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04-12-2004, 02:18 AM
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| | Streeler
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 hello everyone i've been writing poetry for years and now i firgued that others should read them and tell me what they think. no not all of them are going to be works of art to you but to me they are. My heart and soul gos into each one making them different then any others in this poetry section. My name is Leah Mae and im 20 years old i live in Delaware and i love to write poetry. Feel free to pm if you have any questions! well here go's nothing. this first poem is about me.
The gifts i have
The heart and wisdom of a woman
The spirit and imaginationof a child
a soul that wants to be free
a lover that needs to be caught
a fear of falling
a love for exploration and adventure
a sign from the heavens
and a temptation from the devil
that wont work on me
a need to try new things
a fear of being wrong
the angel in me
who wants to fiy away into the sky
the ablity to see the world
the fear of losing it all in a second
the gifts i have
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04-12-2004, 02:26 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Here We Are, NYC
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Aww yay! I like it lover 
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04-12-2004, 02:44 AM
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|  Almighty Evil OneKnarl
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WOW!
Leah that was amazing, actually if I had read it without knowing who the author was, I would've thought it reminded me of you.
And some of that sounds like me too.
Good job Twin! :flowersmile:
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04-12-2004, 02:48 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
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Yah-hah!
That was awesome, Leah! You're good | |
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04-12-2004, 02:58 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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heres another! thanks lover!
my friend
when you need a place to go
when you need some time to think
when you need someone to love you
like a sister does
come to me
i will help you deal
with your pains and problems
i will be your shoulder to cry on
i will always be there for you
through thick and thin
for you are my friend
someone i trust with my secrets
someone i will hold close to my heart
for the rest of my life
my friend
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04-12-2004, 03:01 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
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Awesome, Leah! Keep it up.
Lotus, please check your PM inbox.
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04-12-2004, 03:44 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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heres another!
Springs Painting
the flowers of spring
are many beautiful but different colors
they arose a sense of warmth in my heart
a feeling of welcome flows through my body
after a long winters nap
a bursting of colors
through out the land
flowers faRer than the eye can see
so delicate and detailed
like a painting in a museum
young and ageless
in that time seems to stand still
these precious jewels of the earth
grace us with the presence
that the god and goddess are still here
showing us the beauty of the earth
making us see springs painting
its their way of showing us a picture
that everyone can enjoy
so we can see
just how beautiful life can be | |
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04-12-2004, 03:52 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
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Excellent!
Keep it up!  | |
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04-12-2004, 03:57 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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heres a funny one i wrote it cause i was sleepy
sleep
im sitting on the chair
and i start to fall asleep
i realize that im tired
so i head for my room
as i enter the door way
the bed is calling my name
telling me to lay on its cozy surface
my body collapses on the mastress
i get under the covers
making myself warm and relaxed
then slowly i drift off to sleep
having the sweetest of dreams
lol | |
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04-12-2004, 04:48 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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tis me again glad yall like them! heres another one!
poetry rhythms
its about time
i write a poem that rhythms
i think about it in my mind
as i try to think what to write on every line
i start to write with pen in hand
as i dream of a faraway land
where theres a prince fair and true
but then he leaves and makes my heart turn blue
than i think ill write about hope
but i throw that idea away with the whip of my rope
so i decide to write about trout
but wait, i dont like fish and what there about
those ideas gos down the drain
as i try to rattle my brain
i write things for people to see
even things about little old me
as i sit and think
i try to make my poetry lines link
i look through all the poems in my book
writing this isnt as easy as it looks
i think about what to write really hard
$hit i cant think i feel like such a retard
i guess this means im done
now im going out to have some fun
leah
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04-12-2004, 06:54 AM
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|  Luffs Lickin' ElbowsPuffskein
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Wow! Those are really good, they rock. You are a really awesome writer!!
I especially like the first one, it was really well done, and the on was really funny :flowersmile:
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04-12-2004, 07:03 AM
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| | Abraxan
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Fantastic
I love them all keep it up
Emily xxx
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04-12-2004, 07:09 AM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada
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Yay, Leah!
Keep it up | |
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04-12-2004, 10:21 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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hi everyone thanks for reading my poems. im glad that everyone likes them i will try to keep posting more daliy but in this up coming week i work 12 hour shifts at work so i dunno but im glad everyone likes them!
leah mae | |
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04-12-2004, 10:24 PM
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| | Doxy
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Quote: Originally posted by firelily@Apr 12 2004, 02:55 PM hi everyone thanks for reading my poems. im glad that everyone likes them i will try to keep posting more daliy but in this up coming week i work 12 hour shifts at work so i dunno but im glad everyone likes them!
leah mae You're doing fine as it is. I love them
-J
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04-12-2004, 10:29 PM
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| SARKCatch a Falling StarAmberlina Mooncalf
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WOW these are so unbelivably good!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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04-12-2004, 10:31 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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heres another hope you all like it!
Under My Tree
the way the wind blows
through my hair
on a crisp autmun day
as the leaves fall
creating a beautiful aray of colors
i feel a sense of freedom
as i wonder aimlessly through my thoughts
wondering how long
i will be at this sweet serenity
of this peace and quiet
not knowing when it will end
hoping that my pains and problems
will be at rest
it's calm and quiet
as i watch the leaves fall from the trees
telling me about their history
their way of life
i sit and hope
that i can stay in this sweet serernity forever
a voice calls my name
and as i get up to leave
i will always remember
the time i spent under my tree
leah mae | |
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04-12-2004, 10:35 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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thanks prince for that and thanks stardancer as long as you people like them ill keep posting i have like 100 more so its all good and thanks again everyone! leah mae | |
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04-12-2004, 10:47 PM
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| | Doxy
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Awesome, Leah, that one was great | |
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04-13-2004, 12:08 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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hey all tis me again thanks eveyone heres another
nothing i will miss
theres is nothing
im going to miss
not one person
not one thing
not even the house
i grew up in
i wont come back
not till i have to
i dont want to see
the muesums or schools
i went to
ill put it all behind me
never to think of it again
to clear my mind
of what went on
in my childhood
although i will
never forget
there isnt anything
im gonna miss
leah mae | |
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04-13-2004, 02:50 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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and tis another one
forgotten
a love thats forbidden
through the begining of time
the love i want
but can't find
ive longed for this person
since i can remember
this person should be with me
and belongs to no one else
why should i suffer
why is are love againest the law
i can say "its not fair"
but where would that get me
"nowhere"
they try to make us forget
but the memorys still linger
like a dark cloud
that stays with you and ruins your day
not me
not this day
i will step forward
and proceed with my life
and if i keep my hopes up
maybe one day
i will forget the love that got away
leah mae | |
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04-13-2004, 03:08 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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this one is about the earth
our land
are you a free spirit
like the indians are
can you feel the warmth
of the wind on your face
is nature and the indians
talking to you
telling you about its land
and how precious it is
if your a free spirit
you can hear there voices
telling you about the past
and furture of our land
voices that say
make me proud
and preserve our land
so furture generations
can see its beauty
and use it
as the indians once did
our land is priceless
and we are to
so listen to the voices of the past
and save its land
for the children
for our furture
leah mae | |
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04-13-2004, 03:24 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jan 2004
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Thanks for reviewing my poems..."Forgotten" is good, it reminds me of the type I used to write.....no mine aren't all happy and cheerful, if you look closely you can find a deeper angst in them :whisle: ..well, yesh, keep writing! | |
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04-13-2004, 03:59 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wilmington Delaware
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dracnyzz love im glad you like my writeing and i meant that you seem like a very happy go lucky person thats all i wrote it wrong my bad anyway thank you for reading my poems!
leah mae | |
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04-13-2004, 04:05 AM
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| | Abraxan
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Leah these are fantastic I love them all! :rose: I just dont know how you can write so many. I only write poems when I feel like it. Your really talented. You should get these published as well. :rose:
Emily xxx
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