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12-30-2003, 05:28 PM
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#51 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Grindylow
They live underwater
and in between seaweed
a fight from them
you do not need
They are excellent swimmers
with really long fingers
if you run into them
swim away, don't linger
They love to grab hold
and love to drag you down
so listen to me
if you don't, you might drown
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12-30-2003, 05:30 PM
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#52 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
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| COol! I like that one ! I'll take your advice! Lol
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12-30-2003, 05:31 PM
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#53 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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thanks
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12-30-2003, 07:15 PM
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#54 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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Ron Weasley
No greatnes to show
when he began
the wizards life
in this magical land
Brother Charlie was a seeker
Fred and George were both beaters
Bill and Percy were both prefects
and became head boys, the leaders
competing with his brothers
you can say it was hard
with brothers like Fred and George
you can't let down your guard
He was made prefect
in his fifth year
yet he still had a ways to go
to be with his brothers up there
Keeper tryouts came
he wasn't the best
but he made it all the same
he put himself to the test
During the Final match
he was playin pretty good
He didn't let the quaffle past
he took the place of Wood
Now he is somewhat great
this wizard that we see
yet he may not be the best
his names still Ron Weasley
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12-31-2003, 01:36 AM
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#55 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Sorceror's Stone
This is a dog with three heads you see
Its extremely tall and Hagrid named it Fluffy
It gaurds a trap door on the third floor
beyond it holds some traps and something more
It holds a creation by Nicholas Flamel
That Voldemort needed to make himself well
It's a little rock that grants immortality
But Voldemorts plans were foiled by a boy named Harry
By Dumbledores orders the stone was destroyed
And as from now Proffesor Quirrell's unemployed
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01-01-2004, 04:04 PM
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#56 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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How do you guys like my new poems?
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01-02-2004, 01:25 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: U.S.A.
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PROFESSOR SNAPE
Professor Snape is a mean but wise one you see
He teaches in the dungeons of Hogwarts as creepy it can be!
He saved Harry in Harry's first year at school
If he hadn't Harry would've been squashed like goo!
By: Max
(P.S.- Crazymutant2000 gave me permission to post in his poetry!!)
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01-02-2004, 01:31 AM
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#58 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
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yay! more new ones! i love the one about Ron Weasley. i think you described him perfectly. :flowersmile:
i also like mpmattack03's one about Snape.- it's very cute! :sorcerer:
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01-02-2004, 01:41 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: U.S.A.
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Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01-02-2004, 01:52 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Wondering around out by the lake waiting for Draco to show up...
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Sixth | Hey Chuck, why didn't you tell me you wrote poetry? I love them they are really good. Oh and yours 2 mpmattack03. keep up the good work.
post more plzzz |
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01-02-2004, 02:00 AM
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#61 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003
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| these are cute! i like them all! :sorcerer: |
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01-02-2004, 02:14 AM
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#62 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: U.S.A.
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THE WEASLEY PARENTS
Mrs Weasley is a busy lady you see
With 7 kids to raise she is barely ever free!
Mr. Weasley works in the Ministry of magic
Something happens there that is very tragic!
By:Max
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01-02-2004, 05:16 PM
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#63 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Thanks for posting some new poems Max. For any of you who didn't know who mpmattack03 was, he is my cousin. Sorry that I didn't tell you I wrote poems Star. I guess I kind of forgot. Thanks to everyone else for replying. Glad you guys liked them. I'll post more as soon as I think about something to make a poem about.
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01-02-2004, 05:50 PM
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| Puffskein
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Cho and Harry's first kiss
In the room of requirement
under the mistletoe
Cho was crying
as you may already know
Harry came over
to help her out
and to see what the crying
was all about
Yet she made a move
as you may already know
they ended up kissing
under the mistletoe
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01-02-2004, 11:19 PM
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#65 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: U.S.A.
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DOBBY THE HOUSE ELF
Dobby sometimes annoys Harry
But once you get to him he's not so scary!
He helped Harry in the Triwizard games
Now he works in the kitchens so hes not so lame!
By:Max
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01-03-2004, 02:30 AM
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#66 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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keep it up Max
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01-03-2004, 03:36 AM
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| Horklump
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: U.S.A.
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ok i'll keep writing
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01-08-2004, 01:31 AM
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| Puffskein
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I have writers block at the moment so I am now taking requests of subjects to write my poems about. They have to be harry potter related. Anyone who can help me out, if you give me a subject to write about that is harry potter related I will try to do so. Thanks
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01-08-2004, 04:02 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
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hmmm... how about one that's about the Chamber of Secrets (the chamber itself not just the book) i'm pretty sure you haven't done one about that. (just the Basalisk-sp?-) :flowersmile:
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01-08-2004, 04:25 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Wondering around out by the lake waiting for Draco to show up...
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Sixth | WoW I love the pomes. keep up the good work. post more soon plzzz |
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01-08-2004, 05:48 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Thanks for posting Star and thanks for the idea Blair. I'll try to write a poem about the chamber of secrets if I can.
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01-09-2004, 12:28 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Chamber of Secrets
This place was made by Salazar Slytherin
That is said to hold a great creature within
It was made long ago when Hogwarts was found
yet no one could find it when they looked around
The entrance was located in a restroom
Yet down below it was like a tomb
Animals bones lying across the ground
a little further on there was snake skin to be found
Tom Marvolo Riddle was the dangerous sort
After being Slytherins heir, He became lord Voldemort
He was the one that could release the beast
Upon the students at Hogwarts for it to feast
Harry Potter came and said not a word
but instead killed the beast with Godric Gryffindors sword
That day Voldemort almost came back to life
Harry used the snakes fang like a knife
Harry stabbed the diary and voldemort died
Tom could consider that chance at life denied
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01-09-2004, 12:42 AM
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#73 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
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yay! that was great! thank you for writing it! :flowersmile:
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01-09-2004, 12:57 AM
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#74 (permalink)
| Puffskein
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your welcome and thanks for replying and helping me with the topic.
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01-10-2004, 01:02 AM
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#75 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Wondering around out by the lake waiting for Draco to show up...
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Sixth | WoW I love that poem. It's really good. Hope you post more soon.
talk to you later Chuck. |
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