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| | Finished Poetry Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | 
05-27-2007, 06:14 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Amarillo,Texas
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First |  Mr. Black the Poet - Sa16+
I hope you'll all like my work of art!
" Foul smelling Snape"
Snivellus oh snivellus
You foul smelling roach
The evil that you’ve caused
I should have cut your throat
You lie like a snake
Coiled in the grass
You think you are the best one yet
Death Eaters never last
Lord Voldemort is furious
The boy slipped his grasp
Now dear sweet Harry
Is safe from him at last
And you have failed your duty
What shall he think of you
Snivellus oh snivellus
Who works for you-know-who
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05-29-2007, 10:29 AM
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| | Gnome
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any replies? no? well the next one is funny
"The wart of doom"
Voldemort
Now has a wart
Growing on his face
Alas it's huge
And frightening too
Almost as big as space
He used his wand to pop it
And blew off his evil face
Voldemort is long time dead
And now Im dancing..Yay!!
Last edited by barabas black; 05-29-2007 at 10:31 AM.
Reason: title
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05-30-2007, 02:20 AM
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| | Gnome
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no replies? why dont I just post them, and you reply when you can?
"loopy luna"
loopy loony luna
you have to love her style
evanna lynch plays her well
her earrings drive me wild
the rotfang conspracy?
it makes you want to laugh
till you cry your eyes out
she is longbottoms half
I look forward to seeing her
in the phoenix movie
her good ol looks
and love of books
she does look kind of groovy!! | |
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05-30-2007, 02:34 AM
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| | Gnome
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and another one!!!!
'Voldemort"
voldemort oh voldemort
you tore our world apart
your evil eyes tell me well
that you have no heart
you go off killing muggles
with a look of purest joy
the death eaters you have betrayed
and now draco malfoy
but now your life draws to an end
and I shall wish you luck
for here comes harry potter
he's after your horcrux!! | |
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05-30-2007, 02:44 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Amarillo,Texas
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and of couse another( and I think I will want a few replies before I continue)
" the romance"
Some call it love, some call it lust
I honestly dont know
But I love you harry
From your head down to your toes
Your thirst to be the hero
Your personality
Has sweet good ole ginny
Falling to my knees
I loved you from your very first year
you once had saved my life
and I will pay the dept back soon
through sorrowness and strife
and if I die besides you
will you be holding my hand
with a loving heart
we are two parts
that never fail to stand
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05-31-2007, 04:12 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Dancing in the rain!
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Dominic(Dom) Dawson
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there really good, keep it up bro!
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06-01-2007, 10:29 AM
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| | Gnome
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thanks sis. any more comments? well like I said, I post, you read, you comment when you want!!!
"potions and spells"
Avada kedavra
the killing curse so cruel
wingardium leviosa
the levitation tool
sectumsempra
with its slashes and blood
harry used it on malfoy
If only I could!!!
the famous spell stupify
will stun you by surprise
veritaserum
will make you tell no lies
the polyjuice potion
will change your looks at will
the wolfsbane potion
helps lupin quickly deal
with his werewolf problem
he causes wreck without
the silencio spell
shuts them up whenever they pout
the evil crucio
makes people obey you
this spell is used by many
including you-know-who
I can think of many more
but it would take all night
but one little tiny tip
just use these in a fight!!!!
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"Sirius, where's James?"
"where do you think he is wormtail?"
" um... uh.... snogging lily in a cupboard??
" OMG!!!. MOONY!!! WORMTAIL'S GETTING SMART!!!
* compliments of old Dave Lupin, R.I.P!!!* 
* Im a poet!!!! Mr black the poet-sa16+( at the sphinx sofa)*
*thank you nicola!!!!*
Last edited by barabas black; 06-03-2007 at 09:50 AM.
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06-02-2007, 06:17 AM
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| | Gnome
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" beyond the veil"
beyond the veil
beyond the grave
dumbledore now lies
because of voldy's evilness
his hatred and despise
farewell dear old albus
I pay you my tribute
to never hear you speak his name
your voice will never mute
we will remember
your greatness in this world
teaching to the hearts
of hogwarts boys and girls
to know that you wont be around
really is a bother
but I'll always think of you
your favorite, harry potter
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"Sirius, where's James?"
"where do you think he is wormtail?"
" um... uh.... snogging lily in a cupboard??
" OMG!!!. MOONY!!! WORMTAIL'S GETTING SMART!!!
* compliments of old Dave Lupin, R.I.P!!!*
* Im a poet!!!! Mr black the poet-sa16+( at the sphinx sofa)*
*thank you nicola!!!!*
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06-03-2007, 10:00 AM
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| | Gnome
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and yet another!!!!
"The mirrior of Erised"
I looked into the mirrior
saw what I did desire
but voldemort he knew me well
and set the exit on fire
Alas!! I could not run or hide
thank god we didnt duel
as he said " give me the stone"
I fought with evil quirrel
but I discovered I had strenght
I never had before
and layed my hands upon them
there face broke out in sores
I thought that I was loosing It
I thought that I was gone
untill I heard that familiar voice
and knew that it was done
the stone had been destroyed
and he grew weak again
and thats when she started loving me
ron's little sister Gin
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"Sirius, where's James?"
"where do you think he is wormtail?"
" um... uh.... snogging lily in a cupboard??
" OMG!!!. MOONY!!! WORMTAIL'S GETTING SMART!!!
* compliments of old Dave Lupin, R.I.P!!!*
* Im a poet!!!! Mr black the poet-sa16+( at the sphinx sofa)*
*thank you nicola!!!!*
Last edited by barabas black; 06-03-2007 at 10:03 AM.
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06-04-2007, 05:37 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Dominic(Dom) Dawson
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*claps* really good!
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06-21-2007, 10:46 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Your writing style is really good - but keep in mind that not all good poems have to rhyme!
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10-10-2007, 07:27 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: my own world
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I like them. I agree, not everything has to rhyme. Keep up the great work
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01-01-2008, 08:38 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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oooooh , i really like ur poems they're really awesome !!
good effort , keep it up
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02-17-2008, 08:02 PM
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| | Occamy
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Wonderland
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Transportation
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Ooh. Keep up the great work! I really like your poetry.
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10-20-2008, 08:32 AM
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| | Dugbog
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Kaylee Darkwater
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Oh wow those are really good! I can't wait to read more, plus I like your name 
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04-15-2009, 02:28 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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isabella Macmillan
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really really good!
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06-29-2009, 07:47 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
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Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
GOOD JOB DUDE!!!!!
I really like the first 1 but overall I like them all..
You need to be worshiped! lol PAMS!
:worship:
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07-05-2009, 06:18 AM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: California
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Isabella Black
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you are really good!
I love your first one. sooo funny lol.
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08-13-2009, 07:24 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Last poem 6/3/07
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