-06-2007, 03:29 PM
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A few I wrote for The DA:
The Chamber (H/G)
I look at you, a shiver runs down my spine;
I blanch at the thought of what Voldemort has in mind.
I can't let go, though you told me to;
Hidden is my sorrow, I'm with you through and through.
I can't believe how far we've come;
Through all the things that we've said and done.
Bottle green eyes, noble and true;
I can't bare to say good bye to you.
Umbridge
She hate us all,
We hate her too,
Her stupid rules,
Will definitely irritate you.
Simpering sweetness,
To disguise the evil,
Scheming thief,
Will get her vigil.
She thinks they wait,
With bated breath,
Lil old Umbridge,
Is afraid of death. | |
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07-28-2007, 05:37 PM
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Dream Haunting
A sunken face follows you,
In your dreams, it talks to you,
Softly, taunting your soul,
The emotionless words, will take their toll.
Guess!
Last edited by Obi-Wan K'Lari; 07-28-2007 at 05:38 PM.
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07-31-2007, 02:02 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: well...my nose was in the middle of DH, but I finished it, apparated here and idk where my nose is..
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Wow I love ur work - it is odd but that's why I love it!!!
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11-14-2007, 01:41 PM
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Vibrations, shattering thoughts;
I saw her look towards me,
And I didn't have a second thought.
A few quick steps and a fumbling for words,
Somehow I'd managed to get my girl.
Off the top of my head! Don't eat me! | |
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01-25-2008, 12:49 PM
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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Or to the essence of a rose,
Subtle, yet over powering?
Beauty no man could hope to resist,
Yet thou shalt not exploit it.
My own little thing based on Shakespear's Sonnet 16. Based on a charrie I'm doing for my commonwealth essay on 
Last edited by Obi-Wan K'Lari; 02-10-2008 at 07:11 AM.
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02-17-2008, 07:35 PM
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| | Occamy
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Oz
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Gryffindor Seventh Year
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Slytherin Fifth Year
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Hufflepuff Fourth Year
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Ravenclaw First Year
Ministry Department Head:
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Law Enforcement
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Transportation
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| Bathes in Maple Syrup | Dancing Lobster | Mrs. Charlie Weasley | Seneca's Beard | That's So Fetch
Ooh! Lari, post more poetry! I love what all you came up with.
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02-23-2008, 11:35 AM
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02-23-2008, 11:16 PM
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| | Occamy
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Oz
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Gryffindor Seventh Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Gillyweed Beery
Slytherin Fifth Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ousmane Diomandé
Hufflepuff Fourth Year
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rajan Patil
Ravenclaw First Year
Ministry Department Head:
Franklin Paton
Law Enforcement
Ministry Department Head:
Almer Toots
Transportation
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*Sniff* May he rest in peace!
Hmm ... PPMAPSOID!
PPAMPSOID = Please post more awesome poetry soon or I'll die!
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06-23-2008, 05:38 PM
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I don't think I've posted these before:
Peace and Fools
In hope does glee overflow in oneself,
And bloom eternal;
In anger and hate, prejudice is spread the world over,
Killing all love gained;
Peace is ever delicate-
It is shattered purposely by fools.
Forever Searching
Somehow, I know that I've left the world I belong to,
So I search, despite the chance I may never find it;
It's as though memories have been lost,
I shall still continue, if only for the chance of a dream;
Perhaps there is a reason I do not remember,
A measure taken by someone other than myself;
Am I dangerous, do I threaten someone?
What is the reason for this torture?
I will continue searching, despite the reason I am lost. | |
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