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Old 11-04-2003, 08:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I don't have much time but here's some of my song

She sits in her room, on her bed
And it's tearing her to shreds
She can't take the yelling no more
And,


Then the chorus, and so on and so forth.
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Argh don't leave me hanging
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Old 11-04-2003, 08:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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first part was good, please write more.
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Old 11-06-2003, 03:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Chorus:

She cries, she asks why
Does it always happen to her?
It's her mom and her dad
And they always get mad,
And she can't help but feel this way
All she wants is just one good day
All she wants is just one good day
End of chorus


Sorry it's so short I had to type it from memory, I left the copy at one of my dad's stores.
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Old 11-06-2003, 03:35 AM   #5 (permalink)
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SORRY ACCIDENTALLY POSTED TWICE
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Old 11-06-2003, 03:38 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Never

You never cared >
You never were there
I would just cry
Never knew why
I was alone
Had no real home
You never cared >
If I was here
Or there
If I ran away
Or decided to stay
I'm ignored
So I slammed the door
Wish I had a real home
I don't wanna roam
I wish you cared
But your never there


Just for the record that's a poem, not part of my song.
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GOOD JOB CHECK MINE under Red Rose! oops I accidentally pushed the caps button
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Old 11-18-2003, 05:45 PM   #8 (permalink)
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It's her mom and her dad
And they always get mad
And she can't help but feel this way
All she wants is just one good day
All she wants is just one good day

there is more but I'm too tired, to type

I was typing till twelve last night.

on The trio
please check it out and comment.

I worked really hard (or typed really hard)
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Good job! Try expanding your vocabulary and poems by using more colourful words. Use some dictionaries and use some words you or others have never heard of before. Great job check mine under red rose
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