*~* hi! I've been writing since i was like 8! i have about....5 or so fan fics right now and i've just started here typing up my poems for you all to enjoy. I guess the reason I'm doing this is to get perspective on my life. lol. most of my poems are about something that happened to me so i mean i won't care if you don't like my writing style just don't say anything bad about the topics because they are all pretty much reallly personal. thanks for reading*~*

I just wrote this one today-

Let the world fall down
Let hatred cover the ground
Feel my soul slip through my icy veins
You can’t help me anymore

Let the raindrops come

Let it rain, let it hail, it won’t bother me
Let it snow, let it flood let it wash over me
Let me forgive all the wrongdoings done to me
Let me live, let me be happy

Let the raindrops come
Wash over me

I can see a change in your eyes
I can tell you look at me with despise
I’m not paranoid, just cautious because surprise
The raindrops will come and wash over me

Let it rain, let it hail, it won’t bother me
Let it snow, let it flood, let it wash over me
I will forgive all the wrongdoings done to me
Just let me live let me be… happy

Let the raindrops come




*~* that one is actually a song that i play with the piano but it's also a poem...review please, by the way im 13, live in usa*~*

here's another one *people need to REVIEW lol*

I follow the path the leads my day
dark bushes along the side of the trodden down grass
I've been here before
but I can't seem to find
a new place to hide
a new place to run
a place to be alone







ok those two arent my best by far. i dont really like them but decided to post them lol. i have a really good one coming up soon,. but please post.

your poetry is ok. just needs alittle work. try to not include you and i words in there so much, it will make your poetry more interesting.

*~* imortal pain *~*
I'm sorry
please don't hate me
it's for your own good....

I want to take you by the shoulders
shake you till you awake
from this illusion that your living
from your pain and all your tears

You want to suffer
you want to bleed
but most of all you want
someone to tell you its ok

I want to take you by the shoulders
shake you till you awake
from this pain that your living
from this immortal pain...


just done today...meh its ok....

for once i wish there was someone to listen
someone to care for me as i care
for once i wish someone would be there
to support me when i'm down
for once i wish i could be happy
but then who would i tell it to?
for once i wish someone would care...

wishes don't come true......

hey ur a huffie too... besides that point... your peoms are good... they are def. getting better! i liked your last one... i like them because it seems as if you write from hwta you feel.... which makes poems even better! keep up the good work! i'll keep checking for me!

thank you for posting lol


Deeper than Skin

There aren't any scars left
lucky for you
no proof of your pain
or stupidness too...
but because there is no sign
no badge of your blood
you continue on
until there is one~



sorry my poems are short but i dunno. lol (OMG sorry i just had to post this JOHNNY DEPP IS playing WILLY WONKA in the remake of the film!!! OMG lol!)

A part of the Crowd 3-10-04
your sick of that feeling
in your throught
sick of your eyes watering
your body going cold
your cheeks are flushing
hate splashing back in your face
you put it all out
hoping it stays in its place

the deed is done
day in day out
your friends are gone
somehow they found out
and ironically enough
the only reason you purge
is to be part of their crowd.

oooo those last two poems were really good! doesn't matter how long they are! keep up the good work!

i agree! the last two poems are very good! it sounds like you write from your heart. keep it up!

im in the process of brainwracking so hold on a couple hours ill think of something lol...

this first one is really old and i just found it. i wrote it around alst year sometime.


to many choices
not enough time
im racing the clock
and falling behind
don't know what to do now
confusion everywhere
they're asking so many questions now
but answer do i dare?
so I'll just sit here quietly
not answering anyone
not saying a word
because it could be wrong...




Little Girl 3-16-04
A little girl cries as her heart brakes
it seems her doll is lost
people crowd around her just staring
no one helping to look...

A teenager cries as her arm bleeds
it seems herself is lost
friends crowd around just staring
nobody helping her stop

All Away 3-15-04
Take the blade away
Take the pain away
Take the sick away
Take the food away
Take the body away
Take the hand away
Take me away...

please post guys! lol




3/18/04
unsignificance
worthless
small
unheard
this is what i feel

spoiled
troubles
problems
help
this is what i hear

.... cut?



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kay i know this one is out there but i dunno. it makes sense to me lol. what do you think of it?

3-13-04
grip your fear
and try to let go
it sticks to your hand
and somehow you know
it will alway show

space 3-19-04
an empty space between us
a pause in the sentance
unresting hurt
uncomftorble stop
the space grows...



3-13-04
prove me wrong
just one word will do
let hear it said
let me hear it from you
just prove me wrong
I'm begging you to say
all the words you've said to no one,
youve been longing to say




*~* now thats it. I'm not posting till y'all post!! lol*~*

*~* k you guys are just evil. lol jk but ireally appreciate reviews, so please do if you read~ thanks! *~*


the first poems is about losing someone you love and just basically having to live without them... the second is a poem that i thought maybe Harry would be thinking of after Sirius'---departure...

So Cold 3-31-04
I'm so used to looking in your eyes
now they're closed forever
I'm so used to holding your hand
now you're so cold...
I can't see you anymore

When i close my eyes
and I imagine
your laugh, your smile, your face
I can close my eyes
and imagine
that you're here
with me all my life
... please don't leave me tonite


Sirius ( Harry's Poem) 3-31-04
I took for granted
all the time you looked at me
all the times we laughed together
you saw him in me

I took for granted
the first time we met
i let you fly away
that time no feeling of regret

but now i can't take it back
I wish i would have thought it through
I'm trying to to be hard on myself
but I can't do that when you not here...

without you i have no one
no parents to care
no brothers anywhere
no one to give a darn...


*~* herm... i don't really like these.. lol heres just one other thats just mine. i dunno*~*

....am i writing for no one??....


A shawdow away 4-7-04
farther away
the shawdow of the night
hide me
shield me
protect me from
myself
i shout out
but the shawdow clouds my mouth
choking me
preventing my breath
all this happens
in the
shawdows of the night.



The Moonlight 4-7-04


tge cry of the wolf
so sad, so strong
i wish my cry was
as beautiful
as hers...

the tear on my cheek
my voice my song
i wish my tears were
as clear
as hers



A perfect Profile 4-6-04
so unseen
althought I'm wearing a
t-shirt
so unknown
though i practically scream it
out
so hard
everyone supposes I'm the strong
one
so...
decietful

seriousely people, is my writing that bad?? lol


Hate

Your hating me
for what you've done
I'm responsible
supposedly
My heart falls
to me knees
my arm bleeds again
I must cut deeper than you have...

Sorry i haven't responded in awhile... your writing is far from bad its really good!!!!!!! i love it! keep up the good work! :flowersmile:

lol. im gonna post some new ones really soon, just need to hop in the shower and clean up a bit then I'll post em. thank you for reviewing!

Wow, these are all FANTASTIC!!!! I loved the first one, and the Sirius Black one almost made me weep!!! lol


Add more soon pls :rose:

lol... grrr lol im thinking of maybe delteing this portfolio cuz like i dunno i always forget to post more and people dont review lol.. let me know if i really should continue... i dont think i want to write only for two people... herm just let me know

Well, that's very dissapointing indeed! I've written stuff and not many people review mine! :ermsmile:

here i am back again! off of grounding and feeling MUCH better! here it goes, my first attempt at poetry with me actually being happy lol




Nothing better

California here I come
bring me some love
and then I see you come
I feel the heat it's not the sun
I know there's something there
i love your hair
you brush it out of your eyes
i practically melt

so now we're back home
all i wanna do is call
you up on the phone
but i'm to scared to loose
what was there from the start
why can't i choose for love
or just settle again
i can't just let this pass by
there was something in the air
between us it was the best
trip ever...
california gave me love.....



:OOC based on personal experience lol anyways pleaseeeeeeee review!:

hi

hideho
sorry i just had to try this out, i found out how to get new colors!

i hope these all work
here's marron... i hope it works i dunno what maroon looks like!
this is supposed to be dark orange...
regular oragne
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hot pink!!!jk lgjdfla

just regular pinkfjdkla

PAMS

Glad you're back. :flowersmile: