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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
07-28-2003, 04:22 AM
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donnie darko fan Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2002
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Guh. I hate this poem, but I'm posting it anyway.
I hate you when you're angry,
I hate you when you're scared,
I hate it when you call me names,
I hate that I still care.
I hate the fact I love you,
I hate it when I cry,
I hate the pain you give me,
I hate it when you lie.
I hate that I'm so weak
I can't protect myself from you,
I hate it when you say 'I'm sorry'
and I actually think it's true.
I hate the fact you think I'm stupid,
I hate the fact you're right,
I hate it when the one I love
fills me with such fright.
I hate the fact you dumped me
to go out with someone new,
I hate that, even though you hurt me,
I'll always love you.
© Jen Sellers/ronweasleylover
The craptasticalness of that poem is amazing.
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07-28-2003, 09:19 AM
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| | Augurey
Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Here
Posts: 11,990
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I liked that poem. Don't way it's crap.
They are way better than mine.
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07-28-2003, 09:49 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2002
Posts: 1,344
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Quote: Originally posted by ronweasleylover@Jul 28 2003, 12:29 AM
Guh. I hate this poem, but I'm posting it anyway.
I hate you when you're angry,
I hate you when you're scared,
I hate it when you call me names,
I hate that I still care.
I hate the fact I love you,
I hate it when I cry,
I hate the pain you give me,
I hate it when you lie.
I hate that I'm so weak
I can't protect myself from you,
I hate it when you say 'I'm sorry'
and I actually think it's true.
I hate the fact you think I'm stupid,
I hate the fact you're right,
I hate it when the one I love
fills me with such fright.
I hate the fact you dumped me
to go out with someone new,
I hate that, even though you hurt me,
I'll always still love you.
© Jen Sellers/ronweasleylover
The craptasticalness of that poem is amazing. There's NO way you hate this poem! It glows brilliance! I'm sure at least 2 million girls can relate to it! No, I'm lying...Make it 2.75 million girls!
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07-28-2003, 04:39 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Jersey City, New Jersey, USA
Posts: 160
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You hate that poem? I love that poem!!! HOW COULD U POSSIBLY HATE THAT POEM!! It's so sad!! So beautiful too! LoL.... I give you another 4 thumbs up :up: :up: :up: :up: !
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07-28-2003, 04:43 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: California -dances-
Posts: 6,720
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that poem rocks!
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07-28-2003, 07:33 PM
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donnie darko fan Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2002
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Oh, well thanks then guys! Hah, I thought it was so bad.
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07-28-2003, 08:21 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: in the mad mad heights YO!
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:flowersmile: Good Job! You get a flower from me! thats such a high praise!
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07-28-2003, 10:11 PM
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donnie darko fan Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2002
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*Gasp* A flower from Chels!? Why, that's like getting a kiss from Jake Gyllenhaal..ONLY BETTER!
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07-29-2003, 02:08 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Cincinnati... ok N.
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Wow the intensity of these words are amazing! It's made me feel what you're feeling, and it's bone chilling. You are an amazing writer, and I envy you 
I want to be the froofy flower-thrower girl! This will be the best wedding haha...
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07-29-2003, 02:51 AM
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donnie darko fan Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2002
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Hahaha, just for that, Elise, you CAN be the froofy flower-thrower girl. You can wear a similar, but shorter, and WAY poofier pink sequined dress. 
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07-29-2003, 06:49 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Cincinnati... ok N.
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Oh dear... *squirms as the words bounce in my head* Okay Jen anything for you, lol.
Post more poems if you got em'! They are fabulous!
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07-29-2003, 10:07 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2003 Location: in the flaming depths of #ell
Posts: 6,910
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I just read what you have posted so far and they're great. post more if you can.
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08-01-2003, 03:55 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
Posts: 898
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Wow! :o
You are good at putting your emotions into words.
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08-01-2003, 07:07 PM
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|  drinks vanilla coke on the moon!Mooncalf
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Chillin Out on the M
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They are fabulous as ever Jen. I think you get the emotions down well, I think it's your greatest strength and my greatest weakness.
Keep Writing
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08-05-2003, 09:14 AM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Wiltshire, England
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Quote: Simply because of my immense lack of creativity. Oh yeah, sure Jen, whatever you say...if you had no creativity I would not be making this post! *glares at Jen accusingly*
They are awesomeness Jen *sighs* I hate to think you went through this! *hugs* :flowersmile:
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08-18-2003, 11:44 PM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: very annoying town in the U.S.
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Your poems are awesomely great Jen! 
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08-19-2003, 12:26 AM
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donnie darko fan Chizpurfle
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