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08-02-2003, 07:35 AM
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Beautiful Lauz! I can really create the pictures in my mind, they're all excellent! Keep going, you're an awesome poet.
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08-02-2003, 09:09 AM
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|  drinks vanilla coke on the moon!Mooncalf
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Inspire Me
Inspire Me,
Inthrill Me,
Touch me,
Screams!
Hold Me,
Kiss Me,
Smother Me,
Dreams!
Give Life to Me,
Make me Wild
Run with Me
Jump!
Quietly
Sit with me
Sleep with me
Tears.
Don't go
Hold me
Save me
From all my
Fears.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi.
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08-02-2003, 11:06 AM
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| | Pygmy Puff
Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Forbidden Forest
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that was great lauz :up:
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08-02-2003, 02:54 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Wow...Just Wow. You are so good.
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08-02-2003, 04:59 PM
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| | Augurey
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They're just so wonderful and so inspiring.
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08-03-2003, 06:26 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Goes On
He walks alone the echo streets
His gun finally shot.
Black hair filled with his sweat.
The blood stained air awaits.
His trainers pull him back
With the sirens hissing near by
No, he can't leave his friends
He can't leave them there to die.
Survivors run, his life is not worthy
for a one way ticket to jail.
No he is left for the police, the sirens.
Blooded is the time, that the gun stole.
His trainers hit the pavement
His future looks too dull, in the concret river.
The grungy subway passes him
and the world, no longer,
Goes on.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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08-03-2003, 06:31 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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wow that was good Laura
Lets hope all those gang peoples understand what there doing :whisle:
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08-03-2003, 06:37 AM
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| | Ramora
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:up: :up: I love your poems!!!!! :up:
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08-04-2003, 07:28 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Chillin Out on the M
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The Stars Fell
The stars fell
and the moon was alone
The nights are now blank
The sky is dark.
The stars fell
and the wind howled
flowing within your hair
But the sky was still
motionless.
The stars fell
and you were not there
Tearing in my soul
Without you.
Dreams shattered
Our love ended
The day the stars fell.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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08-04-2003, 12:17 PM
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| | Pygmy Puff
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that was great laura
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08-05-2003, 04:35 AM
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| | Firecrab
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Wow!!
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08-05-2003, 04:50 AM
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| | Porlock
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Oh my, Lauz... I really, really love that "The Stars Fell" poem!
That poem certainly painted a picture in my head. 
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08-09-2003, 10:35 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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SeaHorse Melody
The Freedom is Within!
The Freedom is Within!
The Flowers will Bloom,
Let the Seahorses sing,
Death be Not Proud!
For I am the World's King!
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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