No. I dont want him. For a start he is the 40yr old lead vocalist/rhythm guitarist in Metallica. I just would like to meet him and have the chance to say thanks to him.

I understand what you're saying, Fawkes2000. It's amazing how sometimes songs by a certain artist can have a powerful effect on you. It's like they're singing about something you're going through, or have gone through. It's like they are speaking right to you and helping you get through a tough time. I, personally, can think of several different songs that have helped me through difficult times in my own life. It doesn't mean that you want that person. It just means that you can relate to their music, that it has touched you in some way. And isn't that, after all, the whole point? Err . . . I'm not sure how much sense that made, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say . . .

Anyway.
Keep writing. Can't wait to read more from you!

Yeah I understand you. I just admire him so much for what he has done in his life and how he has over come problems and got through it all. He has made a real impression my life.

I have a bit of a block at the moment, but I should have more soon.

Take your time.
I'll be checking in from time to time to see what you've written.

I dont know about this. :unsure: :unsure: But here is something...

Losing Grip

Your life’s going down the drain,
Go on then pour it some more,
Think before you do,
Don’t spill your blood on the floor.

On the top ready to take the leap of your life,
Come on then I am waiting for your end,
Don’t lose your grip,
Whats broken shall find a mend.

Think that you’re ready to hang you head,
Well go on then, tie the rope a little tighter,
Are you sure?
You know it’s not the answer.

Comments would be aprecaited.

I think they're are good (I don't like cussing and stuff) nbut they are really good! try finding out about poetry contests and enter one of yours it could possibly win

I probably have curse's in it because of the music i listen too. Guess its infulenced me.

I have loads of bits, but none seem to be able to match, so all I have is this at the moment.

Ripped

Shut up
Just leave me alone
You’ve already ripped me
Down to the bone

I need to run
Need to escape
From this place
Possessed with hate

I’m screaming inside
Screaming to be heard
But its too dam late
I’ve already died.

Comments once again would be apreciated.

Bumpies! :ermsmile:

nice stuff i really like it!

Thanks for the complement.