OK! This is my first time to actually post any of my poems I made this week! I hope you like them! oh, and each poem is about a character in Hp!
Harry:

My World is like an empty corner,
full of shadows shaping my thoughts,
it trys to cover my beating heart.
You can never enter my world,
there is too much sorrow and loneliness.
There's tears of pain and hatred flowing down this corner,
its only meant for me, no one else can see.
My world is my dark corner, I hid from blinding light.
Sorrow pours on my soul like falling rain...
I am wounded by the truth...
My heart feels abandoned,
I can no longer see,
the truth blinds me like light.
I cry in the darkness has covered my world...
My world is falling apart in tears...
Its like an empty corner..
never to be seen by anyone else

Dementors (well..kinda,lol.):

Darkness fades my every path,
as light itself begans to dim.
Its like a walking shadow,
never to be seen or ever been.
Its covers corners and walkways of my heart,
like the cold night sky.
And yet I remain a living being,
but as an empty soul
I feel so cold as my light begans to fade away
This darkness has become my light,
its numbs me so...
it fades my every path,
as my soul wanders else where

I am gonna type more soon! plx tell me what u think!

Well. That's enough to make me want to shoot myself in the head... way to write what you feel though! You're a good writer, and while I can't say i enjoyed this piece, it certainly got to me, which says that you're doing your job. As long as this isn't all I get to see from you, I think it's great!

See I told you Carolina

*Smiles* yay! I am happy now! lol. I am planning to post sum more later today! Thanks guys!

Ok here are the other two I just made today..

Lost:

My heart is twisted with pain and sorrow,
my thoughts have no longer become my own.
My soul is lost though these desperate tears..
I feel so numb inside,
like I can't breath.
No matter how much I fight,
there is still an empty hole inside,
draining my life away.
Sorrow rains down my soul.
No path to guide me back.
No one to show me the way.
I am lost in my own body...
Shakened and haunted by my own terror,
I am abandoned by my own thoughts
that has no longer become my own.
I am smothered by my own darkness,
no light to guide the way,
no sunrise to tell me its day.
I am forever losted with my abandoned soul.

Red Tears:

Tears run down my pale face,
washing my happiness away.
I feel so numb...
I feel so cold...
My life has fallen apart because of these tears...
These tears running down my white cheeks,
as they spill onto the cold floor.
I am lost, and no one cares
I am alone, crying these sad tears
These tears now mixed with red,
as they spill onto the blood stained floor.
And no one cares...
I feel so numb...
But its too late...
I am alone, crying these red tears

oh wow, these really hit the spot! i love your descriptions and you really get deep into the subject, giving it all you can to make it seem realistic, but what you achieve is way beyond anything that is realistic. You seem to get a deep sense of what's going on around you and the characters that you write about. i deifnitely think that more is in need! also, check out my poetry if you'd like, it's somewhat similar...

Awww! Thx! I feel so special! lol. I am going to read ur poems, Alyonna! Oh and I am planning to write some more by next week! Thanks everyone for reading!

Really good your poems are awesome i really like 'em keep posting...

Thx! It really means alot u guys! I am planning to post sum good ones by Monday..lots of hw...

you're keeping us waiting... the signs of a good poet. lol, love them all....

They are awesome! Keep it up!!! One of the best poems I have read! Very depressing though, but good

AHHH!! I haven't been on lately in SS because of my computer..but I promise I will be posting them up by this week!

your poems are very good. the oly words that stick out though just a bit are all the i's, which you have gotten better with. i only really noticed it a lot in your first one posted so job well done keep writing!

Holding the truth to my heart,
Clutching it tight under my clasp.
It won't ever leave me alone,
like the lies you have given me before

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A small flower..
Its petals torn.
Bleeding into the concrete.
Its fragile body,
now broken into pieces.
And no one notices this torn beauty,
AS they walk over it,
only noticing a large, cold quarter beside it.

A Silent tear in the endless rain,
Why do the heavens cry?
Our earth drains it sorrow tears,
and yet they're forever lost.
And this quiet tear,
blue as my heart,
gently rolls from my window,
washing my soul away,
as it falls onto the cold ground.
No one seems to notice,
only the pouring rain. (<--I use that line alot, lol)
A Silent tear in the endless rain..
Why do the Heavens cry?

WOW your a talented poet.
I love Lost and well quiet frankly all your poems rock!
keep writin I wanna here more.

Thanks a bunchies! lol.
Here's another one I just made up today after school.


My Lost Heart:

Where is my heart that I lost so long ago?
Is it in your grasp?
Or have you let go?
I wait for its return,
silently,
only knowing it has flown..
On that day you lefted me,
leaving me so alone.
I hope it will come back to me..
Living a life without a heart is so cold..
I wonder if you know,
how long it has been,
when I lost my heart,
and soul,
within?
And now I ask you,
pleading please,
to set my soul free..
Find my old and broken heart,
and return it back to me..

Wow, Amazing French!



PAMS absolutely fantastic!

Thx a bunches! These are probly not my best poems, and might not make much sense, but here u go, lol.

My soul is like the river,
flowing past my heart.
How can you stop a river,
once it start?



How can you see the Moon,
if its halfway shone?
Do you make up its half,
and call it your own?
I ask you,
if you have done this before,
to my old and broken heart,
that lost me before?
You see,
my heart is like that Moon,
half only shone,
while the other is my own.

I am just blown away by your poems! They're really awesome.

Thank you so much! I really am happy that you are replying to my poems! If you have any suggestions, please post! Here's a poem, its not depressing, but oh well, lol. This is for my boyfriend Joe (Real life, lol):

My Silver keg
A silver keg beneath the stones,
Oh how I guard it so!
To never let anyone though,
my little silver door.
And my heart,
never lost and never owned.
But somehow you came across my keg,
casting the stones outside of me.
I closed my eyes in fear and dread,
fearing it will never come back again.
You took my heart and soul,
and somehow guided me out of fear within.
Replacing it with love and care,
giving me hope to share.

A Chance
How can you tell what love is,
if you never held it in your gasp?
Love is precious (sp?),
and changing ever so fast,
So open up your heart,
and don't close your eyes,
because a chance might pass you by.
And remember one more thing,
don't be afraid to try again,
because love can come once again.

Eyes of the Storm:

Eyes of the Storm,
so teary from sorrow..
Spilling thoughts of hope,
lost forver.
Sanity forgotten along its tears,
knowing not what to fear.
Oh Eyes of the Storm,
what is it that you fear?
Your own terror,
or what you love so dear?
It was washed away..
So deep in streams,
you poured down your sorrow,
and your dreams.
Oh Eyes of the Storm,
have you no Sanity?

Yea, I know everyone else said this, but these are really good, I love freeverse poems

Yay! More people reading my poems! Lol. Thank you so much for replying! It means alot to me! I am so thankful! Yays! I should be posting more soon by this week.

Hm..I am sorry I hadn't posted in a while..I had finals just last week. I will be posting some new poems I have been woking on soon. Thank you for reading!