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11-22-2004, 01:43 AM
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#1 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |  Felicia's Poems
I see you in the dark,
But when I turn on a light,
You're gone.
Come back!
I'll shout,
I'll look,
I'll do anything
And everything
To find you.
But I won't see you until
The next time I
Turn off the lights.
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11-22-2004, 11:11 PM
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#2 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: A place where the n00bs don't flock around a piece of meat
Posts: 537
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I like it! Write mroe!  Poet to poet understanding! lol.
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11-23-2004, 10:38 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |
Thank you! But I have writer's block right now! lol
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11-25-2004, 05:08 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |
Come Back Tomorrow
I see you on the street.
Do I know you?
I turn around
for a second.
Then I turn
back to you and
you're gone.
I search
the street in hopes of
finding you.
But I won't see you until
I come back tomorrow.
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11-25-2004, 05:10 PM
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#5 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: A place where the n00bs don't flock around a piece of meat
Posts: 537
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*claps* Yay! Very good! I hate writer's block, since I have it like 50% of the time 
Keep writing!
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11-25-2004, 07:05 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |
This Time Again Tomorrow Quote:
I'm walking down the street and
I hardly know you.
It's just like
we were meant to be.
You tell me to
come back at
this time tomorrow.
So I do.
But where are you?
You're lying in the street.
when the people come,
I get blamed.
I feel so ashamed.
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12-24-2004, 12:45 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |
You
I walk
down the street,
looking for you.
But you're
not there.
I feel so
afraid.
I think that something
bad has happened.
I turn around to
get help.
But I turn back around,
and you're gone.
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01-03-2005, 08:59 PM
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#8 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: ♥reading
Posts: 6,604
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sophie Nesslage
Third Year | Keeper of Ginny's Cuteness ~ Flying Prefect ~ GOBBLE GOBBLE
YAY!-claps- its great! Keep writing more please!
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01-28-2005, 10:10 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Japan~ <3
Posts: 132
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"i really good please right more thanks for the beatiful poems"
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03-26-2005, 05:29 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |
I don't know if this counts because it's from my ff.
She used to be sweet, She used to have red hair. When she was down, no-one gave a care. But now she's a blond. She's dangerous, she's daring, she's sassy, and still very caring. Wanna know her name? You'd better read on. | |
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03-26-2005, 09:48 PM
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| | Granian
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Scotland, UK
Posts: 21,308
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Elijah Wilde
Graduated | Farmer Carter | | Ama's Secret
yeh i would say it sounded like it just need to set your lines properly and then it will be fine
__________________
When I look into the
MIRROR OF ERISED
all that I see is
YOU
*wink*
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04-06-2005, 08:26 AM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Under your bed
Posts: 168
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I like your poems. "You" Is the best if you ask me. But these are good.
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04-06-2005, 08:46 AM
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|  Agony AuntSpazztically AwesomePuffskein
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: with my gorgeous boy
Posts: 1,593
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ms Isabella Lestrange-Wood
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these are good, like the emptyiness they feel.
keep on the good work
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04-12-2005, 12:56 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |  New Poem *dances around her room in happiness*
It's Almost Over
By: FAF
It's almost over.
Only one day to go.
It's almost over.
This I want you to know.
You can beg me stop,
Beg me not to do it.
But that won't help.
Get out of my way, move it.
Guilt won't come my way,
I know what I'm doing.
Don't try to stop me.
My life doesn't need renewing.
Grab the knife from the table,
Hold it up to my neck,
Ready to plunge
to the floor at my death.
Penetrating my wall of pain is the
blood dripping from my throat,
forming a pool of blood,
as thick as a moat.
Smiling and going cross eyed
Seeing my life flash before my eyes.
Everything's turning red.
I can't believe I bought all the lies.
The blood's trickling to the floor,
The hallway's turning red.
Come on now, don't fret.
It's not like I'm going to poisen myself with led.
It's happened.
The room's really dark.
The thing on my neck
is a deadly mark.
The door's fading away.
Hon, I'm beginning to slide
Because I've done it.
I've committed suicide.
Hey, I hope y'all like the new entry. Took me a while to think of it! lol
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04-12-2005, 01:03 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: A place where the n00bs don't flock around a piece of meat
Posts: 537
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Very good! Deep, fresh, cool, interesting dialect with a hint of darkness. Perfection!
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04-15-2005, 12:26 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth | Alert! Alert! I Just Thought of Another Poem! Yay!
Because of You
By: FAF
Because of you,
I found out who I really was.
Because of you,
I'm not sitting around drinking a can of Buz.
Because of you,
I never strayed to far from the sidewalk.
Because of you,
I played on the safe side so I wouldn't get hurt.
I really, truely, cared for you.
On my my bed I'd lay,
And then you go
and throw it all away?
That ain't gonna work no more!
I don't care if you die
I don't care if you cry!
All this is because of you!
If you knew what you were doing,
none of this would've happened!
But you didn't,
so, oh well!
Now I'm fading into darkness.
I hear the ringing in my ears.
The light's fading away.
I screech in pain for all to hear.
My life's been ruined,
so now I stare
at the blood on the floor.
I really don't give a care!
Because of you,
I'm beginning to slide.
Because of you,
I've committed suicide.
Hope you like my new poem! I love it! I love the other one too! lol
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04-28-2005, 11:31 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: A place where the n00bs don't flock around a piece of meat
Posts: 537
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Aww... So sad... Kinda sounds like Harry in Pearl though. woah, the last two poems the last line is the same..
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04-30-2005, 04:57 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
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^^^^^That's why I wrote it! l.o.l
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04-30-2005, 05:03 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: A place where the n00bs don't flock around a piece of meat
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Heh, i figured.  | |
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04-30-2005, 06:07 PM
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#20 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
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^^Stay online!! lol
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05-14-2005, 11:32 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 839
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Bekindi
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I love your work!
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06-15-2005, 02:20 AM
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#22 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: ♥Listening to oldies music and writing the next chapter for my ff on
Posts: 578
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cassie Evans
Fifth |
Guys, don't worry. I'll have a new one soon. Working on a new fic for fanfiction.net. I'll start working on the poem ASAP. K?
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07-09-2005, 02:52 PM
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| | Murtlap
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Australia
Posts: 60
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OMG i love its almost over...................it reminds me of me lol how odd....your a great writer.......
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