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05-10-2006, 01:19 PM
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#51 (permalink)
| | Ashwinder
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
Posts: 13,563
|  Tale as Old as Time
Quote:
Originally Posted by katiebell If you ever write another R/HR ...  I liked near the end of HBP when Hermione makes fun of (and then takes pity on) Ron when his relationship with Lavendar takes a turn and then when they're at the funeral and he has his arms around her. *whispers* i have to agree 
__________________ (My) love... (My) angel... (My) always...
[Words] of sentiments
Wishing to be said;
[But] your name alone
Can send this heart to overdrive;
Yet your presence, my [forever],
Can make a heart specialist lose his career.
[E.xxx] | 
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06-24-2006, 05:38 AM
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#52 (permalink)
| | Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Annabelle Lee Costas
First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
*Pops in and pouts*
*Has been a bad stalkee*
*Was hoping for an update*
=/ Hey hun! I know I havent posted in ages but I have been checking up! I loved the last R/hr post but I do like Katie's idea {Welcome btw  } XD
But... anyway.. *WANTS MORE FRESH UPDATES* I know you've been busy with work and life but if you ever get a chance...update  Here or our other special lil place!
Love ya,
~RQT
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile.
ツ .......... | |
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06-24-2006, 09:07 AM
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#53 (permalink)
| | Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
Posts: 3,271
| ♥ Poet Extraordinaire ♥
OMG, y'alls have no idea how long I've been wanting to do the R/Hr thing, the one towards the end of HBP. But to do that, I'd have to re-read that part. My nephew has one of my HBP's, and my cousin's wife borrowed my other one. So much for having 2 books, I have neither right now! Anyway, as soon as I get a hold of 'em again, I'd definitely make another one.
Anyway, I haven't done ANY poems at all lately because I've been super busy at work, and I'm having... issues with a boy. Maybe I can use that on my next one? 
But as soon as I update, I will personally stalk YOU to let you know! | |
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06-29-2006, 04:49 PM
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#54 (permalink)
|  Ron's Krum EnvySnidget
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Slumberland
Posts: 2,928
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Laieesha
Chance
I heard the word love softly spoken
By the one who made me heartbroken.
Why must you sit there, and only sigh?
Why say you love me, then say it was a lie?
At that Christmas party, you were to go with me
I pictured us two sitting by the Christmas Tree.
Then I was to drag you under the mistletoe...
But those never happened, you decided not to go.
We're both hesitating to cross that line
So what would it take for you to be mine?
I thought I've done everything I could do
But what I forgot is actually tell you I love you.
That's why you couldn't tell, why you didn't see
That I've loved all the time you spent with me.
I should just come out and say it, "I love you, Ron!"
But I decided to put it off, I'll do it later on.
One night my whole world just came tumbling down
When I spotted you kissing that Lavender Brown.
I suddenly couldn't breathe, chest full of pain
My heart was bleeding, I was going insane.
I don't understand why you would do this
Why, in front of me, must you two kiss?
It hurts, it hurts, was all I could think about
Couldn't take it any longer, I had to get out.
Found a dark room, drowned in my sorrows
I hoped and prayed it would be over tomorrow.
I should've told you, why did I wait?
I've missed my chance, I'm already too late.
I don't remember the rest of that night
I didn't want to relive that painful sight.
For now I will continue to be your friend
Wishing it will be you and me in the end...
Im going to tell Ottery and Nargles 'bout this one!!!!
need I answer the question????
    CANNONS
EDIT:this is what Nargles, Captain of the R/Hr ship said 'bout the poem. Quote:
Wow...speechless just now...She's got Hermione right on the nose! Tell her the R/Hr Captain approves highly of such and accurate and vivid poem!
cheers Ate Lai.
__________________ 
Thanks to the wonderful xiiWishiWasYours
Last edited by Simple Muggle; 06-30-2006 at 06:36 AM.
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07-05-2006, 11:17 PM
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#55 (permalink)
| | Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
Posts: 13,488
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Annabelle Lee Costas
First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
Quote:
But as soon as I update, I will personally stalk YOU to let you know!
XD Very funny... *Knows she's been a bad stalker* But, I will be first to post once the issues with your new beau have been solved and you finally give us more of your wonderful poems! XD
Haha...and remember... Lust---> Good hehe....
Lots of Luff,
~RQT
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile.
ツ .......... | |
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03-22-2007, 05:56 PM
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#56 (permalink)
| | Ashwinder
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
Posts: 13,563
| Tale as Old as Time
Ate Lai!! i'll never get tired of reading your poems and waiting for new ones!  g'luck in your lovelife!
__________________ (My) love... (My) angel... (My) always...
[Words] of sentiments
Wishing to be said;
[But] your name alone
Can send this heart to overdrive;
Yet your presence, my [forever],
Can make a heart specialist lose his career.
[E.xxx] | |
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04-07-2007, 03:20 PM
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#57 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: well...my nose was in the middle of DH, but I finished it, apparated here and idk where my nose is..
Posts: 248
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ambora
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Wow! I read Chance ~ and I love it! I can actually feel Hermione's heart shattering at Ron's kiss! Nice! If you want, you can check out my poetry thread - Tales of Hogwarts Hearts. I just began it a while ago, and I would like your opinion on them please. But I love your writing! write more! lol
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