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12-26-2003, 07:53 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
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these are great! i love them. they are most deffinately unique. Please write more, they're really lovely. (i especially like the 'Animagus' and 'Harry Potter (Legend) poems) :flowersmile:
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12-26-2003, 08:47 PM
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| Puffskein
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Thestrals
Only when you've seen death
you can see these creatures
and their many wonderous
horse-like features
If you can see them
you know they have wings
and fly through the air
like owls and other things
They are extremely fast
and like to eat meat
they have scaley type skin
and hooves on their feet
You may not see them
but still they are there
with their horse-like features
and their wings which they flair
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12-27-2003, 12:25 AM
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| Puffskein
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Devils Snare
This is a plant that hates sun light
If you fall into its coils, It begins to fight
It will strangle until your as good as dead
It's limbs aren't made of wood but vines instead
All you need to stop it is a little light
and the devils snare will cease to fight
Just remember this and you may live the day
that you get caught in a devils snares way
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12-27-2003, 02:41 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
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these are really good! i love the 'Thestrals' one. :flowersmile:
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12-27-2003, 06:32 AM
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| Horklump
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Hey charlie good job on the poems i will record some too!!!
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12-27-2003, 05:50 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
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Sorting Hat
It finds the place where you belong
while it sings a little song
Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, and Slytherin
It chooses the one which you best belong in
It looks in your head to see what it can find
It chooses your house by your state of mind
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12-28-2003, 08:23 PM
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| Puffskein
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How do you guys like my poems?
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12-28-2003, 10:48 PM
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| Jarvey
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wow!! i luv these poems!! keep it up!!
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12-28-2003, 11:44 PM
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| Puffskein
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Boggart
A boggart is a nasty foe
It becomes whatever you fear, you know
This is a creature that loves dark places
If you disturb him he'll show you his many faces
If your ever in trouble from this sneaky creature
Shout RIDDIKULUS and remove his feature
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12-28-2003, 11:46 PM
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| Jarvey
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great!! u r very talented!!
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12-28-2003, 11:46 PM
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| Puffskein
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| Great!!
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12-29-2003, 12:30 AM
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| Puffskein
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thanks
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12-29-2003, 01:33 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Jul 2003
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You have a gift for taking anything, and describing it in a clever little rhyme. That can be very difficult. Good job!
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12-29-2003, 03:25 PM
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| Puffskein
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thanks
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12-29-2003, 08:20 PM
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| Puffskein
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I've got writers block right now but I'll try to get some new poems as soon as possible
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12-30-2003, 01:17 AM
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| Puffskein
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Avada Kedavra
One of the worst spells of all
get hit by this and you will fall
its an unforgivable spell they say
get hit by this and drop that day
there is no one who could ever stay alive
a curse like this which Harry Potter survived
Avoid this curse or you will die
once your hit, there you'll lie
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12-30-2003, 01:28 AM
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| Official -()- Seeker Chizpurfle
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Cool poems you got there. Hope to read more of it.
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12-30-2003, 01:30 AM
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| Puffskein
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thanks
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12-30-2003, 02:28 AM
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| Puffskein
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thanks
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12-30-2003, 02:36 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
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| oh! i just love the one about the Boggart! :wub: these are such cute little poems (i hope you don't take that offesively, i mean that they are very good) mine are all very long and confusing, yours are so short and sweet, those are sometimes the hardest to make. you do an excelent job! please keep posting!
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12-30-2003, 04:47 AM
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| Streeler
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alright! these are pretty good. short 'n sweet- deffinately something i like. don't stop now!
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12-30-2003, 04:44 PM
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| Puffskein
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thanks for replying
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12-30-2003, 04:45 PM
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| Nogtail
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These are not pretty good..............They are REALLY good! :flowersmile:
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12-30-2003, 04:48 PM
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| Puffskein
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thanks
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