Lmao, Lavender/Ron... I need to re-read Hbp...I forgot how funny it was... I dunno but no matter how much you try I'll be rolling all over the floor with tears in my eyes from laughing so hard after reading ANY Lavender poem...In other words, how would you even attempt to start it? I guess there was a bit of love in there but nothing could make it even look "deep" in my eyes... I'd love to see what you came up with though...Hehe, Who knows? Maybe it with your incredible talents, I'll be able to think of it as a real tearful heartbroken ship...**Cough**

WOW! I'm seriously still in awe because of it.... I forgot how much easier and the great flow your other poems had. I don't think there's anything else that I haven't done to show how much I love them so yah...I'll continue worshipping. *Worships* You guys do forget that I only stalk Lai so I can get special treatment....Hehe...I'm kidding, Lai knows why I stalk her ((The flatter comes easy for someone like her )) As for me telling Lumus, I'd be mad if I was away for SS, and no one told me about all the changes. So, there!
Can't wait for more....
~~~RQT XD

OMG great as usual!!! Keep on ur good work!!! Luv it!!! Yay!!!

wow!!! i love the recent R/Hr poem!!! i duno what to say...it's so....touching*holding up the tears*

keep it up Ate Lai!!\m/

:bump:

gotcha!

I don't have a new poem yet. I am happy to say I am working on one now, as I type this. I've just been really really busy at work, and I haven't had time to even GO on SS, much alone write a poem. Although, I have one I've been thinking about in a while. Well, I have 2 ideas. The 'ships been done, but it's something else. You'll see. Give me until tomorrow, and I hope to post it then.

(and I just don't want the thread to go to the old home thingee...)

Thanks and stuuuuuu....

We're still waiting...

It's not fair...I want to know the ideas... Maybe you could mention them next time?

~RQT

omg! i finally found time to do this!!

Again, I'm sorry for taking so long. Work was very, VERY, hectic the past couple of months. I've been trying to catch up on so many things, and well, I still haven't caught up yet.

So anyway.. here's my new one. It's my Harry/Cho poem. I think i kinda like the outcome of this one. Better than my last R/Hr one.

Have fun reading!!

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Look My Way

I've liked you since the first day
I hoped and wished you'd look my way.
I didn't know what I would say
You just never looked my way.

I've watched and admired you and your talent
I smiled, but you didn't know what it meant.
As your broom came to a slow descent
You saw me in the crowd, not knowing my intent.

I meant to be there so you will see
That there's a girl who's longing to be
Yours forever, only you and me
I will wait for you, this I guarantee.

Now I see you, I catch you looking
Yet you haven't even tried approaching.
Is there something I'm not understanding?
You seem to like me, but we're not talking.

Everyday, my feelings for you grow
And I sincerely want you to know
When you asked me to the ball and I said "No",
Was the one day I admit I've regretted so.

I said I was sorry, and that night I cried
I replayed that moment in my head every night.
Why didn't I wait longer? I should've tried
And now it's tearing up my heart inside.

After that year, I was glad we were closer
We finally had a chance to be together.
I really liked you, I thought you were better
Was it wishful thinking that you'd be mine forever?

We slowly, but surely, drifted apart
I can't take this, have pity on my heart.
I gave it my all, but you didn't do your part,
I had to let you go, I need a fresh start.

Now I'm living my life day after day
Now all I can do is just hope and pray.
I've come to realize, and I'm sad to say
That you will never again look my way.

My!!! It's amazingly amazing!!! They so DO rhyme (random statement) ! Err... *runs out of words* Anyway, i love it even if i don't ship Harry/Cho. I just love it and all your previous poems - You're just amazing. Keep up the good work! I hope the next one won't take too long bcuz i really dig them
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS

^ aaww thanks!!

Don't worry, I don't ship Harry/Cho either. See, that's why in THAT poem, I showed that Harry dumped her. Of course, we all know that it's because it's Ginny he's meant to be with.

I just feel sad for her, but we all know she was in the rebound. She seemed to really like Harry though, but it just didn't work out. *shrugs*

Oh, and yes, I'll try not to take too long next time...

OMG im so impressed with your skills!!!!! i love it... though not the theme/ship, but your creation :worship: oh my, that was totally awesome! I it so much!!! I cant seem to explain more by words... PAMS

im so not wrong by subscribing here... its worth my wait
love you so much Laieesha

say what!? THE R/Hr poem? as is THE SOMEHOW R/Hr poem, not that good!? say what!? i LOVE iT!!! i let my sis read it and she said that it's so amazing...and i told her that you posted it and said that it's not your best, and she said that if this is not her best, what more would it be if she wrote her!? see, it's amazing.-period-
i'm with you ate Lai!

Look My Way, it's nice*coughdon'tshipitcough* ehem...lol seriously, it's nice..so wonderful! so*lost her words* yeah..i could imagine me and "high" lol.. i LOVE iT as much as i LOVE Somehow!

you ate Lai! you're so great!!

you rOck! \m/

wow these are great poems. the words just flow together. i cant wait for you to write more

I loved it! I'm a huge, huge R/Hr shipper so this is like candy to me!
Actually, I'm somewhat the R/Hr Ship Captain so I totally approve.
I love all your poems...even that Cho/Cedric struck my heart somewhere.
Keep it up! *fires cannon*

thanks narglesRnifty! im a huge r/hr shipper too... it's like, ask her out already! anyway, we all know it's meant to be.

and thanks for stopping by jk fan. i try to make it 'flow together' as much as i can. and yeah, i can't wait for me to write more too. im being lazy and uninspired at the moment...

and eliza, you had your sister read it too??? aaww... *feels special* thanks for the reassurance, but i still think i didn't capture hermione's anger about ron. i'll make it up next time though... *glomps you back*

and lala!! *loves on you* you're too sweet. thanks for subscribing too. i'll try not to make you wait longer next time...

and to all of you, i really do appreciate these comments. it makes me want to write more, knowing that it's being read. i actually wrote several poems before, but i never really shared them. they were sort of just.. outlets from my emotional teen days. but now... im always so flattered...

thanks again!! *glomps all my readers*

All of your poems are lovely so PAMS!
~Cassie

Oh my lordie, Laieesha!

Very good indeed. I especially liked the Cho/Cedric one... so good, but sadness. .... *mutters* Why do the pretty ones have to die?

Oh and I know something else to cheer you up (besides this post) ... Smallville's new tomorrow! XD

very impressive man u sure are talented. keep up the coooooooooool work

wow....
ehem...
you know I LOVE you R/Hr poems!!
this one really suits the ship!!!!!
waaaaaaaahhhhhhh.....

cassie, quidditch_chick, sweetwitch, and my Sheilla!!

thank you all for reading my poems... I know I haven't updated in quite some time, but it's for the same reason... work.

anyway, here's something i jotted down a piece of paper last night. i knew i had to write because if i didn't, i would've forgotten it by the time i woke up.

so here it goes... it's another R/Hr one, and i hope i can redeem myself from the blunder i made with the previous R/Hr poem.

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Chance

I heard the word love softly spoken
By the one who made me heartbroken.
Why must you sit there, and only sigh?
Why say you love me, then say it was a lie?

At that Christmas party, you were to go with me
I pictured us two sitting by the Christmas Tree.
Then I was to drag you under the mistletoe...
But those never happened, you decided not to go.

We're both hesitating to cross that line
So what would it take for you to be mine?
I thought I've done everything I could do
But what I forgot is actually tell you I love you.

That's why you couldn't tell, why you didn't see
That I've loved all the time you spent with me.
I should just come out and say it, "I love you, Ron!"
But I decided to put it off, I'll do it later on.

One night my whole world just came tumbling down
When I spotted you kissing that Lavender Brown.
I suddenly couldn't breathe, chest full of pain
My heart was bleeding, I was going insane.

I don't understand why you would do this
Why, in front of me, must you two kiss?
It hurts, it hurts, was all I could think about
Couldn't take it any longer, I had to get out.

Found a dark room, drowned in my sorrows
I hoped and prayed it would be over tomorrow.
I should've told you, why did I wait?
I've missed my chance, I'm already too late.

I don't remember the rest of that night
I didn't want to relive that painful sight.
For now I will continue to be your friend
Wishing it will be you and me in the end...

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do y'alls think i captured hermione's feelings more on this one??

you certainly did Lai!!!! *aww* its so sweet I it so much!!!!!!! especially these lines:
for that poem MORE!!

aaww thanks Lala!!

i just noticed that it was a like a 2 month gap between my last two poems. Sorry, i'll try to update more often.

AWWW!!!!

it's so wonderful Ate Lai!! i <333333333333 it!!!!!!!

and i agree with Lala!!
awww!!! so sweet and all!!

for the poem and the others as well!!

you RoCK, Ate Lai!!! s on you!!

lots of luv'n,
~eliza

elizaaaaa!! *loves* thankees!!

im not getting as much readers as i used to... it's ok though.. i'll keep writing..

*glompsclings*

yeah.. but you have stalkers i know some but there are some who doesn't want to be known.. i wonder who they are

Well, here you are! Thanks, Tina, for the heads up.

Yay, new poem ... makes me sad. It's perfect; explains Hermione's feelings beautifully.

If you ever write another R/HR ... I liked near the end of HBP when Hermione makes fun of (and then takes pity on) Ron when his relationship with Lavendar takes a turn and then when they're at the funeral and he has his arms around her.

*phew* Omg! I've just read them all, and I have to tell you this, Lai: Your poems are AMAZING. (...although you might already know this!)

Some of my favorites: So Close, And Yet So Far, I Don't Care, Pretty Brown Eyes, Look My Way and my absolute favorite is Chance! You really did a great job on it. It's just plain AWESOME.

PAMS! =D

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