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08-30-2003, 12:42 PM
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#26 (permalink)
| | Crup
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yeah well technically, they cant, I have the original written version of these and those saved on word. i think I would win a court battle if someone did try plagirism.
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08-30-2003, 12:44 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
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Yeah and your very opinionated so they would not have a chance. I love winning arguments. :flowersmile:
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08-30-2003, 12:45 PM
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| | Crup
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Gives you a sense of superiority. Even though you know you're right in the first place. Mind you, it's made me good for oral english exams and debates. I always have something to say in them!
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08-30-2003, 12:47 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
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Yeah, I get A's in my English Orals.
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08-30-2003, 12:49 PM
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| | Crup
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me too! freaky.....we had to debate on that tony martin case thing. you know where he shot the guy who was mugging him....ok this is drifting off-topic, should i write more or...
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08-30-2003, 12:55 PM
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#31 (permalink)
| | Crup
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bump
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08-30-2003, 12:58 PM
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#32 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
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Another bump!
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08-30-2003, 01:06 PM
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#33 (permalink)
| | Crup
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This song is called "Down" and is my ultimate fave. I play this with my guitar loads and I just love the melody!
Down
It's funny when you're fellin' so unwanted,
How you can be involved and then just cast aside.
One moment you're rollin' thru the aleys,
And then you fall from way up high.
Chorus
You build yourself up till there's no hope at all,
You're flyin' up high carin' for nothing at all.
Till somethin' comes along, sends ya crashin' down,
Aint it funny how you never realise,
You never get up till your down.
How dellusional do people seem sometimes?
Aimin' to crawl around and then just hide.
Dont it seem obvious when ya think it all thru,
That your destiny is all dow to you.
But then everythin' must come crashin' down,
One goes up then the other goes down.
Chorus
You build yourself up till there's no hope at all,
You're flyin' up high carin' for nothing at all.
Till somethin' comes along, sends ya crashin' down,
Aint it funny how you never realise,
You never get up till your down.
Well the ba$tard that did this to me,
And that b!tch, oh well she'll never see,
tthe crap that they are,
hanging around,
And then bringin' us crashin' down.
Chorus
You build yourself up till there's no hope at all,
You're flyin' up high carin' for nothing at all.
Till somethin' comes along, sends ya crashin' down,
Aint it funny how you never realise,
You never get up till your down.
Now I'm on a high,
Restin' up high,
Not waiting for you to bring me down.
I know that you will,
But try all you like,
You cannot bring me down,
And I wont be coming down,
You're the one who's the fool now.
Chorus
You build yourself up till there's no hope at all,
You're flyin' up high carin' for nothing at all.
Till somethin' comes along, sends ya crashin' down,
Aint it funny how you never realise,
You never get up till your down.
You ba$tard you cant bring me down,
I dont want b!tch around,
Oh you wont be bringing me down,
Cos you're the one who's the fool now.
I sorry about the cussing, but it's a part of my work and i cant and wont censor my creativity for anyone.
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08-30-2003, 01:35 PM
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| | Puffskein
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thats great! i don't mind, its just too bad that the site MAKES you censor it for the most part...
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08-30-2003, 01:36 PM
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#35 (permalink)
| | Crup
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i wasn't sure whether they would change the words, thank goodness they didn't!
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08-30-2003, 01:36 PM
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#36 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
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just bumping now...
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08-30-2003, 01:38 PM
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#37 (permalink)
| | Crup
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thanks alot
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08-30-2003, 01:44 PM
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#38 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
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Do you sing aswell? Bump, Bump, Bump.
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08-30-2003, 01:45 PM
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#39 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
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bump
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08-30-2003, 01:45 PM
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#40 (permalink)
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Hey!
I say in my opinion that this a great poem.But hey! you dont need to use REALLY BAD LANGUAGE!!!
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08-30-2003, 01:47 PM
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#41 (permalink)
| | Crup
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Quote: Originally posted by Fawkes2000@Aug 30 2003, 12:44 PM
Do you sing aswell? Bump, Bump, Bump. yes I do. I also play guitar (acoustic and electric) and the drums.
"down" is actually a song, whereas the others are just lyrics. I actually have put a melody with "down" on my guitar (acoustic)
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08-30-2003, 01:49 PM
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| | Crup
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Quote: Originally posted by anjana90@Aug 30 2003, 12:45 PM
Hey!
I say in my opinion that this a great poem.But hey! you dont need to use REALLY BAD LANGUAGE!!! I dont use REALLY bad language. Just that song had the right feel to it and those words fitted with the melody ebst. To me, there is not such thing as cussing or swearing. It's just a mater of being creative with your words. The words are my paint as I am the artists; I use them in whatever way I see fit.
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08-30-2003, 01:52 PM
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#43 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
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yeah, theres worse things than that.
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08-30-2003, 01:52 PM
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#44 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
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Are you doing music, or creative arts stuff at your sixth form? cos you could really do well in it. Agreeing on that the language is not that bad. Metallica swear a lot, but it does not make me swear any more. It just happens to fit in.
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08-30-2003, 01:56 PM
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| | Crup
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Quote: Originally posted by Fawkes2000@Aug 30 2003, 12:52 PM
Are you doing music, or creative arts stuff at your sixth form? cos you could really do well in it. Agreeing on that the language is not that bad. Metallica swear a lot, but it does not make me swear any more. It just happens to fit in. exactly, alot of artists are MUCH worse. ie: eminem :o 
No I'm not doing performing arts, I'm considering doing drama, but music is a no-no. I dont like performing in front of big-headed people and they're the only people who're doing that. But I am starting at a drama group which encourages ainsing/writing aswell so...
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08-30-2003, 02:02 PM
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#46 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
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lol, i love eminem. maybe thats why i dont mind cussing so much...
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08-30-2003, 02:04 PM
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| | Crup
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well i'm not as bad as him!
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08-30-2003, 02:07 PM
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#48 (permalink)
| | Crup
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I dont think I have anymore yet, hmmmmm, I'm going to write some more soon, this will not do!
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08-30-2003, 02:12 PM
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#49 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
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i dont think anyones as bad as eminem...
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08-30-2003, 02:14 PM
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#50 (permalink)
| | Crup
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very true! I'm posting on destiny star!
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