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08-24-2009, 08:43 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Fifth Year |  Distract Me, Please - Sa13+ so you can convince yourself that im cute
made by me
Hi im Jen! This is my first go in the poetry Vault so tell me what you think!
I also have two Fan Fics, so feel free to check them out if you have time or if oyu wanna. They're both in the romance section and they anre called Echos and Troubled.
Disclaimer: i dont own any of the Harry Potter Universe, it belongs to Miss J K Rowling 
This first poem is about the idea of what lurks behind the curtain that Sirius fell though. I hope you like it.
so here goes:
************************************************** ************************************ Through the Curtain
Through the curtain,
Where nothing belongs
where smoke swirls and swishes
Singing ghostly lit songs
They’re greedy, they’re wanting
They’re long lives are watered
They wait for the innocent
And prey on the tortured
But you must be strong,
And keep your mind set
It keeps me awake and I scream and I shout
And I wake in the night when I’m covered in sweat
From the torture I know that they’re putting you through
But you have to be strong
It’s all down to you
You fell though the curtain and into their trap
I still want to blame you
For crossing the gap
But even in death I see your eyes,
Sparkling and shining and happy with pride
But you fell though the curtain...
And threw me aside..
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Let me know what you think  
Last edited by Droo; 12-23-2009 at 03:18 PM.
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08-29-2009, 02:50 PM
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Great Job! Welcome to the Script Crypt poetry vault, please be sure to read all the rules and post often.
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08-29-2009, 02:52 PM
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oh my god that was a awessome poem i'll definitly be reading your poems post more soon 
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08-29-2009, 03:32 PM
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| | Puffskein
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That was AMAZING!!! I'm definately checking out your fan-fics now!!
*xxx_Jenna_xxx*
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08-29-2009, 05:47 PM
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| | Puffskein
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AWESOME POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier -
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08-29-2009, 07:06 PM
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Aw! That poem was so good! Wow! Jen: you're really good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: New reader!
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08-30-2009, 08:03 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Thanks for the comments so far, its great to get feedback
This is a poem about Tonks loving Lupin Deep Sleepy Seas
I dont care what you are
I dont care what you do
Ive always known one thing
And that's i love you
You tear and you rip
And you gash at your soal
I'd rather give mine
To help you, thats all
Because if theres no you
Theres no me to survive
I'd rather be dead with you
Than without you, alive
Just never stop loving me
And Ill never leave
And we'll crash together
Like deep sleepy seas....
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Last edited by firenjen; 06-10-2010 at 09:54 PM.
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08-30-2009, 08:36 PM
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thats a cool poem XD
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08-30-2009, 08:54 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
Hmmm im in a poemy mood  This is about harry when dumbledore died  Enjoy You Fell
You fell.
You fell, and you left me,
To conqure this height
But i cannot do it
Its not out of fright
Its just im too young
And I cannot see
How the Dark Lord could be discouraged
Or frightened by me
And now im alone
to do this great task
the unanswered questions
leave me aghast
For you could have told me
Helped me, let me in
I feel unprepared
It hasnt sunk in
You say i must die
But how do i go
Knowing who im leaving
It wont happen, no
You fell, You died
Without taking my hand
Please stop to help me
Before you land...
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08-30-2009, 10:58 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That Was Like Sooooooooo
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awwww!!!!!!!!!
It Was Sooooooooooo Sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Loved It!!!!!!!!!
Pams!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-30-2009, 10:59 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
wow, quite a compliament form the master of the script crypt | |
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08-30-2009, 11:00 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Aww...
That not true....
Im just a Simple Poet writer....
I really loved it...
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08-30-2009, 11:07 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
thankyou
and, er, have you READ your stuff?!?! simple, me no think so! more like AWSOME!
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08-30-2009, 11:09 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Ya I read my stuff...
Its Just Plain...
I love your Poems....
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!
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08-30-2009, 11:22 PM
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Plain??!?!?!?!PLAIN?!?!?!
u fool! lol
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08-31-2009, 03:51 PM
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Enough chatting, more poems! 
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08-31-2009, 04:30 PM
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Oh wow! Those poems were so good! I felt like crying in the one where Dumbledore died! It was so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Xavier: what do you mean by you're simple and plain? You're poems are nothing less than awesome! That goes for you too, Jen!
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08-31-2009, 05:21 PM
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Originally Posted by SeerCassandraTrelawney  Enough chatting, more poems! sorry   Quote:
Originally Posted by hermionesclone Oh wow! Those poems were so good! I felt like crying in the one where Dumbledore died! It was so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Xavier: what do you mean by you're simple and plain? You're poems are nothing less than awesome! That goes for you too, Jen!
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08-31-2009, 05:23 PM
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wow! These are great!
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08-31-2009, 08:57 PM
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Originally Posted by LilyLunaGinnyPotter wow! These are great! ooohh new reader!! yay!!
im planning on getting another up tonight peeps | |
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08-31-2009, 09:03 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Hahahha
I cant help myself I love chatting...
AND STALKING THIS THREAD...
HEHEHEHE
Because I love them sooooooo much...
WRITE MORE
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08-31-2009, 10:06 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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AH man! i just wrote another one and when i tried to copy it it deleated!!
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08-31-2009, 10:10 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehehehehe
-Xavier-
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08-31-2009, 10:16 PM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
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Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehehehehe
-Xavier- i know!! i really liked it as well! it was about voldy!!
(also, thechnically this isnt chatting because its about poems, and its a kerfuffle and a too-doo)
i might try and remember it and post it tomorrow tho
also, xavier, go check out new troubled chapter! its so exciting!! (im excited about my own story, i know its lame but eeeeeeeeeeep!)
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08-31-2009, 10:18 PM
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| | Puffskein
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Okey Dokey....
And Hey....
I Just Posted A new Thread For A romance Story....
So Look Out For it....
hehehehehehheeheh
Pams Hun!!!!!!
-Xavier-
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