ok, so heres the first poem i'm going to post.

Why
Why, why, why?
Why should I keep trying?
Why, why, oh why,
Don't I just let go

I have so many questions
I need some answers now!
I want to just give
But I just don't know how

I think I should just stop
I could then be free
But there won't be an end
To all this misery

It sux i know, but oh well.

I know, I know, I'm the worst poet ever! I was bored, so i decided to attempt to write poems

Nah, don't be so harsh on yourself. First you should try more times before giving up.
I think the problem with that poem is that is shows very little of youself, and a lot of cliché impersonal fragments make it too predictable and, if I may, boring. Even if you are doing a cliché fragment you should put it with your own wording (I doubt you would say aloud 'why, why, oh why!' for example) and in a way which express exactly what you wanna tell until you feel satisfied - I stress YOU :: no matter if every other hates your poems, they are yours and you are the one who has to be satisfied.

Ok, thank you so much for the advice! And I know it's boring, but I just don't have much of a talent for poetry, I just wanted to try it.