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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
07-26-2003, 09:16 PM
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|  drinks vanilla coke on the moon!Mooncalf
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Hi,
My name is Laura Quinn/Fuzi. I am 16 and I have been writing poetry since I was 13 years (3 years ago), I mainly write about life and emotions, I havent really written any HP Poetry but I am always willing to try. My first ever Poem was called Poison Angel which I wrote with my set of Magnetic Poetry on the Fridge. I believe that Poetry can say more in 5 lines that a 500 page essay.
-Fuzi/Lauz
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07-26-2003, 09:17 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Sea of Silence
Bare foot memories sway on the shore
Silence is nothing but it can be a lore
Drifting individuals left to die alone
But that's the way the world works-you have to be a clone
When the 3rd moon rises and nothing can be stopped
Then all hope is finally gone, all faith will be dropped
Voices in the distance cant go on forever
But sometimes it can change for worse or for better
That's the day the realms will close and nothing will be free
When all the dreamers in the world will know of only reality
Softly let you listen To an old folk tale
That speaks of emotions within humanities betrayal
She tells me to becareful with all that I own
And never let love be my overthrown
All I do is listen to the worlds of tranquility
Cose all that's left in my world is me.
© Laura Quinn/ Fuzi
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07-26-2003, 10:12 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: May 2003 Location: Wisconsin,USA
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[color= lightgreen ]2 :up: s up :mrgreen: .I like it!
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07-26-2003, 10:59 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jul 2003
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thats great! i totally get what your saying
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07-26-2003, 11:53 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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My Reflection saw me
Soft sun bathed my body
In eternal light
Clouds filled my mind
And left me in timeless age
Something touched me
But pierced my thought
I turned around
But had no vision
Blinded by a darkened sky
And sun and many stars
Some one was dancing
Round me and round
I pushed the glimmer
But fell to the floor
I lay there
In a timeless age
Where my mind was Skipping
And when I wondered up
I saw to eyes
fear blended with blue
I stared for a while
and said to myself
Those eyes belong to you.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 12:18 AM
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|   cookie loving Slytherin Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: VA
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Wow, you're an amazing poet! I love the poems you have posted! Do continue! You have a great talent.
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07-27-2003, 01:02 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Rain of the Moon
A soft moon glares at a shimmering pond
The silence is broken my some one so fond
She glydes like a angel across the moonlight glades
Where herbs grow freshly, the smell can never fade
Upon a rock, she smells the minty dreams
That floats in the rock pool, never sinks into seems
Small fairys play with stars that sparkle in the night
She smiles so gently at the childish site
Quietly she feels an emotion that can conquer all
That makes her feel reality without letting Fantasy fall
The wind whispers a slow tune in the hollow trees
She raps herself with getleness while her hair fills with leaves
She looks above at the dark, Seeing something sail on the sky
She realized, that winter has spread her wings and flies
Falling from the heavens, softly she sees sleet
And suddenly at that moment, she feels....
Complete.
-©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 01:06 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
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These poems are really really good! They have a good meaning to them!
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07-27-2003, 01:46 AM
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| | Murtlap
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: I'm not sure,somewhere I guess
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I really like your poems.Please post more.
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07-27-2003, 02:36 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Bubbles On fairy Paws
Soaring through a dreamlike day
Gentle bombs they like to say
Glyding through the sky of clouds
Always quite but sometimes loud
Reflecting the hope on all sides
While in the stars they softly glide
Shining with no visable flaws
And gently touched by Fairy paws
Blue, Purple maybe some pink
Completely magical they like to think
Energy Dancing in water blue
Sited by some but very few
Faded out so know one understands
That Beauty was Handcrafted by fairy hands.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 05:45 AM
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| | Back from the dead
donnie darko fan Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2002
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Oooh, Lauz. I LOVE these! I especially like Rain of the Moon "Falling from the heavens, softly she sees sleet
And suddenly at that moment, she feels....
Complete."
That's so wonderful, please write more!
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07-27-2003, 06:09 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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The Inside Out
Crawling from the inside out
I cringe and shake and sometimes shout
It eats away from the life within
I feel so dirty, I feel like Sin
Trying to find it, is a mission
Taking me away to its own Possesion
Stabbing each thought in my mind
Never to recollect the cuts I find
Silencing my very soul
Locked away, On paroll
I can't take this bitter lie
Running faster but nothing I try
Seems to make this pain go away
Destroying the happiness I use to play
So now I must say Farewell to you all
Cose I can't take pain this anymore
Im fading in the moonlight blue
Good-Bye, So long,I will miss you.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 06:13 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
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That's really good.. [and sad]
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07-27-2003, 10:38 AM
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| | Augurey
Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Here
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I love your poems.
It makes me feel like I am floating
and pictures fly through my mind.
It makes me want to create somthing.
Anything beautiful. Beautiful and sad.
It's a feeling I know very well
and since that is what your writing make me feel
I can whole hartedly say that you are a great writer of poetry.
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07-27-2003, 10:50 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Freedom
Tasting the words
That melt into ink
Dripping with wisdom
The Wine to drink
Lusious and full
Annorexia words
Juicy middle
Free as a bird
No on can stop them
as they mutliply
I am a poet
So let me Fly.....
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 11:30 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: The dark side of the
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They are so good! Nice work!
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07-27-2003, 11:58 AM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Thank you all! Your all very Kind. I feel like I actually have a use in life. I cant express how it makes me feel. Some emotions can't be defined! Thanks!
-Lauz/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 05:28 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Untitled
Smell the roses, he said to her,
Life is soft; A cats long purr.
Live what we call a real dream,
where life is not life. It's not what it seems
Dance the in the memories
In the light moon.
Hope for the forgotten, It will come soon.
Sing a Song of happy hands.
Think of love and where she stands.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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07-27-2003, 11:32 PM
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| | Porlock
Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: My bed... zzz
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Wow, Lauz!
The poems are really amazing. They just blew me away. The poems you wrote, Lauz, are very well written! :rose:
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07-28-2003, 09:27 AM
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| | Augurey
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That's also so nice. *sigh*
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08-01-2003, 02:25 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
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I personaly love The Inside Out. :embaressed: Its so sad,yet.....I don't know!!
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08-01-2003, 06:41 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Just Before
Bright as day
Yet it’s night
The dark is young
Soft moonlight
Twisted shadows
A full moon
A faded blue wind
And a straggled tune
Shining with shimmers
A starry sun
The water is clear
Rippled with fun
Blank as the sky
The memories are there
Hold me tight
Don’t shed a tear.
The moon smiles
With no face
All that universe
And not much space.
Behind a window is just not right
Alone to watch
This wishful site
This beautiful vision
Has come and been
A lover’s night
Or my childlike dreams?
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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08-01-2003, 06:42 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Lost and Found
Whispering screams
Keep me awake
Memories destroy me
And what’s inside
No more love
Yet so much hate
The world is doomed
For the next generation
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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08-01-2003, 06:44 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Courage Behind
So you hide to look for courage
And search for the things you’ve found
But you seem to chase your tail
By looking in your own ground.
Life passes the questions
That you asked but forgot
Because they still slumber
And that sleep will make them rote
Slowly your emotions sink and die
With no sound or trace
Like nothing will they drift
To the depths of outer space
And left to cremate is the soul
You once had in mind
But still you’re on your own ground
The Heart your trying to find.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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08-01-2003, 06:48 PM
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| drinks vanilla coke on the moon! Mooncalf
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Mindful Mazers
In the light
That won't shine
With the food
The ladies and wine
Some where close
To the king of dreams
Behind his courtyard
Through the glazed area of steam
Just go right
And take a left
Over the soul
Near the suns centered breast
Open the door
That glows with gold
And begin the maze
the maze of the untold.
©Laura Quinn/Fuzi
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