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04-13-2004, 04:42 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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| emily love i have a notebook full of poems im just posting them when i can it also takes me awhile to write them but ive been writing these for the past 3 or 4 years so i dunno but im glad you like them im not talented it just comes for my heart love oh and thanks again for reading them!
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04-14-2004, 05:35 AM
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| Almighty Evil One Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Oz
Posts: 9,081
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Hey Twin,
They really are fantastic.......you know we are more alike than I thought.
If I could articulate what I feel as well as you do, I'd imagine it would come out very much like most of those poems.
Please post more.......I enjoy reading them.
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04-14-2004, 05:39 AM
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| Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
Posts: 6,400
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These are amazing, Keep writing, and I'll keep reading |
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04-14-2004, 05:49 AM
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| Abraxan
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Perth, AU (GMT +8)
Posts: 25,070
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jasper Hart First Year x10 x10
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Well I still think your a fantastic poet. :rose:
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04-14-2004, 06:35 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| hi everyone thanks for reading i appreciate your comments ill post another tomorrow hugs and kisses leah mae |
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04-14-2004, 06:38 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Back from hibernation :P
Posts: 2,470
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Wow...I'm...I'm speechless. Okay. Not entirely speechless. Write more!
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04-15-2004, 03:55 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| thanks angel wings i will post another tomorrow cause i just got off a 12 hour shift so sorry see ya tomorrow! leah mae |
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04-16-2004, 04:04 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| heres another
the one
when the one comes in your life
youll know
the one you desire
your soul mate
the one youve been waiting for
destin to be by your side
the one you dream
the other half of you
the one who will change your life
your lover and your friend
the one who will know your thoughts
your every move
the one who can see your life in a blink of there eye
and know what youll do next
the one that can keep the fire inside you lit
its the way you feel around him
the one who will always be there for you
through thick and thin
the one who can save your life at any given moment
with a snap of their fingers
the one who can breathe in your soul
your angel
from the time you see them
your every thought will be of them
you will just know
even if you dont realize it at first
you ll just know that
their the one
leah mae |
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04-16-2004, 04:13 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| how bout one more
i wonder............
as i stare off into the distance
thats when i start to thinking about my furture
i wonder where ill live
what ill be doing
of if ill ever find my soul mate
but i will be strong
loving and devoted to every step of the way
ill love every mintue that passes me by
my life will be lived to the fullest
with every breath i have lefted
because i want it to turn out
the best way it can
leah mae |
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04-16-2004, 04:15 AM
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| Almighty Evil One Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Oz
Posts: 9,081
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That was beautiful Leah........ :flowersmile:
You write so well!
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04-16-2004, 04:38 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Wilmington, Delaware
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04-16-2004, 04:43 AM
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| Luffs Lickin' Elbows Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Off in my own world, listening to Hedley or the Weekend.
Posts: 1,511
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Yeah, I have to agree, these are REALLY good....you write really well.
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04-16-2004, 04:52 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| another maybe maybe
sun rays
the suns out
and its beating down on me
i love the warm feeling that gos through my body
when the sun touches my skin
i wish i could feel this way forever
the suns heat flows through my veins
making me more relaxed and comfortable
making me feel as if i am needed
like im finally home where i belong
i never want to move from the suns rays
the sun fill me with love and happiness
i feel beautiful in the sun
like im completely flawless
where im just me
i am cleansed when i stand in the sun
cleaning me of all my pain and suffering
being in the sun
is like taking a hot bath
it refreshes you
i pray for the sun to stay out all day
because i always want to be
in the suns rays
leahmae |
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04-16-2004, 04:54 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| thanks twin harry and hpgurl im glad you all like them but i dont think there that good but oh well thanks again all! leah mae |
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04-16-2004, 08:37 PM
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| Dementor
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Delaware
Posts: 89
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Hello Leah, great poems, girl! Keep it up!
I never knew you could write that good............well, I certainly think that I was very impressed, but I forgot to retrieve some of my thoughts from my Pensieve...hold on..... lalalala.... WHERE"S MY PENSIEVE?!....... I'll be back....... arrgh!:><: :arg: Where did it go ?.................................wait............ ........
Sit tight, because- as- soon- as- I- find- Nick- I'll- HURT- HIM!................... oh well, I thought it was great........I think....... let me leave..before...you..do something to me......heh, heh... :ermsmile:
:sorcerer:
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04-17-2004, 03:57 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| Laina Hale you are a nut but i love you all the same lil sister you did you really like my poems well i think their ok i mean their not great or anything but oh well i love ya laina ill write more soon! Leah mae |
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04-17-2004, 04:03 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Look Behind You!
Posts: 1,187
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Very good!! i love them!!! keep writing, and add more soon PAMS
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04-17-2004, 04:26 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| hey eveelisabeth thanks for reading them and ill post more tomorrow ok? leah mae |
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04-17-2004, 10:08 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Wilmington, Delaware
Posts: 45
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ur poems r the best leah u r the bomb
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04-17-2004, 10:25 AM
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| Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Canada
Posts: 5,506
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Wicked cool, all of them, I especially like the one about rhyming, lol.
PAMS I guess I could say... hehe
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04-17-2004, 07:11 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| i dont think i posted this one so here it gos and thank you for relpyin harry and dawn im glad you like them!
the maze of me
im a maze
of dreams, thoughts and opioions
to reach the end of the maze
is when you truely know me
for this is my treasure
what i keep hidden
if you ever reach the end
of my maze
you will find the real me
nice , caring , supportive and loving
just some of the things that make me the person who i am
i dont understand
why i hide myself
maybe its because i dont wanna get hurt again
a fire burns inside
it makes me strong
now i am ready to take the world on
as leah mae, little old me
my maze is still here
hoping that you will reach the end
it hides the way i feel
from the rest of the world
and one day
the rite person will come along
where they will like me
for just being me
the way i am
in my
maze of me leah mae |
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04-17-2004, 07:54 PM
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| Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
Posts: 6,400
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It's awesome! Keep it up!
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04-17-2004, 09:14 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| hey prince thanks for reading these poems ill talk to ya soon! leahmae |
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04-18-2004, 03:05 AM
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| Almighty Evil One Knarl
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Oz
Posts: 9,081
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I love that one Leah.
*hugs the poem*
Can I have it? I wanna print it out and put it on the wall. Pleeeeeeze.
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04-18-2004, 06:50 AM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
Posts: 215
| hey twin go ahead your wish is my command! leah mae |
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