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07-26-2009, 02:46 AM
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#76 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year |  ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Hey Guys 
Ok...
Like I said..
There will be four long poems...
It would be like a Saga....
I hope you enjoy the poem..
Its the same poem..
But here is the rest of it.....
Hope you like it!!!
#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#* #*#*#*#*#[/B] Black Smoke
The Clock Bell Rang...
Ringing...
Ringing...
Loud...
And Heavy....
Scary.....
I was just sitting....
Then.
I was suddenly at the Town Hall..
But I wasnt alone...
Every person from our town...
Was here....
The Bell rang once more....
Everything went dark....
Then Lightning shot up in the air...
In those quick seconds...
Of blinding light....
I saw....
With every lightning shot...
A New dark hooded figure appeared...
Right in the middle of the street....
With a big bang...
The lightning once again struck...
Then..
Around my people of the town...
Every eletric,moving thing..
Stopped...
And A small piece of light shined....
Toward the people in mask.....
Some people yelled...
But I wasnt afraid at all...
The man in the middle said...
With a happy..content tone...,
"Your prime minister....
Is dead....
There are other people within your world..
Hiding...
And Un-discovered...
There are wizards...
Magic exsist....
Dont deny it...
You filthy Muggles...
As yall live Unharmed...
And untouched....
Something has brought up...
There is.
A war...
You see...
I.
And my Fellow DeathEaters...
Are loyal to A Person...
With great power not even a regular wizard has...
He soon shall have the wizarding world in his grasp..
And by the looks of it...
You need someone to lead...
And take the postition of being your Prime Minister....
Lord Voldemort...
Will now be your leader...
If you break any rules...
The punishment..
Is Death.
Does anyone have any objections?"
'No one spoke up....
I was shocked....
I couldnt believe wizards exsisted...
But I belived this person named
Lord Voldemort...
Couldnt be nice....
Bad things were happening to the other wizards....
Us...
I think the correct term...
As the wizards called us..
Muggles?
We needed to make a stand...'
The Deatheater nodded...
As no one seemed to be objecting...
And said,
"Wise choice muggles...
I shall see that Our..
Lord Voldemort doesnt kill yall...
Not until for another week...
Goodbye."
Lightning flashed once more....
When I opened my eyes...
The sun shined once more....
And the so called,
"DeathEaters.."
Were gone...
And the electricity and every moving thing...
Worked again...
Then.
"What the Hell???!!!
How did I end up back here??!!!"
I was back in my house..
sitting....
A war between us humans..
And Dark wizards is going to begin...
Everything...
As we knew..
Both in the Wizarding...
And...
Muggle world..
Has...
Indeed.
Changed.
Say goodbye..
To equal rights..
For only..
ONE VOICE..
Rules..
And Controls...
The two seperate worlds...
And that was...
Our..
Both Muggle..
and wizarding..
Worlds..
Lord Voldemort...
Say goodbye..
To Freedom.
They will put you back..
To where you've started...
And say goodbye..
To your life...
Your..
Dead.
Dark clouds...
Swirl and swift..
Through the sky..
Three forms glide through...
This small town..
Breaking..
And..
Shattering glass...
As they..
Flow by...
Then they stop.
They soon...
Took of forms of people...
Cloaks..
Covering...
Their backs...
and..
Blowing..
In the air..
Silver masks...
Covering..
Their faces..
And Their worst fears..
One spoke..
Quietly to himself..,
"Its been long enough...
Muggles....
Now.
Perish...."
At a flick of their wands..
A simple flick..
Like nothing...
Nothing at all...
The houses burned...
You hear children..
Pleading...
Crying out...
Who will save them now!!!!!!
But..
Surely..
The DeathEaters...
Didnt care at all..
They left them..
To die.
As they went...
Away...
And to plan..
another attack.
The fire..
Illuminated..
Fear..
Terror..
And lost...
Lost of Hope..
Right into the muggles eyes...
For tHe families...
That lived around the burning houses...
Stepped out of their doors...
Shocked...
To see..
The fire..
And the burned bodies..
Laying...
On the ground..
There was nothing the muggles could do..
Just cry...
They were controlled...
Overpowered..
By Lord...
Lord Voldemort...
Which..
They didnt know..
Who he was...
And..
Everyday.
Find...
So called...,
"DeathEaters.."
Causing trouble...,
And all...
Sorts of...
Deaths...
All.
Around.
They were Standing together.
Hand by Hand...
Close..
Not even inches apart..
The large group of Muggles...
Gazed at the fire...
The Black Smoke...
Took up the the souls...
Of onced..
Living beings...
One of their own...
They have been...
pushed too far..
Now..
And forever...
When the world needed it the most...
The muggles standed together..
United as one...
It wasnt just the..
Good vs. Evil Battle with only wizards...
It was now.
Their War too.
A small child...
Broke free..
Out of his mothers grasp...,
"What are you doing!!!???
'Come back here!!' "
The child stopped to a complete hault..
Turned to his mothers face...
Then..
Behind his back...
Some Black smoke thickened..
And..
Thickened...
It couldnt be just smoke...
It had to be..
Something else...
And then,
The mother said... Scared..,
"RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The child no older than eight...
Was blank..
Shocked..
Still faced toward his mother..
Not willing to turn back...
His eyes were wide open..
Then he said...
Soft..
Calm..
And Scared..,
"Help....................................ME."
Arms appeared in the black smoke..
And it took the boy...
Somewhere in the Unknown..
You heared in the distance...
"STOP IT!!!!
HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IM SCARED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Then crack....
Dead.
Then the mother yelled...,
"NO!!!!!!!!!!! MY BOY!!!"
All of the muggles turned...
As they saw the women..
Crying...
Her baby boy...
Was gone...
Then a scream was heard..,
"CRUCIO!!!!"
a DeathEater...
Torturing a women...
"CRUCIO!!!!!!!!!"
He was laughing...
Laughing until his heart..
Was content.
Then The Deatheater stopped...
He was shaking...
Still...
His wand...
Pointing...
At the womens chest...
"AVADA KEDAVRA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
As the muggles watched in horror...
They quickly ran...
"NO!!!!"
The DeathEater screamed....
More hooded figures....
More of his people...
They surrounded the muggles..
"BEG FOR YOUR LIVES...
SCREAM IN FRIGHT...
THE DARKLORD HAS RULED ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
'EVEN YOU...
FITHLY MUGGLES...
THE END...
IS NEAR FOR YALL!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Black smoke....
Appeared all around...
Surrounding whats left of people...
Laughing Came from the DeathEaters...
One yelled....
"LEVICORPUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
It sent a little girl..
Soaring in the air...
She yelled...
And yelled...
Her body landed against a fence post...
The little girl's braided hair...
Covered...
Her tears....
That she shed...
Before...
She ended up...
Dead.
Hope was gone...
Never to return...
I was there...
When everything happened to go wrong...
I speak for all muggles...
"Is anyone out there to help us???"
'We will fight our war here...
someone...
stop this....' "
Im sad to say this...
Today...
The people who survived...
Including me...
We saw our own kind...
get..
Slaughtered...
And we saw...
Black Smoke...
go up..
Into the air...
The sign of..
Death.
We will....
be burned in fire...
Will will...
cry until we die..
We will..
keep moving...
And..
We will..
gather some more people...
We will keep fighting till we die.
We...
Stand...
United...
LET EVIL FALL!!!!!!!!!
Us...
Muggles..
ARE IN FOR A BLOODY NIGHT!
But I bet us muggles dont have it hard...
Ive heard stuff...
Its true..
And horrific..
Thats another tale to tell....
You heard our muggle story....
Black Smoke went up in the air....
All around...
The world.......
We will soon be with our kind...
Dead..
Goodbye...
So long...
Forever...
For my...
Black Smoke...
Went up...
In the...
Air.
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Ok hope you liked it...
That was the first of the Four long poems...
That was the muggle war..
Stay tuned...
There is 3 more wars to go...
I LOVE ALL OF YOU...
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!!!
-Xavier-
Last edited by Droo; 07-26-2009 at 01:24 PM.
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07-26-2009, 03:31 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In my head
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Layla Amorina
Fifth Year |
Hey! It was really good! As usual  The breaks are a little weird, though. Can't wait for the other three!!
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07-27-2009, 05:45 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
OMG! dude your amazing keep going! the snape and lilly thing very nearly made me cry. i have a soft spot fo old snapey. wow
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07-28-2009, 08:05 PM
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| | Grindylow
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: GMT+2
Posts: 14,145
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Sixth Year | Manananal مش عارفة
I like the poem it's really good , GO On  | |
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07-29-2009, 04:17 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: island of misfit toy
Posts: 399
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wow xavier i 've only read the first poem but it was really good you described everything perfectly i saw it all in mind job well done
you are really creative i love these poems
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07-30-2009, 10:48 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
dude, your awsome. i can tell you love what you do Quote:
You heared in the distance...
"STOP IT!!!!
HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IM SCARED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Then crack....
Dead.
Then the mother yelled...,
"NO!!!!!!!!!!! MY BOY!!!"
All of the muggles turned...
As they saw the women..
Crying...
Her baby boy...
Was gone...
i very nearly cried at this bit! you think of everything. i love it cos its not just about one thing, youve got the muggles the death eaters..EVERYONE!! more please | |
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07-31-2009, 12:11 AM
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#82 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
I luffed it!
I have no more words to describe it because it was the best poem I have ever read... Jess
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07-31-2009, 01:32 AM
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#83 (permalink)
| | Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,841
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexander River Hirsch
Gryffindor Third Year
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That was so sad! Those poor Muggles! I started crying so much! I loved it as ever! Great post! Can't wait for more! | |
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08-05-2009, 08:35 PM
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#84 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
hello?!?
more please!!!
we're waiting Xavierluffehh!!! xDDD Jess
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08-05-2009, 09:50 PM
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#85 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
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Originally Posted by dracos.girl  Hey! It was really good! As usual The breaks are a little weird, though. Can't wait for the other three!! ===============================================
My poems arent that great...
And ya..The other Three long poems are coming...
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by firenjen OMG! dude your amazing keep going! the snape and lilly thing very nearly made me cry. i have a soft spot fo old snapey. wow ===============================================
Ok I will....
Ya that Snape and Lily one made me...
Almost Cry...
And Wow?
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by DFTBA I like the poem it's really good , GO On ===============================================
Thank you..
Thank you..
**I take a bow..**
I will Go on....
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by therealginnyweasly wow xavier i 've only read the first poem but it was really good you described everything perfectly i saw it all in mind job well done
you are really creative i love these poems =============================================
Ya I love the First Poem...
Wow you saw it in Your head???
And thank you...
I know Im Creative...I think..
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Originally Posted by firenjen dude, your awsome. i can tell you love what you do
I very nearly cried at this bit! you think of everything. i love it cos its not just about one thing, youve got the muggles the death eaters..EVERYONE!! more please ===============================================
Thank you...
Your awesome too....
Sure thing...
Im posting a poem now....
But It not One Of the Long poems...
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron I luffed it!
I have no more words to describe it because it was the best poem I have ever read... Jess ===============================================
Thanks...
That means alot Jess...
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by hermionesclone That was so sad! Those poor Muggles! I started crying so much! I loved it as ever! Great post! Can't wait for more! ==============================================
I know..
I feel sorry for the Muggles.....
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron hello?!?
more please!!!
we're waiting Xavierluffehh!!! xDDD Jess ===============================================
Dont worry the Wait is over...
A new Poem Is up!!!
-Xavier-
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Hey Guys....
Ok well here is a new poem...
And its Not One Of those Long Poems....
Its just A regular Hp poem....
Just To inform Yall....
School Is coming around the Corner for me....
Very soon...
And to tell you that Im not Letting this Thread Close..
Im still Going to Write Poems...
But Not As often....
Ok??
Because This Year For Me is going to Be hard on Me...
So I hope You Understand...
So Here is the New Poem....
Thats Not One Of the Three Long Poems...
Just A regular HP Poem...
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Nine Tears...
I....
Only Allowed My...
Vulnerable Self..
To go through.
So much pain...
And Live with Myself...
No one else....
I dont blame them...
I'm Just Nothing....
Piece Of Dust..
Just Blowing Away...
The First Tear That I had Shed..
Was when...
You said..
Behind my back....
That No wonder...
I have no friends...
Which led me toward the Girls Bathroom...
Crying...
Sobbing...
And I almost Met My death...
Almost...
Crushed By a...
Fully-Grown..
Giant...
The Second...
Of the Nine Tears...
I was Kneeling down...
Right Beside My BestFriend....
He was weak....
He needed Me...
But just Seeing him..
Broken Down...
For he Just found out a piece...
OF evidence of...
Why His Parents Are Dead...
It hurt Me...
And Then...
I was Crying With Him...
Harry...
My Bestfriend...
The Third Tear....
Was When I watched....
A blade Chop...
BuckBeaks Head Off...
Death Was little to Me then...
But I know...
In Mere Time...
That I will See Death...
Overpowering Me...
Wrap Me...
Wherever I may Go...
Wherever Fate Leads Me....
Already To My Fourth Tear...
Full Of Emotions And Rage...
Bubbled Up inside me..
At The End Of The Yule Ball...
You said It was a mistake...
To Take Viktor Krum As My Date...
I Had No Choice...
For He asked me First....
And You waited...
And Used me...
As your last resort....
It hurt...
I felt Something...
A need to Want you..
Even..
More...
As I laid There on the Steps...
Crying....
Left with No one....
All alone...
Just me...
My Fifth Of The Nine Tears that Fell..
I was confused...
You suddenly appeared In the Room....
You were not Alone...
You were...
With,"Her."
So Lavendar And You can snog up here...
Fury....
Anger...
Jealousy...
Fustration...
Heartbroken...
Stabbed In the Back...
Despise...
Hate....
Unloved...
Not wanted...
All alone...
No one to Hold...
You love her...
Not me...
I tried to Hurt you...
But You stepped away...
And Left to Get your Kiss With Her....
Harry Beside me...
He held me...
I cried...
The 6th Tear...
It fell...
With The Memroies I had with Him...
Brave and True...
The Greatest Wizard I ever Knew...
He was Betrayed...
Decieved...
As I stood On A chair...
Crying....
At Your Funeral...
No one is safe anymore...
For Now your Dead..
Gone...
Dumbledore...
The Seventh...
Included alot Of Tears...
I put them...
All into One....
Because...
they all went...
They were Dead...
Mad-Eye-Moody...
So Fearless...
And A warrior...
I just Couldnt Believe He WAS GONE...
It was sad..
But True...
Dobby...
A mistreated HouseElf....
Lonely...
And Scared...
He sacrificed Himself...
To save Me Harry And Ron....
We buried Him Under The Ground...
It wasnt much...
But there was nothing else we could Do...
And Fred...
He died In the Battle Of Hogwarts..
Tonks...
And Lupin...
Both Dead...
But thier New Born Baby....
Alive...
But Now..
Without Parents...
All the Deaths Ive Seen...
And heard...
Ended...
For A world....
With Peace...
It was sad...
But Now...
Voldemort Was Now Dead...
The 8th Tear I shed....
Was when I went to Go Find My parents....
...And Refresh Their Minds...
When I met Them...
I said,"Im Your Daughter.."
And they said that They dont have a daughter...
It broke my heart...
Because Before I went to Hunt Horcruxes...
I had To use Magic...
So They Could Forget Everthing About Their Own Daughter...
But soon Enough I filled their Minds...
With Memories Of me...
And I was soon Back In their Arms Once more...
The Ninth Tear That I had Shed...
Was Beautiful....
We were joined together By love...
You said,"I Do."
It Was tears Of Joy...
And After That Ron Wiped My Tears Away,,
And Said,"I love You Hermione...
Then there was no more more tears from Then On....
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Hoped You liked It...
Love Yall...
-Xavier-
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08-06-2009, 02:56 AM
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#86 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
WOAH!!!!!!!
Xavierluff that was brilliantamazingfantasticawesomeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! xDDD
I cried during part of it but the end made me feel so fuzzy and warm inside. xD Jess
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08-06-2009, 03:18 AM
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|   SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
Finally back after my trip!
Enjoyed reading through the thread, great new poetry.
More soon, mmkay? You do a great job. =]
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08-06-2009, 07:37 PM
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#88 (permalink)
| | Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexander River Hirsch
Gryffindor Third Year
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Nine tears made me cry so much! It was so sad! The first 8 tears were. The last one was so cute that i cried even more. Only because i was happy and everything turned out all right. I can't believe it. It's so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! | |
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08-10-2009, 02:31 PM
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| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Sarani Glass
Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
-pokes t3h Xavier-
I want a new poemmm!
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08-10-2009, 04:05 PM
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#90 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron WOAH!!!!!!!
Xavierluff that was brilliantamazingfantasticawesomeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! xDDD
I cried during part of it but the end made me feel so fuzzy and warm inside. xD Jess ================================================== ====
Hehehehehe..
I loved the Ending of it...
It made me fuzzy inside too......
I hope you like this next one....
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Finally back after my trip!
Enjoyed reading through the thread, great new poetry.
More soon, mmkay? You do a great job. =]
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YAY!!!!
Your back..
**I cling on to you..**
Dont worry the New poem is coming...
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by hermionesclone Nine tears made me cry so much! It was so sad! The first 8 tears were. The last one was so cute that i cried even more. Only because i was happy and everything turned out all right. I can't believe it. It's so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! ================================================== ==
Ya I like the Last tear the Most....
I was sooo happy...
(Eventhough I made the Poem)
And thank you...
And New Poem will be up...
-Xaveir-
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie -pokes t3h Xavier-
I want a new poemmm!
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Fine...
Just for you ill post a poem straight away....
Gosh man!!! jkjkjkjk lol
I hope you like it...
Here are some flowers to make up for the Times I havent posted a poem in a while.....
-Xavier-
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Hello Guys
Ok....
You know How I still Had to write the 3 Wars to the Previous war with the Muggles....
Well they are done....
But..Here is the Deal...
Im leaving them As cliffhangers.....
For the Mean time...
I will be posting Regular HP Poems....
So here is a new Hp Poem...
That is not one of the Long ones....
Thanks to Maxie..**Cough** **FORCED ME** **Cough**
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Lie To Me
I laid curled up...
wrapped in your arms that Night....
The world Surrounding us...
Within it...
Terror was everywhere......
I didnt want to worry myself....
Hopefull that I will stay calm...
And Believe that everything...
Everyone...
Will be alright....
As I lay here...
As I saw it.....
Protected...
In the Arms of Ronald.....
We stared at the World...
Glistening with Fire...
And Bodies laying...
Everywhere...
I looked up at Ron....
My voice calm....
and I said....
"Lie to Me..."
He stared at me.....
and he said...,
"Everything will be fine..."
Then We turned...
A bang out in the Distance.....
People screaming....
DeathEaters looming....
Killing everyone...
And everywhere.....
A deathEater pointed his wand toward a house.....
It blew up...
As bright orange shot off...
From The DeathEaters wand....
Not caring if they Died or not...
Tears fled from my eyes...
They dripped onto the Ground...
Where I laid helpless in Ron's arms....
I then say....,
"Lie to me...."
Your voice was worried and scared....
"No one is going to hurt you..."
The I saw an image....
Like a dream.....
I was fighting 2 DeathEaters at the same time....
I was sweating....
I could see that I was in Trouble....
I was losing....
I was weak.....
Then the DeathEaters pointed his Wand at me...
And the DeathEater said....,
"STUPEFY!!!"
Red light was shot from the tip of the wand....
The spell moving slowly.....
I reached for my wand....
But my arm was moving slowly....
But It was too late...
And The Blazing...
Firery Spell...
Hit me.........
Square in the Chest...
I was weak....
I fell on a hard Large Rock...
Then I saw Red Substance trickling from...
And down my mouth.....
Then It went black...
I was back to where I was....
I still laid upon in Rons Arms...
I thought About what happened in my dream...
Then I turned to Ron again.....
And I said," Lie to me..."
Then you said...,
"Im not going anywhere..."
I thought about that....
About that Lie....
I was then Dreaming that We were
Together....
We were in love.....
You kissed upon me.....
We broke apart.....
I looked Into your eyes....
But your eyes were Focused somewhere else....
The I turned...
Out Of Nowhere...
Lavendar was there...
and She said,"Come On Won-Won....."
The Ron let go Of me...
And Left me stranded....
Alone.....
After what I thought I was back to Reality...
Me and Ron Still Inclosed Together...
Looking at the World.....
Then I said...,
"Tell me the Truth...
Do you love me.....???"
He looked Into My eyes......
"Yes...I do..."
We had happy years together after...
Me and Ron Got married.....
Then A day came....
I was crying...
Looking at you....
I said..,"Dont Die.....
Lie to me.."
And you were weak.....
But you spoke these words....
that Came out of Your mouth...,
"Im not going to die...."
But then....
You died....
It was a fact.....
You left.....
I was all alone....
Without you Ron....
Im nothing...
I loved you...
and I will not stop Loving you....
Until The Day Ill draw My last Breath....
When Im dead...
When Im no more....
I wont stop loving you...
And that is not a lie...
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I really didnt like it...
But Yall might've...
Anyways I will post another poem soon...
-Xavier- AND GUYS CHECK OUT JESS&MARCYS FABTABULOUS SHOP OF GRAPHICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS AWESOME......
THEY MADE MY AWESOME AVATAR!!!
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08-10-2009, 05:45 PM
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OMG! That was so sad! I started crying (even though i'm watching Friends re-runs - i was laughing and crying at the same time)! It was so deep and meaningful. Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
PS: I've been to Jess&Marcy's Fantabulous Shop Of Graphics. I love your avatar! They made my siggy!
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08-10-2009, 10:20 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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I absolutely loved it Xavier!
It was amazing!
So is that how you got the idea for the avatar from your poem?
PAMS!! please
Jessica
ooc: Awww thanks Xavier for the ad! *snuggle* I'm glad you and hermionesclone like your avatar and siggy!
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Reason: Forgot to center it. :P
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08-13-2009, 06:15 PM
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Powerful...
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08-13-2009, 07:29 PM
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Hey Xavier! I'm back. <333 Your poems are still really powerful. <3
Love, Dory
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08-14-2009, 04:08 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
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Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
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Originally Posted by Spork! Hey Xavier! I'm back. <333 Your poems are still really powerful. <3
Love, Dory ================================================
Hey Dory!!!!!!
I missed You!!!!!!!
**I snuggle in Your arms**
And Thank You......
You are very Kind....
-Xavier-
================================================ Quote:
Originally Posted by SeerCassandraTrelawney Powerful... ================================================
Hehehehehehe
I like that word......
and Thank you.......
-Xavier-
================================================ Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron I absolutely loved it Xavier!
It was amazing!
So is that how you got the idea for the avatar from your poem?
PAMS!! please
Jessica
ooc: Awww thanks Xavier for the ad! *snuggle* I'm glad you and hermionesclone like your avatar and siggy! ================================================
Thank you Jessluff.....
**I wrap you In my arms**
And Yes.....
But it was the Saying,"I tell you to lie to me....
and You say you love me."
I thought about that one Night.....
And I had a thought to use that for a part of An Avatar......
But also a poem.....
And Dont worry Im posting a poem Right now....
I know I just Love My avvie!!!!!
Thanks Jess.....
-Xavier-
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Originally Posted by hermionesclone OMG! That was so sad! I started crying (even though i'm watching Friends re-runs - i was laughing and crying at the same time)! It was so deep and meaningful. Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
PS: I've been to Jess&Marcy's Fantabulous Shop Of Graphics. I love your avatar! They made my siggy! ==================================================
Thank you....
Thank you.....
-Xavier-
P.S.I love your siggy!!!!!!!!
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Hello Guys
I wanted to ask you guys....
If I should Enter in The Sorting Hat Contest????
Tell me your opinion.....
But For now Here is another POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its one of the Long Poems.......
This is The second war........
So Here you go.. *#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# *#
The Last Time
The Full moon Shined Vividly...
around and in the Neverending forest......
Lightning Flashed every second....
As rain poured hard........
On the Left side...
You hear Werewolves prowling
to the night......
Past the werewolves......
And Brown Dark Giants....
And Other animals of the Dark....
There stands Greyback....
Ready to attack.....
He says with his voice dark....
And scary....,"Leave nobody alive......
This is our last fight....
Our last war....
And after we have our short feast...
Dark Creatures Shall rule all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
They yelled....
In a sort of victory chant.......
You could hear it on the Other side of the Forest......
Where all the Good Animals were at.....
There were Giants Of the North their body covered in blue.....
And One Werewolf......
And Thats just it....
No one else....
Just them.....
To protect this forest.....
And Other lands.......
Evil shall not Take over.....
They will fight to their Last Breath.....
The world is Ending......
The Muggles Died...
and The Creatures thought They were next.....
Except they are fighting their own Kind........
But they were evil at the Same time....
They turned to face what awaits them.......
Lightning Flashed.......
It was longer than ever........
The good side saw what it seemed
to be werewolves....
Grins on their faces....
Their eyes pure red.....
Like Blood....
They were reading to Pounce.....
And Giants with spiked Clubs.......
Ready to attack...
The Lightning stopped.....
A north Giant was worried and Scared.....
Then.....
A Brown Giant swinged a spiked Club......
Right at his face....
Red Substance squirted out of His Face.....
A werewolf.....
Was left to do the Rest....
And Said,"Shhh....Quiet.....Feel the Pain....."
But when the North Giant
Drew his Last Breath......
He had time to say to his Friend......,
"The War has Begun......."
A huge Yell came from
The good side....
And they said,"ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!"
They went into the Woods......
But there was no sign of the Bad guys.....
They standed still...
Nothing happened...
They looked Confused......
Then A North Giant looked up......
He saw pure red eyes from the Tree Branches.....
And The last thing he ever saw....
Was Claws....
Coming Straight for him........
All around the Werewolves were on top of the
Giants....
Clawing and Tearing........
One Of the North Giants tried to reach
For his Club......
But Then.....
A werewolf with Blue Eyes pounced
On the Other werewolf who was attacking the Giant.....
He Clawed....
And Clawed.....
And Then the Bad Werewolf was dead......
The werewolf with Blue Eyes....
Ran fast....
And Then Faster....
He clawed Every red Eyes That came Toward Him...
The Brown Giants that Stayed Away From The Fight....
They Threw Big Boulders.......
It hit Trees and Fell opon All sorts Of creatures.....
Fighting was going all around.....
Slashing....
And Gagging...
Pleading.....
Mostly all around.......
Then a werewolf with piercing....
Dying....
Red Eyes appeared.......
He wasnt alone.......
For the Werewolf With Blue eyes
Was peeling......
His eyes shot back in...
The Claws went back into his skin......
He Yelled and Yelled.....
Then There...
Was Remus Lupin.....
He was staring at Greyback.....
They gazed opon each other......
Lightning shot out of the Air....
And Hit Werewolves and Giants alike....
Then Remus said,"Please Greyback.....
People.....
Wizards....
And Animals are getting hurt.....
Only you can stop this war.......
Please...."
And Greyback seemed to Tear up....
Then He said...,
"No."
Then Out Of nowhere....
You hear Legs....
Going up and down....
Going everywhere.....
Giant spiders appeared.........
They Attacked....
They tore skin.....
One Spider
Bit a North Giant.....
And The venom went through his viens.....
It burned......
The Giant Yelled.....
It hit the Ground......
Then The Giant was Dead.........
Remus Took the Form Of a werewolf again....
And Attacked Greyback....
While Saying...,
"REMEMBER WHEN YOU BIT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU GAVE ME THIS CURSE!!!!!!!!!!!
I DIDNT WANT THIS!!!!!!!!
YOU OWE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
STOP THIS WAR BETWEEN
US ANIMALS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WE ARE ALL THE SAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IF YOU DONT.....
I WONT TEMPT TO KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Greyback.....
Still fighting...
he pushed Lupin....
And Yelled....,
"STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
All the Giants.......
Spiders and Werewolves stopped....
And Soo many lay dead.........
Greyback looked at Lupin......
And after that.....
He said...,"Im going to finish what I started..."
He pounced At Lupin.......
And clawed him......
And Other things.....
And He was Dead....
All the Good Monsters were in Shock....
Their Leader was Gone.......
They kept Fighting....
Until Their Own Death.......
It was their Last Time....
They Were ever going to see this world Again.....
Or smell....
The forest.....
Their Nature.........
Their Life.......
And Home..........
It was The End.....
The End For them......
Two wars Down,.....
Closer To the End....
Many Died......
There is More to Come.....
Its The Last Time for Mostly Every One.....
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I really Didnt Like This one.....
But I promise The Next two wars will Be great!!!!!!
I promise...
-Xavier-
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08-14-2009, 05:09 PM
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| | Shrake
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
^WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT IS A LONG COMMENT..........
I will enter The Sorting Hat Contest It seems Fun....
And Im Not The Poems Master....
Thats Sir Spots....
Man He was sooo Good......
Ill Post mre soon...
-Xavier -
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08-14-2009, 05:28 PM
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| | Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
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OMG! Xavier! You really know how to make someone cry! Don't worry! It was really, really good! I felt so sorry for Remus! Greyback is so mean! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
PS: Thanks for loving my siggy! I think you should definitely enter the Sorting Hat Song Contest! With your poems, i'd be surprised if you didn't!
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## ^WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT IS A LONG COMMENT..........
I will enter The Sorting Hat Contest It seems Fun....
And Im Not The Poems Master....
Thats Sir Spots....
Man He was sooo Good......
Ill Post mre soon...
-Xavier - Hahaha! 
Yeahh!!!
I hope you win!! 
Oh well I think you are!
Can't wait! =DD
Jess
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
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Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Awww your soo nice.....
I will Post soon I hope......
-Xavier-
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