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08-31-2009, 10:25 PM
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Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco##  Okey Dokey....
And Hey....
I Just Posted A new Thread For A romance Story....
So Look Out For it....
hehehehehehheeheh
Pams Hun!!!!!!
-Xavier- look foreward to reading your thread. whats it called? me and kat (cursedkatie) are doing another one together which she posted today too!
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08-31-2009, 10:38 PM
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| | Puffskein
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I forgot what Its Called....
HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cant wait to read yours and CursedKatie's Story....
Pams!!!!!!
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09-01-2009, 07:05 PM
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
The Grounds Of Hogwarts
Over top mountains
Where the steely caps peak
Lay unknowing treasures
That Gentlemen seek
The forest grows wildly
Fate sprinkles the ground
Where creatures are lurking
Want not to be found
The lake, it is true
hides monstourous depths
All mannor of sealife
Crouching, deeper it gets
The castle, in glory
Stands high and proud
Wind whipping it's turrets
Screaming and loud
But amongst all of this
A gentleness lies
Of uncontrolled magic
And begins, now, to rise
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I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
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09-01-2009, 09:37 PM
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| | Puffskein
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hehehehe first to Post...
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier-
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09-02-2009, 11:16 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
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I almost heard that to song! That was real nice.
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09-02-2009, 11:21 AM
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## hehehehe first to Post...
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier- thankyou luffie  Quote:
Originally Posted by SeerCassandraTrelawney I almost heard that to song! That was real nice. ooooh, song! thankyou
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09-02-2009, 03:07 PM
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| | Pogrebin
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Ooh! I loved the way you described everything and then say that something is beginning to rise. It sounded so cool! I thought it was almost like a song as well! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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09-10-2009, 04:26 AM
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| | Firecrab
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I love it all!! I've just read them and I think that I'm going to start a threadof my own, but I'm not sure yet.
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09-17-2009, 06:59 PM
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Haii! so i havnt written a poem for about a million years, and since EVERYONE is writing such great poems at the mo, i though the time was ripe to start again
Left in the Wild
You cannot hope but imagine
The anger I feel toward you now
After everything we’ve said and done
How could you? Tell me how.
How can you even consider
Leaving something that is yours
After my parents died for me
And left for distant shores
They didn’t have a choice!
And now you’re running away?!
I bet they would give anything
If they could make you stay
You see, I have no family
And you dream of giving up?!
Of running away, and finding peace
Without burdens of love
Lupin, you’re my friend
My uncle and my father
If you do this, your child’s heart
will plunge to a sea of laver
I’ve never known my dad, my mum
It hurts more than any flack
Id face Tom Riddle a thousand times
If I could bring them back
So don’t you see? You cannot leave!
What will become of your child?
He will wander where his father is
Why he was left to face the wild...
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
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09-17-2009, 07:31 PM
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awwwwwwwww! that was amazing! and I think i firgured out in the second stanza what it was about
WOOOOO! way to go
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09-17-2009, 07:35 PM
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by firenjen Haii! so i havnt written a poem for about a million years, and since EVERYONE is writing such great poems at the mo, i though the time was ripe to start again Yes, Zoerawrr, that means YOU! Quote:
Originally Posted by Zoerawrr awwwwwwwww! that was amazing! and I think i firgured out in the second stanza what it was about
WOOOOO! way to go :Hmm: Thankies
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09-18-2009, 02:12 AM
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| | Firecrab
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Awesome!!!
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09-18-2009, 12:22 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Very Good!
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09-18-2009, 04:23 PM
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| | Pogrebin
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OMG, i think i'm going to cry! That was so sad and meaningful! I loved the way you showed their feelings and emotions! You've done a very good job! Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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09-23-2009, 04:05 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Just a quicky, for Hermione and Ron:
When the Night is Raging
When the wind is blowing
And the shores are turning
I think of you
To keep me safe
When the sea is swirling
And the sky is changing
I look to you
To hold me close
When the night is raging
And the fires are storming
I ask for you
To watch for me
But when your not htere
It doesn't matter
I can walk into the sea
I can face the wind boldly
I can sit in the night
I can crawl through the fire
And if i die
It doesnt matter
Because i'll be with you
Forever, and Ever.
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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09-23-2009, 06:33 PM
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Aw! That was so cute! I felt so fuzzy and warm inside! It was really sweet! I love the ending! That was one of the cutest part of the poem. Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Sorry about before in the Common Room (someone told me not to). Sorry!
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09-24-2009, 11:37 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Great!
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09-24-2009, 01:47 PM
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| | Dementor
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SWEET!!!! Makes me fell happy and melancoly all over!
MORE!!!
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10-03-2009, 04:56 PM
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
Forget me not - By Severus Snape
Forget me not when you are happy
When leaves fall around your lightened frame
Forget me not when you are joyed
When you'll never need me ever again
Forget me not when you safe in his arms
When he comforts what i cant
Forget me not when i cant whisper
The words to a forgotten dance
I will still love
With all my heart
You firey hair
And glamourous laugh
When winters are cold
And ice pools are hollow
The memory of you
Will be hard to swallow
So forget me not
When you're with love
Forget me not
When you're above..
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I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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10-04-2009, 02:09 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
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Awww, that's adorable.
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10-09-2009, 09:43 PM
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That was so sad and yet so sweet! I can't believe it! I felt so sorry for Severus! I love how you used repetition! I loved the ending as well! You've really showed Severus' good side - his side that loves Lily. Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Sorry i didn't reply earlier!
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01-01-2010, 06:52 PM
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I love your poems! there so amazing, you should write more!
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01-01-2010, 07:06 PM
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| | Mooncalf
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wow all these poems are so lovely...i loved the Snape one and the one of Harry for Dumbledore and Harry for Lupin about Ted...those were really sweet and nice...
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01-15-2010, 09:41 PM
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by Droo Awww, that's adorable.
Thanks  Quote:
Originally Posted by hermionesclone That was so sad and yet so sweet! I can't believe it! I felt so sorry for Severus! I love how you used repetition! I loved the ending as well! You've really showed Severus' good side - his side that loves Lily. Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Sorry i didn't reply earlier! thats alright lol. and thannks  Quote:
Originally Posted by grangerfan8 I love your poems! there so amazing, you should write more! Wow, thankyou. I want to write more, but im having a bit of it a mental blck right now hahaha Quote:
Originally Posted by harita wow all these poems are so lovely...i loved the Snape one and the one of Harry for Dumbledore and Harry for Lupin about Ted...those were really sweet and nice... thankyou  im glad you liked it
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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01-19-2010, 04:37 AM
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| | Firecrab
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Wow,
NewReader&NewFan!
That was very deep(:
It touched me, quite honestly, no joke.
It's so mature..
~Courtney~
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