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04-23-2004, 08:05 AM
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#76 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Canada
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lol so cute...
PAMS lovely Leah... nice name btw  :rose:
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04-25-2004, 05:16 AM
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#77 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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 thanks twin and dawn it means alot to me that someone actually reads my poems i will right one tomorrow cause im dead tired right now ok thanks loves ps. i like your name to dawn lol | |
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04-28-2004, 05:56 AM
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#78 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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if anyone is still reading this i must say sorry because since monday i have been working for 930am to 530pm and then for their i have to pick up my siblings and take them to the carinval till 10pm than i have to wait till my friends done useing the computer in order to get on and i have only had time to check relpys so for merlins sake please forgive me im wicked tird and i cant see straight so on saturday ill try to post anther poem ok and im really soory if anyone is still reading my poetry leah mae :zzz: :arg:  | |
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05-01-2004, 09:03 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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ello again sorry about the delay if anyone is still reading
stuck in place
im stuck
i cant find my way out
lost and scaried
trapped in misery
theirs so much pain
and no way to run
everywhere i look
theres no way to turn
no place to hide
as the pain deepens
it creeps into my heart
making its beating slower
cant breathe cant think cant move
the pain grows
each time it breaks my heart
a little more
i run
looking for a way out
everywhere i go
theres a dead end
everyone can see my pain
yet no one will help me
they just stare
like im another faceless person
in the crowd
how dare they
do they not feel
pain sadness and dispare
the way i do
do i deserve this pain i have
if not then why
cant i get out
my whole body is frozen
in fear in pain
noway to move
noway to feel
stuck in place
unable to move
im doomed
to be trapped in my misery
the pain never stops growing
consuming my heart
and my life
it takes my body over
trapping me forever
with no place to hide
stuck in place
leah mae i hope people will still read my stuff
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05-02-2004, 02:12 AM
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|  Almighty Evil OneKnarl
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Oz
Posts: 9,081
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Yes Leah.....I'm still reading them.
Your very good, and I'm not the biggest fan of poetry. I spose because I can't really write it.
But I do love reading yours. :flowersmile:
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05-05-2004, 01:52 AM
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#81 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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yay! at least my twin still reads my stuff i love you my twin if though you cant write poems kay love i still love you all the same! | |
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05-11-2004, 04:44 AM
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#82 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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ello again did i say something wrong no one reads my poems anymore*crys* well if no one likes them or if people arnt reading them any more i wont post any more poems intill peeps relpy to my poems *still crying* well if anyone gives a darn please relpy then ill post more ok *continues to cry* i didnt know my poems sucked this bad well im off to bed leah mae | |
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05-11-2004, 05:19 AM
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| | Dementor
Join Date: Apr 2004
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its very good and i hope you post more!!!!!!!!!!!! :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: these are for yur last poem and for yur insperation
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05-11-2004, 05:26 AM
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#84 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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* stops crying* someone actually read my poems thanks alot mercy im glad you like them leah mae ill post a poem tomorrow im wicked tired now as it is and merlin knows how long will i be able to stay awake leah mae | |
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05-17-2004, 04:25 AM
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#85 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
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ello again well it still seems as if no one likes what i write but ill keep posting and maybe one day people will start to read them again
drunk and stupid
i did something stuipd
something i should have never done
i feel like $hit
but its my own fault
i went out to a wedding
and drank way more than
i should have
i made a complete a$$
of myself
i cant remember
what happened after i lefted
but all i know now
is that i make myself sick
im disgusted with it all
i cant believe i was
such a retard
well now i can say
i learned my lesson
drinking is wrong
and bad for you
so for now i hang my head in shame
in hope that
i will never ever
be that stuipd again
being drunk is something
i wont do again
i learned this lesson
the hard way
and i write about it
because im hoping
that you wont have to
make the same mistake i did
dont drink
but if you do
drink a very little
but i ugre you not to
make the same mistake i did leah mae | |
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05-18-2004, 04:50 AM
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#86 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
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ello again if any one is still around am i that bad that noone wants to read my poerty anymore blah well ill write more when people start to read them again leah mae | |
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05-18-2004, 12:20 PM
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#87 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: The computer
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I think people are reading them, but they're too lazy to reply back and voice their opinions. I mean, if you look at the front page a lot of people have looked at these pages. I like your poems and I just found the page today, otherwise I would've replied before.
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05-19-2004, 03:35 AM
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#88 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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omg im so happy you relpyed love im glad your reading them it means lots to me that you read them so i will post another tomorrow when i have some time ok love and thanks bunches leah mae | |
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05-19-2004, 04:45 AM
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#89 (permalink)
| Almighty Evil One Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Oz
Posts: 9,081
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Of course you know I'm reading them leah.
Good to hear the last one too, a lesson learned the hard way is still a lesson learned.
:flowersmile: Keep posting.
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05-19-2004, 09:09 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Back from hibernation :P
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Very nice!
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05-20-2004, 04:10 AM
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#91 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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yay i have readers im so happy ok heres another one loves
another chance
their will always be
that one person
who you love dearly
and known for a long time
they bring you happiness
and they bring you pain
they have broken your heart'
one to many times
but yet you always
give them another chance
they could be a family member
or a close friend
there is always one
in your life
you share so many
great times together
but then theres always a twist
they start throwing the pain'
your way
ripping your heart out
just a little more
with each painful blow
they hit you with
sending the shock
throughout your entire body
leaving you drained and broken
like pieces of glass
shattered and busted on the cement
then like nothig happened
their your family of friend again
so why not give them another chance
after all the good times
you had together
they are still a part of your life
so just try it
one more time
and maybe
after this they wont need
another chance leah mae | |
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05-20-2004, 04:31 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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well heres another but not all of you may like this one cause its about being bi but its still good
kiss and tell
do you kiss boys
do you kiss girls
or do you
kiss both
beauty is whats on the inside
not the outside
sexuality shouldnt be limited
to just the opposite s-e-x
you should live life
and experience it all
men women
why should we decide
we need to be able
to experiment with each other
to explore unknown territory
men...............
they give you protection
their strong and silent
they make you feel safe
and they touch you as if
your the only one for him
he'll take care of you
he will give you a family
and help keep it together
but on the other hand
women................
their caring and supportive
beautiful and sensual
they understand your feeling
and know how to please you
when she kisses you
you feel as if you become one with her
she'll make sure your well taken care of
and she will make sure
all your dreams come true
i dont think ill be able to decide
which one i like better
so for know
i kiss both leah mae | |
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05-20-2004, 04:43 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
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heres another just to soften up the mood tis about a unicorn
unicorn
through the soft morning dew
a figure appears
strong yet graceful
if you look beyond the trees
through the forest
and pass the rainbow
it gallops through the fields
of many wild flowers
look closer and you will see
the sun now rises pass the tree tops
revealing this animal that has
a white bod, red head, blue eyes
and a single horn twisted on its head tis a unicorn
and when i came to this desison
the unicorn disappeared
into the morning dew leah mae | |
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05-21-2004, 06:00 AM
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#94 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Canada
Posts: 5,506
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Thank-you so much Leah, for reading my poems, sorry for not reading your new ones sooner. I really liked the one about being bi, lol, and the unicorn one.
:rose:
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05-21-2004, 12:34 PM
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| | Murtlap
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Sydney, Australia
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I've just read all of your poems and i have to say that all of them are absolutely brilliant! I love the way that u put so much feeling into them. My fav poem so far is 'another chance'. You are a very good poet, so keep posting! :flowersmile:
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05-21-2004, 03:37 PM
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| Almighty Evil One Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Oz
Posts: 9,081
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Hey Leah nice work. :flowersmile:
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05-21-2004, 05:40 PM
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|  Queen PhoenixSnidget
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Cucumber Land
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Good poems! *claps* Weird how I liked the one about bi-sexuality.  Haha, I should start to wonder.... :flowersmile:
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05-22-2004, 05:51 AM
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#98 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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omg i am so happy that yall actually read them i appreicate all of your comments and i think its funny how yall like the bi one lol if ya ever want to talk to me pm me and ill give you my msn or aol screen name lol well thanks for relpying im so happy do you really think im good at writng poems cause i think i stink anyway ill post more tomorrow so thanks again loves leah mae | |
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05-25-2004, 05:33 AM
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#99 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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ello again this poem might be stuipd cause i was to lazy to go out to my car and get my poem book lol so i just made it up it took all of five mins but i hope yall like it so ill post another in a few days
tale of me
i am one person
strong and imangintive
gentle but forceful
when i need to be
i have a love
for the sun
hate the cold
and how it makes me feel
i can peer into ones eyes
and see evrything about them
including there thoughts
i have lived many of lives
and kept there lessons
held in side
which has given me wisedom
beyond my years
giving my young body a old soul
i like being out doors
in the middle of nowhere
where all you hear
is the wind blowing
and anmials moving about
i need more relaxtion
i want more attention
i have a wicked fear of falling
and i cant stand petty people
who think the world revoles
around them
im very protective
of the people i love
and care about
i love to write poetry
it like a release of everything
i built up in side
a way to show the world
that there really is something
going on in my head
i my not be perfect on the outside
but on the inside
i am beautiful
i am able to see the world
with more than just my eyes
i can feel it
well this is just a little bit
about me as youu can see
hope you enjoy
the tale of me leah mae
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05-31-2004, 04:53 AM
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#100 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
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heres another if anyone reads these
my tears have faded but my pain is still here my heart is broken swiming through my tears year after year the pain deepens making my happiness seem that much farer away like the holy grail lost forever never to be seen again my emotions runs strong as the object of my pain draws closer sucking the life from me with each step they take my pain is so deep that time may never heal my heart why does this pain follow me around its like a shadow that I cast upon the ground every where I go it follows haunting my attempts at true happiness im a good person why cant he just love me he is my father after all I wish he could feel the same pain I do then he would know how it feels to have this pain that’s rooted so deep into my bone that it makes me sick every time I hear hes name my pain still is here and it would go away
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