How I feel stuck in a pressure that crushes me into something small and forgotten,
a pressure that casts me out into an abyss of emotions so strong that they seem to break each other apart.
It’s a catastrophe of darkness and lost hope.
It is a feeling of sadness and despair.
Emotions running through my veins like a drug over taking my mind.
It’s like trying to breathe in water, an enclosing space that buries you deeper into it.
Emotions are growing more and more painfully. I don’t seem to remember how it started. It’s a vast location in a futile place, a dirt patch in soft green grass.
A lonely mountain peak overlooking a dark night full of disaster and chaos, it’s an unhappy emotion of tragedy and discomfort.


Maybe they are not as good as most. Because i have read some and they are really great but i tried hard and i will be posting soon so please if u have nothing nice to say about them then please dont say anything at all thank you.

This is my beginning hope you like it!

Spiffinduforusly fan-dabi-double-dozi! :flowersmile: (though I had read this previosly) :sorcerer:

Cascading events of sadness and remorse, an unmarked sickening flow of terror and fear. Destruction overpoweringly strong, building itself into a tower of obstruction. Violence taking over violence, it’s a death trap of swords, daggers, knives, blood. Like a night without the moon it lingers, longer than anything ever had. It’s a dark entrance to an even darker outing. It is a world of pain and suffering, a world of suicide and murder.





Isnt this just a wonderful picture?

If you all read it Ill give u guys :oreo: :oreo: :oreo: oreos and :cucumber: a cucumber

These are awesome!!! I'm a pretty dark person as well when it comes to this kind of stuff, it's nice to see I'm not the only one who's a little angsty! Keep up the excellent work!

Wow

I see you answered for my oreos and cucumbers....Well you cant have them never!!!! Well anyways thanks for your replies i appreciate them. Anyways ill post more soon toodles.

I’m looking in the mirror and I see a reflection of someone I don’t know…Bloody hands cold daggers on my palms. I remember what I just did…wondering is this really me? Hurting others…destroying lives causing pain…then I think yes it is me…i cant stop I loose control I cant change I cant stop my life is turning into shreds before your eyes…. madness is over powering I cant stop the feeling I’m loosing control of my very being I need help but it doesn’t seem to find me does this mean I have to look for it all by myself alone and afraid of this world full of death?

hope u like it goodtoodles!

Hey....I like warrior stories too...

The darkness is seeping through me like a cloud over the sky. I feel her presence around me. I ask what do you want from me this time. She says a battle between us. Wonderful I say. I’m looking forward to this. A switch is flicked on near where she stood. Bright lights shine through the whole place. I tremble slightly. Shivers running down my spine. I reach to grab my sword. She does the same. We face each other with fear, anger, and vengeance. Suddenly she strikes at me. I strike back at her. We both know we’ve been trained well. I take a strike near her face, and a deep gash is shown. Blood drips down her face as she tries to hit me back. I dunk down, and she misses. We walk around each other not even a glance at anything else. I jump and do a twirl in midair ready to hit her when I touch back down. She does the same. She’s copying me I thought, till she lashed at me so suddenly. A sting near my legs makes me crouch at the floor. I examine them quickly a deep cut is bleeding near my knee. I get up and look at her with anger in my eyes. I back flip, and draw my sword forward. It hits her in the chest; a terror arises in her eyes. I feel proud of myself as I walk out, leaving her to bleed on that cold stone floor. I reach him in time, kiss his lips, and walk away with pride.

Shadows lay at my feet.
A cool wind whispers to me as i walk alone on this dark night.Images of long ago are swept away into nothing.
A rain fall of thoughts,dreams, desires fade into an ocean of
loneliness, sadness, nightmares.
A moment of bliss captured yet torn away from the grip of my fingers.
Moments are torn up into shreds of pieces that burn into ashes. My mind commands me to run,let my feelings go free.
But a shiver down my spine tells me to stay quiet
stay inside my head.
I run into the night allowing myself to fade into nothing but the shadows that lay at my feet.


ooooohhh...yea.no one cares

I look into the eyes of the one who doesnt know i exist
He looks past me and doesnt even glance at me..
he stays in my mind all day
my secret love for him makes me want to run into his arms
and tell him everything
but i dont seem worthy of his love or his glance.
i dont seem worthy of a place in his thoughts....i am just a lonely
person awaiting a love that will not come..
i cant get over it so i just stare into his eyes
while he pretends he doesnt care.

I love it! I can be kind of dark too, and I really like these poems!

Thank you Sarah granger...
***
Have you ever felt so alone
that every waking moment
seems like hell...
that every snigger seems it is meant for you
Have you ever felt so alone
that you seem to be falling into a dark void
that your life seems to be fading into nothing
Have you ever felt so alone that
nobody seems to know your there...
Well Lots of people have...
This world seems to forget them...
Like if they are some insect that should die...
So next time you see someone alone...
try to put yourself in their shoes
because let me tell you
it's not a pretty sight...

A clock is ticking in a corner
My heart beat is getting faster
Im loosing my breath
Im pacing trying to clear my mind
Im loosing control of my surroundings
everything seems to be spinning
Spinning faster and faster
it doesnt stop
It keeps spinning
and im loosing my balance
My mind goes blank
and suddenly im in this dark void
Falling Just falling
Forever

I love the one about feeling so alone, the message is beautiful, and you convey that expertly. Wonderful job.

thank you
***
In this dark sad world anyones very heart
seems to be made of dark coal
In this futile mission every feeling seems
misguided and wrong
We loose hope so easily
Yet there in the mist of the darkness
stands a voice that tells you Happiness will find a way
Once you hear that voice you think its not true
you think that you will always be alone
that no one cares
but someone does
maybe not someone you want but it may be someone
you need
Think of this lone voice listen to it carefully it may be your only way out of this darkness

As silent tears run down my cheeks
As people walk around me as if they cant see me
As the sky turns dark and the rain starts falling
I see him
Standing there
Facing the other way
I see him looking around
I see him from so far away
He stands there not noticing me
not wondering why i am staring at him
It's like im alone
It's like he doesnt care
If he were in my shoes
he would know how i feel
Alone and frustrated
sad and completely apart from this world
But he doesnt know
he doesnt want to know
But i wish he would cause then maybe
he will turn around and notice im right next to him

Suicide.
It’s a deadly thought, it’s a deadly illness
It holds you, trying to suffocate you,
Trying to control you
Tormenting your thoughts
Running the life you once thought was yours
Nobody understands you
Nobody cares
Everyone thinks its a phase that
Will leave
Nobody seems to understand it is real
A life is not a life if you don’t think it’s worth living
Have you ever seen someone being made fun of?
Let me ask you. Have you ever made fun of him?
If yes then read this again and let it sink in.
Then the next time you see a suicide report on the news
Remember this poem.
Remember me
Because I’ll be everywhere, blaming you.
:toilet:

What is the point in living a life so cruel and terrible?
What is the point in keeping control of my feelings?
Why not just let my feelings go?
Scream at the top of my lungs? Destroy everything in sight?
Why must I hide in a corner and keep my feelings inside?
Why? Because no one cares that’s why…
I can shout and scream. I can run and hide.
But no one will care. No one will wonder.
None of my feelings will make any difference.
I am a shadow on the wall
The lone soldier in this mission
I am the dark cloud in your bright shiny day
My secrets are my own because I must keep them in my head
I have to keep them hidden
If anything gets out
My life will end and never come back

Does anyone really care about how you feel?
Do they really want to help?
Those people who seem to know what you are feeling.
those people who ask you whats wrong.
Do they really wonder about anything you say?
I dont think they do.
They ask but they dont care
They dont listen, all they hear is a distant sound
you can pour your heart out and they wont care.
Its just an act to keep you believing their lies
Just dont say anything. youll be happier

heather, im not really into all that dark stuff but for a person who loves light, I ABSOLUTELY love them :sorcerer: !

loneliness blinding me
taking away everything i once thought was real
destroying everything that was once beautiful
controling my thoughts
controling my fears
showing my feelings
showing my tears
so sad and lonely is this world that we live in
so lost and forgotten are others feelings within
can you help restore it
can you help me care
can you help us all
us all from despair

omc i love it absolutely psotively love it!
:sorcerer: :online2long:

Listen..
to that soft whisper in your ear....
the wind swiftly moving around you...
A dead silence filling your ears...
thoughts moving violently in your head...
your self-confidence is crashing down...
confusing you...
but then you see him...
walking your way...
coming close to you...
his warmth surrounding you..
his strong arm around you...
his hand delicately caressing your face...
his warm lips pressing softly against yours...
as you melt away in his arms...

omc! i love this one and all of them they are SOOOO awesome! :sorcerer: :online2long:

Smile I Will Never Do Until I Lay Safely With You


Oohhhh, nice and dark.......................... :ninjastars: :sorcererdragon: