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Old 07-04-2009, 05:13 AM   #26 (permalink)
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That was really touching. And so.. sad. But why isn't she calling him Severus? My poor, poor Sev. *hugs him forever*

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Thanks..
Im going to post two short poems..
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Hey guys
HAPPY FORTH OF JULY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I decided to write two short poems as a treat..
Hope you like them!
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Dumbledore...Their Headmaster..Their friend..Was Dead.
The stars were shining bright upon Hogwarts....
Something so beautiful..
and calm..
Why did it shine upon the death of Hogwart's Headmaster..?
Every wand lit toward Harry..
as his pale hands were carrying the body of his friend..
years pass..
It seemed like yesterday they were riding wooden boats toward their first year at Hogwarts..
Harry survived by the years..
Each year he was growing..
revolving.. preparing for what is to come..
The Last Battle..
Dumbledore was gone..
He felt safe while he was being watched..
protected...
Now that Dumbledore was dead..
He would have to carry on with the task and complete it..
With no sort of protection..
and nobody there to guide him..
He seemed so lost..
What he carried in his hands was the light through the dark path..
He was petrified of what was to come..
He will never hear his voice again..
then a tear rolled down his face..
Dumbledore their Headmaster..
Their friend..
Is dead.
Dark times will come again..
the students of Hogwarts will have to take a stand..
without leadership or guidence..
for it was all up to them..
Since Dumbledore was dead..
Red paint splattered on the walls..
Saying,
"Dumbledore's Army has rised again..."
Little kids being tortured with the Unfogivable Curses..
Yelling..
yelping..with fright..
They have done nothing wrong but it wasnt their choice what was right and wrong..
Black came to Hogwarts..
As you passed by students they had cuts upon their faces..
Muggles lay there..
Slashes of blood across their faces..
as they watch thier newborn baby child being
slaughtered by dark hooded figures..
And it was also the end of them..
the world had turned black..
since Dumbledore was laid to sleep forever..
Nothing will be the same anymore..
Dangers..
Killings..
Secrets..lay ahead..
Harry will hunt down Horcruxes..
worried..and scared..
Because Dumbledore wouldnt be there to guide or protect him..
For he was dead.
Old,and New friends will be killed..
Hope will be drained out...
Protection will be lost..
and blood shall be dropped..
arrows shot above..
While everyone was gathered around by a simple white tomb..
It was the last calm day at Hogwarts..
Because Dumbledore..
Their Headmaster..
Their friend..
was dead.

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Hoped you liked it!!!
please read and review...
and another short poem will be posted up..
Love,
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Whoa! I liked this line a lot:
'Since Dumbledore was dead..
Red paint splattered on the walls..
Saying,
"Dumbledore's Army has rised again..."'
Woo! New poem soon? Cool!
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Hey guys here is the second short poem!!!
I hope you enjoy it!
I hope you also have a great Forth of July

Goodbye..Forever
The cold wind blew across Harry's face..
He knelt down in the snow..
and looked at his parents grave..
He was wearing worn out jeans..
His broken wand was stuffed in his pants..
tears rolled down his face..
His T-shirt was torn..
while he had cuts upon his face..
his hands were getting
tighter
and
tighter..
as he felt angry and sad that his parents..
the ones who sacrificed their lives for their baby child..
laid there..
buried inside the ground..
and the only memory of them was the writing
on their tombstones..
that laid upon their dead bodies..
It was pain to him..
the world stop turning for a second..
as he was crying...
sobbing..
over..
his parent's death..
He felt a warm hand upon his shoulder..
it was Hermione..
Bruised..
and scarred up..
with tears upon her face..
Her bestfriend was vulnerable..
kneeling upon death..
his parents death..
He never really got to spend much time with them
because when he was little then..
She had to remind him that there was still a task ahead..
he slapped her arm..
right off his shoulder..
While Hermione was crying more than ever..
For she was seeing him..broken down like this..
It made her sad..
He didnt want to leave them..
For what his parents did for him..
was just too painful..
just thinking that his mother..
Lily mourned and screamed to dont take his life away..
Voldemort didnt show no mercy..
And killed her..
that sent her laying on the ground..
While the Dad had bloodstains upon his body..
and he was also dead..
he was peaceful..
In his eternal sleep..
And the poor..
innocent.. baby Harry was still alive..
After Voldemort said the killing curse..
and left him crying..
For he didnt know any better..
That his parents were dead..
Harry came up to his feet..
he looked again at his parents graves..
kissed both of their tombstones..
and wished them a..,
"Goodbye.." Forever..

HOPED YOU LIKED IT!!!!
I love you all my readers
Thank you for giving me a shot and reading my poems..
Please review..
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I loves it! Favorite line:
kneeling upon death..
his parents death..
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I luff you so much! haha
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thanks Jess!!!!
I know you love me..Who doesnt love me??lol
I love you 2 though!!!HAHA
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I know you love me..Who doesnt love me??lol
I love you 2 though!!!HAHA
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Beautiful poems, both of them, XavierLuff. <3 And Goobye Forever was really touching. Keep the poems coming, you're doing awesome! ^^

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Beautiful poems, both of them, XavierLuff. <3 And Goobye Forever was really touching. Keep the poems coming, you're doing awesome! ^^

Thank you MaxieLuff<3
Ya Goodbye Forever was touching..
And ill post another poem today or 2morrow..ok??

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Hello my readers
I would like to tell you that I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH!!!
**XavierGivesYouAGroupHug**
As I mentioned I said I was going to write another love poem..
So here it is...
This poem is Deticated to Jess since she LOVES HERMIONE AND RON TOGETHER..
Hope you like it..
That Night At The Astronomy Tower
Strands of hair were blowing across her face..
The stars were surrounding the Astronomy Tower..
While the pale white moon..
Was covering half of the dark..
lighten sky..
The cold wind was blowing away her tears..
Dumbledore had died..
She laid curled up..
with no intentions..
of anyone..
coming upon the tower to look at the sky..
Her feelings were closing in upon her..
It was choking her..
Tight..
there was nowhere to go..
or hide..
her feelings for him..
Dark times..
they were coming ahead..
If he ever died..
She wouldnt have a chance to say..
that she loved him..
Day in..
And day out..
She dreamt of one day..
Being in his arms..
And wouldnt worry of what was to come..
And she would know that she was safe in his arms..
She was then crying..
for hope..
of ever her and Ron..
being..
together..
was slim to none..
As both..
The muggle..
and wizarding world..
was coming..
to a complete end..
Love was going to have to wait..
She then heard footsteps..
Coming to the top of the tower..
She wiped off the tears..
Coming straight down from her eyes..
Then...
A voice said..,
"Hermione..what are you doing here?.."
She turned to see a..
Beautiful..
Broad shoulder..
young man...
"Ron..?.Uh-Dont see me like this.."
His voice was calm and heart warming..
"Hermione,..whats wrong..?"
He laid there beside her..
and told her to put her head on his shoulder..
Hermione was saying in her head..
"He was warm.."
Her feelings were..
consuming her..
filling her..
She said..,
"Ronald..,tell me how you feel about me..
Do you feel anything between us..?"
Ron grabbed her head..
And stared into her eyes..
and..
deeply..
Engraving..
the words..,
"I love you.."
in her head..
She didnt know what to say..
lost of words to say..
Ron brought her head closer to his..
He looked at her..
Then closed his eyes..
And kissed Hermione's lips..
They laid there..
Kissing..
underneath the moonlit sky..
She didnt have to say the three words..,
"I love you.."
For after that kiss..
Ron said..,
"Dont worry..
I wont let anything hurt you..
for now..and ever..
Whatever we face..
its with..
You..
And..
Me...............together..
Love and fate brought us together that day..
that all happened..
That Night At The Astronomy Tower..

Hoped you like it!!
Please review..
And I love yall soo much..as friends of course..
Your buddy,
Xavier

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Wow, that was deep. <3

Hermione and Ron are so cute, together. ^^ Nice poem, XavierLuff.

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Hermione and Ron are so cute, together. ^^ Nice poem, XavierLuff.

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It was deep..
They are cute together..
Thank you Maxieluff..
Ill post soon..
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Xavier!!!
Thanks so much for dedicating this one for me!! <3
I luffed it soo much!!!
This poem is definetley one of my favorites!!
It was so funny I blushed when he said all those things!
I'm so jealous of Hermione in this poem!
Ahhhhh I loved it soo much!!! <3
Great Job Xavierluffeh!!!
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Xavier!!!
Thanks so much for dedicating this one for me!! <3
I luffed it soo much!!!
This poem is definetley one of my favorites!!
It was so funny I blushed when he said all those things!
I'm so jealous of Hermione in this poem!
Ahhhhh I loved it soo much!!! <3
Great Job Xavierluffeh!!!
Jess
Your soo welcome!!!
Haha your jealous of Hermione..lol
And thank you
-Xavier-

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Hello my fellow readers/friends..
I dont know what happened..
Suddenly I'm full of ideas for love poems..
Its wierd..
I deticate this poem to my friend Spork!
A.k.a my buddy Dory..
Hope you like it..

The Thing Hidden in the Room of Requirement
Harry walked through the halls of Hogwarts..
Ginny simply right beside him..
He had his purple potions book..
Concealed in his right hand..
It once belonged to a person..
A person that called himself..,
"The Half Blood Prince.."
It was too dangerous for anybody..
to grab hold of it..
for he used a spell that was written in the book..
that made Malfoy's body covered in blood..
Red liquid..
Chunks of it were coming out of his mouth..
Slowly dripping..
until his whole face was covered in blood..
there was also..
gashes..
upon his entire body..
torn big pieces if his skin spread out all around..
Thats why he had to hide the book..
He talked it over with his friends..
He didnt have nowhere to hide it until..
A blazing red headed girl came into view..
She looked amazing..
Then said,
"I know where to hide it..
come with me.."
Ginny was taking Harry to the seventh floor..
He didnt have no idea were she was going to take him..
For he had to hide the book quick..
So he wont let anybody else get sucked in..
something that can be truly horrific..
they walked hall..
by
hall..
Then they both..
came..
to a complete hault..
..
Black outlining came into view..
dust popped off the wall..
and a doorway led them into a room..
He remembered he used that same doorway..
that led him to the Room of Requirement..
to form an organization called..,
"Dumbledore's Army.."
Which he taught some group of students..
How to fight..
Death Eaters..
and Lord Voldemort..
But he knew this couldnt be in the Room of Requirement..
Or was it..
For there were all sort of things scattered around..
Things that seemed..
Well lost..
From evey student that lost any of their belongings..
"Uh-Ginny..
Where are we..?"
She stared at Harry..
And walked a little closer to him..
Her hand came gently down his elbow..
And she wasnt going for his hand..
For she grabbed the potions book..
Instead of Harry's hand..
And threw it somewhere..
and landed on some old junk..
He really didnt care about the book anymore..
For Ginny was stepping a little closer..
towards him..
"You know Harry..
you can leave every secret in here..
and nobody but us will no about it.."
Harry said the first thing that came to his mind..,
"Well..yeah..
In my 5th year..
we held secret meetings..
and nobody knew about it.."
Ginny looked at him..
Like he had no sense of mind..
then she said..,
"We can hide our feelings..
emotions..
in here..
I have a secret..
I love you..
kiss me Harry..
kiss me.."
Harry spoke..,
"I always loved you..
lets make memories..
that can be hidden...
from everybody else..
And only open to us.."
After that he stepped a little closer to her..
his hand brushed of the hair as he put his hand around her neck..
he put his face towards Ginny's..
and they kissed..
the room seemed to be spinning..
just for a moment..
then their lips broke apart..
then ginny said..,
" Uh- I think we should get back to Hermonie and Ron..
They will be worried about us.."
She was blushing..
And they headed out for the door..
Love between them..
it was a secret..
hidden..
somewhere inside the Room Of Requirement..
The scene was gone..
But the only thing that left behind..
Was a..
Secret Kiss.
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Hope you liked it!!!!
Ill post another poem soon..
Please review!!!!
Your friend,
Xavier

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Yeah!!
Another love poem!
It was great Xavier!
I like how you go into detail with everything, you are very deep.
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PAMS!!!
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Thanks Jessica..
I am very deep..
I havent noticed..lol
Ill post tommorow..
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Oooh, HarryGinny luff. <3

I LOVE how the poem's titled "The Thing Hidden in the Room of Requirement." The title is simply brilliant! [Yes, I have a thing for the titles you pick. =D] Another great poem, Xaviar!

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Hi Xavier!
Sorry I haven't been here for a while!
LOVE IT!
Lily
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Its ok...
I understand...
I still love you though!

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Originally Posted by SeerCassandraTrelawney View Post
Very good! Keep it up!
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Thank you!!!
And I will.

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie View Post
Oooh, HarryGinny luff. <3

I LOVE how the poem's titled "The Thing Hidden in the Room of Requirement." The title is simply brilliant! [Yes, I have a thing for the titles you pick. =D] Another great poem, Xaviar!

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Thank you Maxieluff!
Im posting another poem

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Hey Guys....
Im sorry I havent posted a poem in a while...
Im going to post some poems..
Cuz 2MOROW HARRY POTTER AND THE HALF BLOOD PRINCE COMES OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So here is the First 1..
And this poem is deticated to My Maxie!! lol
Hope yall like it!!!!
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The Curse He Never Wanted

The Full moon Rised...
High above the sky...
The field of Grains..
They pushed..
Camly...
And Slightly back..
And forth..
It moved toward this..
Old..
Broken Down House..
Inside..
there was a man..
And he was walking towards a room..
With every step..
The Floor..
"Creaked"..
All around the walls..
were hold together..
By mud..
The house was falling apart..
But in his hands..
There laid a small boy..
He wore an..
Old..
Ripped T-shirt..
That covered his whole body..
The wind blew through the holes..
Of the house..
The poor baby was cold...
It was chilling...
If they lived like this any longer..
The baby would die..
He laid his son..
Upon the ground..
so he may sleep..
He looked down opon his son..
What had happen...
He was ashamed..
That his son had..
To live this way..
Poor...
He left his son...
So he may dream when he goes to sleep..
He went to The room his wife was in...
He laid right beside her..
and said,
"Our son deserves better..
The only special things we give him..
ARE USED STUFF!
'When he grows up He will be ashamed..
An outcast..'
And I dont want that."
She put her hand upon his...
And said..,
"We dont want that for our baby..
We are in this together..."
He said..,
"If Our baby,Remus lives!!!!...
'You can see his limbs...
He hasnt eaten food for days!
I even wouldnt call it
"Food!"
He eats scraps..
That our neighbors put in their garbage..
We dont even have the money for food!
Its embarrasing...
Remember we were going through garbage
and our friends caught us!!!!???"
She stared at him..,
"ENOUGH!...
We are doing our best!!!
To support him!
To care for him!!!!
'But YOU always start..
trouble!!!
Just the other day you insulted a dude named
Fenrir...!!!"
He had been insulted...
By his own Wife..
He said..,
"Im going to get some water.."
He turned..
And looked disgusted...
And went to get some water...
He stayed still..
Drinking the dirty looking water..
He drank..
And drank..
Then...
He saw a shadow coming..
From the broken window..
It wasnt broken before...
Someone was there..
He stepped to the room his wife was in...
Quietly..
And Lively...
Ready to fight...
He entered the room...
Too see his wife was covered in blood..
Dripping..
Falling..
to the ground...
He ran quickly toward her,..
His eyes..
They swam with tears...
His love..
She laid there..
Dead.
Her neck was clawed up...
And chewed...
Torn to pieces...
He-...
He couldnt believe it..
And the last words he said to her..-
He was full of angry and..
Despair..
The bed sheets...
They were already covered in blood..
They were damped..
Then There he saw a trace of blood..
Leading toward were baby Remus had slept..
He glanced back at his dead wife..
And He walked toward the room..
He saw..-
The guy he insulted..
Tearing up..
Little pieces..
Of his child that laid there..
Innocent..
He grabbed a knife..
and stormed into the room...
Fenrir let go of the baby..
And shoved him on the ground..
And pounced on him..
He was ready and stabbed him..
He was crying for help..
Then left the house..
The man quickly went to his son's side..
He aided him...
And in days..
He looked untouched..
And peaceful again..
His wife was buried..
In the backyard..
It wasnt much...
But he didnt have the money..
Too give her a proper castaway..
He would miss her...
Remus grew up without his mother..
But his father was like both to him...
One day..
The sunset went down..
And then a Full moon rised..
Remus..
He was tearing up his skin..
His human Flesh was torn..
His eyes popped out..
He was groaning..
His father came to see what was going on..
He wasnt looking at his son..
But a fully grown werewolf..
It was whimpering..
Then it turned its head to see the man..
When Remus was in transformation..
He had no self control of his body..
The werewolf came close to the man which..
It was his father..
And Slammed him against the wall..
Minutes later his father..
Was nowhere to be seen..
Then he saw..
He was stuffed in a cabinet..
Half eaten..
He was dead..
Remus was scared..
He remembered..
He was the werewolf..
He was his own dads Killer..
He took his Dads body out..
And Cried..
And cried..
No one was here for him..
Not anymore..
Not his mother..
Nor his father..
He was cursed..
And He didnt want to be..
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HOPED YOU LIKED IT!!!!
Please read and review..
Love yall
Love,
Xavier

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It's GREAT seeing some action in the Poetry Forum again!

Ha, and I love the enthusiasm about HBP! Keep 'em coming, buddy! :]
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