trapped
I'm trapped in this hole of fear and darkness
depressing thoughts fill my head im scared of life and
scared to live im scared of the darkness im lost
in .Clawing and scratching these walls of my fear.
They say i'll be ok but im not sure im not sure of
anything anymore. Questions fill my head
my head feels like it going to explode.All this
fear and all this darkness. All
these thoughts and all these secrets.
I needed to get out i couldn't get out untill
you came and pulled me out and saved me
from my darkness untill you fell in your
darknes Im sorry i couldn't save
you.But now im lost again

HER
The tears of sorrow went thru my day not one
tear touched my face. the madness the
Sadness that
went on that day. The times she was there for
me. The times she was happy never a frown i seen
on her face the times that she was here were my
happiest now im lost.She loved the sun now the
sun touches the ground shes under. As i cried on
her grave wishing it was me. I loved her
and
always will. She told me not to forget her
and i haven't and i won't my friend will always
be with me her grin her happiness her laugh
her love as she left her family behind as she
left me behind i wish i could take back
my last words to her.Her light was my light
at the end of my dark tunnel now shes
gone to a better place and im still here.
All i have left is darkness and sorrow.I
know she is whatching me i told
her i'll be waiting and she said no you won't
i miss her more than anything and she
will be with me

You're good! Is that for someone in particular?

Kinda depressing though...

And you are a guy! WOW!

uh thanks i guess uh it was my friend who died a while ago

that's so sad how was it for.

I am sry that ur friend died..but the poem is good! Keep it up!

uh thanks glad u like it i just wrote down what it felt like

Really cool.....specially since your a guy....thats a first for me......anyways its really good...keep expressing let it all out...
sorry bout ur friend must have been hard... :unsure:

Life
my darkness tips my scale my light
is as light as a feather every time i think
about my life i get depressed depressing things
depress me im hiding under my bed but i
always end up in a dark tunnel you were
my light and now theres nothing but darkness
i guess sombody said you were the light of my
life not a single person hated you everyone
loved you it was hard not to i live my days
slow now i watch as they go bye days weeks
months years they pass to me like minutes
i wish i could live them but i can't not without
my only friend when you came i was in darkness
then you lit my way but your gone and my
darkness is back i wish i could have told you if i
did maybe you would be here when he took
your life he took mine and i wouldn't be writing
this you loved him but he didn't love you
i was to late getting there if i did tell you
about how i felt you would be with me

SING SONG SORROW
Blood all over my face and hands as i got there
you died in my arms. The last words you said to me i
wouldn't forget and never will.My life is dark
because your not here.We fought hours before it
happened you said you hated me i said i hated
you to you hit me and walked away. You said jeff
loved you i told you he didn't and that you
weren't safe.I try to live my life without you but
it just won't work. I miss you i cried a river
that floated you to heaven. I wish i was with you
but im not im still here on earth.When i was with
you there was no gravity it was nothing but
nothingness. jeff shot you thrU the heart
and ran he didn't care he treated you like a dog hitting you and almost raping you.I regret what i had said
to you.I wanted to tell you i loved you
but i couldn't. You told me about what fun you
had with him but you didn't i could see it. my two
best friends are dead now jeff killed himself
and he killed you.Now i have nothing. As you died
in my arms you smiled and told me to be
happy but you knew i wouldn't you knew i loved you
and you told me you loved
me i miss you and i always will. So sing song
sorrow and live your life because you don't know
when it will end

Ok im done with those i have so other ones i'll post them later and thanks for replying

ME MYSELF AND I
I'm alone and probly always will be.
Nobody cares about me nobody loves me.
My family ignores me .My friends i don't have
any there dead and i wish i was with them
but im not im stuck here. I'll probly be a
bitter old man somday yealling at the
price is right. But nobody cares it's
just me myself and i just like it always
was and is and has been and always will be.
They say im ok go out and do somthing
they say but what am i supposed to do.I wish
that i did have friends i wish i had a life.
But it's like i said nobody cares. I'll
get old and be bitter old man.I'm
bored and every one has probly forgot
about me.I haven't left my room or house
for months. But it doesn't matter because
i'm alone and always will be so it's just
me myself and I.

you make me cry. but youre good. very much so. im sorry.

Sorry didn't mean to maybe i did make it a bit mushy lol ok i'll post more soon

LOST
Lost in my darkness to afraid of what
might happen if i go back into the light
i forgot how to smile how to be happy
and when i do smile its fake every thing about
me on the outside is fake the only part of
me that is real is on the inside afraid to come out
because nobody cares if it does come out the real me
i wish i knew him but i don't i haven't seen
him since she left im scared lost confused
all these thoughts can't get them out
afraid to speak my mind afraid of what
might happen if i do will they think im stupid
will they hate me oh wait they already do im six feet
from where i want to be but nobody cares

gone
you always told me to look on the bright side
but when there wasn't a bright side
you told me that every thing happens for a reason
im still waiting for the reason you died
i wonder what it would be like if you were still
here you'll be gone for six months saturday
i'll go to your grave like i do every saturday
your gone and im lost your somwhere nice
where life stands still im stuck here where
life still goes on falling whispers
came from the sky that day as you left
anger inside but nothing to hide as i wanted to
brake down and cry six feet under your body lyes

Do you really feel like that? Because smiling and laughter, even if it's fake, is an excellent curer of misery. Let everyone know that you're ok, and even if you're not, eventually you might convince yourself that you are. I do it every day. And I appear to be the most cheerful person anyone knows. NA you know what? I almost believe it. It's definetly better than wallowing im my unhappiness. The act keeps me occupied, prevents me from dwelling on the pain. So pick up your pieces and put on a fake front. Maybe it won'ts be so fake. I wrote a poem about it in my earlier poems that nobody replied to entitle "Poems for Ginny"

i know i try to be happy i try to smile but you know what they say missery loves company and as far as people wanting to to know if im ok they don't

Personally- I don't really care what misery loves or not. I care about what I love: chocolate and the ocean.

well i thought poems are to express your self right most are depressing and i thought thats what poems are dark and depressing or would you rather me write things like this

i was driving in my pick up that was blue
i drove by a girl who had no clue and a
big gulp full of mountain dew i stoped to see
if she was ok i woke with no kidney and found
out she sold it on ebay
or somthing like this
my life is happy and chipper
good and fun i like to run on blue berry hill
i talk to my dog marry who makes me
feel good and i smile every day

should i write like that or write how i feel? because i try and nobody even cares i do what i have to and i got to bed thats my life and i've never been to the ocean so i don't know what its like

i havent read all the poetry here, but i have read some of yours in another topic. you are unique and talented. sometimes when bad things happen in life it's hard for anyone to share their emotions and i always express myself in a story or poetry, and i think you have too. i think what ur doing is kewl so keep it up!

Havok
You wreaked havok on my days made me feel
like nothing and guess what i turend out to be nothing
so you said you wanted me to do good well maybe
you should remember my birthday once
in a while or call me or stop by
or take intrest in what i do but you don't
and im gladthe only thing you ever taught me
is how to be a jerk you do nothing for me
i ask you for one thing in my entire life
and you say no and im not surprised either
you make me feel stupid and i learned
not to listen to you cheated you lied
i try not to care because you don't care and for some
god awful reason i say i keep feeling bad
about what i say to you but you asy things to me
and don't say your sorry you come to me asking for
things i don't have but you keep wreaking
havok on me just like always and i hate you for it
but your my father and i wish i could change it
but i can't so just keep wreaking havok on me
i "don't" care

thanks "ilove prongs "

i never said your poems weren't beautiful, i never said you shouldnt stop to express your pain. i just hoped that this wasnt all that you feel, you know, and i dont want to sound corny and pathetic, but im hoping you do have some happiness in knowing that your friend is in a better place...or other things. but God, don't stop writing what you feel. im sorry for coming off as a critically challenged *happy* person.




***I didn't want to post again- so i just wanted to say that ur right about that.

ok i didn't know ok sorry and i try my best i just write how i feel somtimes and somtimes i just over exagerate things but i thought thats what poems were

Forget
I feel dumb and stupid nobody wants me around
ever.I feel unloved" i get no attention from anyone
but i don't care anymore."Nobody else does i try
laughing or smiling but i can't nobody cares all my
other poetry sucks but i don't care.I hate this feeling
i wish i could get rid of this feeling but i can't
because it's there.I feel guilty but i didn't do anything i
never do anything except stay in my room.I watch
days go by it seems so fast i don't know what day it
is everyone has forgotten me.I'm twitch if you
care but you don't so go live your happy lives and
i'll just stay here in my room forgetting. The
years go by and so do days but for me it
feels like minutes like i can't catch up

ok that was weird it only took me four minutes to write that