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02-02-2005, 11:02 PM
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#151 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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hi leah i sorry u know y
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02-02-2005, 11:02 PM
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#152 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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 do u like it
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02-02-2005, 11:03 PM
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#153 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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 hi lee
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02-02-2005, 11:04 PM
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#154 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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love u
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02-02-2005, 11:05 PM
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#155 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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miss u le
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02-04-2005, 01:31 AM
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#156 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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hi le
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02-04-2005, 01:31 AM
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#157 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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 hi lee
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02-05-2005, 01:59 AM
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#158 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
|  ello all
thanks alot kuru01 for reading my stuff i dont think im good enough to get them pubsilshed yet but thanks alot hun it means alot to me. john i love ya too but please stop machine gun posting it annoys the he// out of me . i will write in more in a week or so cause my grandmom kicked me out so everything of mine is up there well glad people r still reading my stuff leah mae
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02-05-2005, 11:40 PM
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#159 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by firelily  this one is about the earth
our land
are you a free spirit
like the indians are
can you feel the warmth
of the wind on your face
is nature and the indians
talking to you
telling you about its land
and how precious it is
if your a free spirit
you can hear there voices
telling you about the past
and furture of our land
voices that say
make me proud
and preserve our land
so furture generations
can see its beauty
and use it
as the indians once did
our land is priceless
and we are to
so listen to the voices of the past
and save its land
for the children
for our furture
leah mae
^ I love this poem because
1. I'm an indian
2. I'm a Capricorn and I really love the Earth.
and
3. I love poems dealing with the Earth our Grandmother
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02-06-2005, 01:35 PM
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#160 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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ok le
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02-07-2005, 10:18 PM
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#161 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
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hi le
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03-04-2005, 01:59 AM
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#162 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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|  im so sorry
thanx lostangel for the post its hard to keep people reading my stuff cause im always moving and i cant post alot if this poem sucks cause i just made it up cause i havent posted in forever and i dont have my poem book with me.
have u ever fought a fight
u knew u could never win
have u gone back to a place
that u hated but couldnt stay away
this is my life
the way its been for 3 years
everywhere i go
everything i do
its a never ending cycle
my family cant stand me
im the black sheep
i screw everything up
but i keep going back
to the house where it all started
a house where they all live
to let them put me down
to make me feel like $hit
but i love them so much
their my family
their my world
this is my life
for now
Leah Mae
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03-14-2005, 04:08 AM
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#163 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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Oops i forgot to say sorry cause my cousin lance was machine gun posting i hope to be writing a poem in here soon lol ok bye now -Leah mae | |
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03-16-2005, 10:28 PM
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#164 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
Join Date: Apr 2003
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Quote: words people say
never enter my mind
i try to think
but it makes me blind I love that part of your poem "Blowen Away." It reminds of days when things never seem to be going the way I want them; I feel exactly how the poem describes it. Way to go! Your poems are beautiful! 
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03-16-2005, 10:39 PM
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#165 (permalink)
| | Lobalug
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: *****Dealing with Two Dollar Bill at his old hang outs*****
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Your a gret poet , continue your writing and it'll take you far!
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03-27-2005, 03:04 AM
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#166 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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thanks bunches for the replys it means alot that new peeps r readin my stuff ill post more soon im havein another one of my family crisis so i will try to post more asapLeah Mae
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05-13-2005, 10:34 PM
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#167 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 855
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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u are really good i love poems some day i wish i become as good as a poet like u
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05-18-2005, 02:36 AM
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#168 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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my computers being retareded i will try a post tomorrow sorry every body but i just spent two hours typin and its all gone and im beat so nite
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05-23-2005, 03:28 AM
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#169 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
|  its about time huh lol
so im gona to try this one more time im glad my poems are being read its means a lot to me
is this me?
i stand alone
lookin at myself
prayin that i dont see
whats starein back at me
i once was a great person
beautiful inside and out
my eyes beckened u to follow
wonderin what mystrys i was hidin
u wanted to know me
to hear what i had to say
everystep i took was like a dance
carefully planned to make myself more graceful
i surrounded myself with great pepole
and great people found me
my eyes could see ur soul
but now thats all changed
these once deep eyes
were hareded by life
my spirit is slowly slippin
all the mysterys i knew were discoverd
every dream i had was broken
my looks are gone
everyone i knew has lefted me
nobodys listens anymore
cause they all have heard it before
i cant dance
even thought i try
everyday a different layer is added
to the cloud that surounds me
im still good on the inside
but people dont like to see that anymore
im tired but i wont give up
i long to see that person i am
staring back at me
that girl with all the dreams
not broken by life
i just made it up hope it doesnt suck
Leah Mae
Last edited by firelily; 05-23-2005 at 03:33 AM.
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06-02-2005, 08:23 PM
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#170 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Kim So Eun
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that is so cool of a poem^
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06-21-2005, 12:39 AM
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#171 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Delaware
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Wow...you are a very talented writer, Miss Leah! Your poems are great and I love them all, they're very expressive. (I'm sure the my pal Moony'd say the same.)
Well, keep writing, and the only thing that blasted computer will make you look like is this:
 
Write more soon!
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06-21-2005, 12:47 AM
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#172 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Delaware
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|  hmm...
(Hey Lance or shall I say lillypad!!*in a way*Luv your goth poems...anyway... Sometimes you seem to be John, and others not. Well please stop posting so much it is kind of...distracting from the great poetry that is here)
Leah keep writing, you're wonderful! I think you should at least consider having them published, they are fantastic!
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06-23-2005, 05:59 PM
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#173 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2005
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do i know u?^
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07-13-2005, 03:51 PM
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#174 (permalink)
| | Murtlap
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: *~London~*
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Quote:
Originally Posted by firelily tis me again glad yall like them! heres another one!
poetry rhythms
its about time
i write a poem that rhythms
i think about it in my mind
as i try to think what to write on every line
i start to write with pen in hand
as i dream of a faraway land
where theres a prince fair and true
but then he leaves and makes my heart turn blue
than i think ill write about hope
but i throw that idea away with the whip of my rope
so i decide to write about trout
but wait, i dont like fish and what there about
those ideas gos down the drain
as i try to rattle my brain
i write things for people to see
even things about little old me
as i sit and think
i try to make my poetry lines link
i look through all the poems in my book
writing this isnt as easy as it looks
i think about what to write really hard
$hit i cant think i feel like such a retard
i guess this means im done
now im going out to have some fun
leah
i love your poem miss
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08-28-2005, 03:52 AM
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#175 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| i dont know what to write
well i dont have a puter yet but im workin on it but hopefully ill write a poem tomorrow thanks for readin my stuff leah mae | |
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