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Sk8er girl · 03-11-2005, 02:48 AM

This is a poem I guess you could call it of how I feel sometimes about things like friend and all. I wrote this when I was mad at my friends because they were being really mean and stuff like that and it's sort of how I feel when Im at school..........I guess Hope someone likes it I'll be adding more of my writing later on

Hurt

Have you ever been hurt by someone you trusted.
I have one year when you meet them they're nice,cool.
The next year they turn on you.they say "why don't you leave,just kidding" or "no one likes you,why dont you leave". They say it's cuase there playin' but you know they aint,that hurts.

You dont say anything you just laugh along with them cause you think it wont hurt if you laugh along with them and they'll forget.
But deep inside it's cutting you like a knife. you wanna say something,but you dont cause your afraid of being alone again.
They make fun of the way you walk,dress,and act.you dont say anything cause again your afraid of being left alone.
that hurts.

Then one day you just snap because all that anger boiled over inside of you!
You tell them to "stop" and one of them say "what! I didnt do anything"
But you know they did it because they have a big stupid grin on their face.
You say "shut up" and they just say "shut up" to you like your The one who did something but you didnt do anything.
that hurts.

You walk away to a "friend" you think they'll understand...
but there with there "new friends" so you just ask for the time.
You wanna tell them but you dont have the guts to tell them.
While doing all that you get looked weirdly by people likes Your from space or something....
that hurts

The bell rings and you go to class by yourself.
Your so mad that you blame everything on yourself and you stay quiet all day long.
People ask you if "your ok" you lie and say "yeah im ok"
you go home and you fall asleep with all the things that happened during the day.
You fall asleep waiting for what's going to happen on Monday,while being hurt.

Sk8er girl · 03-13-2005, 12:09 AM

Heres another one of my poems my friend read it and she liked it so hope someone like it on here

"Drowning"
As I hold on to you...you slip away with my heart and my soul. I'm trying to hold on to the little pieces of what we had when we were together. But I'm so scared that I'm drowning with all your lies and your broken promises that I dont know what to do. I'm so lost and lonely that you dont even care that I'm drowning in what we used to have. What I thought was love but really it was lies and broken promises, you made me feel so stupid and foolish. I loved you but I guess that love is gone....... So I stay here drowning until I find what we once had.

Angel8807 · 03-21-2005, 06:41 PM

These are good poems, and I'm sure people can relate.
Keep up the good work.

(and if you ever need to talk to some one the SS Support Group is in the Charing Crossroads section. People will be glad to listen and help.)

Sk8er girl · 03-22-2005, 01:54 AM

WOW! You really like them, I thought they were crap lol but thanks and I'll take a look at the Charing Crossroads.

This poem is a poem i wrote in class like 3 months ago hope someone likes it "Shy" When I'm around you I get so shy that my mouth gets all dry and my brain turns to mush. Its so funny huh? How I get so shy around yo? When I talk to you I dont know what to say and I smile and giggle. It's scary sometimes of how shy I get, but you get like that too. We stay quiet, and smile. It's funny how we both get shy around each other, until one day you come and break my heart.

Angel8807 · 03-22-2005, 03:08 PM

It's still good work. You're a budding poet in the making.

Sk8er girl · 03-23-2005, 02:06 AM

Heres another one of my poems Im glad someone is enjoying my writings

This poem has like a little story to it, ok whenever I'm mad or something I write so this was when I wrote some guy a note telling him how I felt about him. But he tottally ignored me cause everyone at school thinks I'm goth and all which I dont care and that a pretty stupid reson to ignore someone.

"Heartbroken"

I told you I liked you, I slipped all my feelings for you on a piece of paper, just for your eyes to see. First thing you do to break my heart is ignore me and act like I don't exist. Second you talk to me like nothing is going between us your all nice and cool. Then when i think something is about to happen between us and that I might have a chance with you, you crush my heart into a million little peices that can't be put back together. I hate you for that, but I still like you.......well I thought I liked you. "You know why cause you broke my heart so I'm gone for you, because you broke my heart.

Sk8er girl · 03-24-2005, 01:54 AM

Glad you liked it

I wrote this one about the same time I wrote "Drowning

"Right one"

Once upon a time there was this guy and this girl. The girl told him she liked him, he thought it was one big joke. Now it looks like he wants to tell her something,but he doesn't. She thinks she has a chance, but it looks like the guy likes her "supposedly friend" and her friend like hims back. So she watches as they flirt and go out. She doesn't say anything she rather see her friend happpy then miserable. So she weeps inside and she gets depressed everytime she see's them. She keeps a smile on her face like a happy trooper but really she's crushed inside like when you squish a cracker, until the day she finds her prince.

Leeness · 03-25-2005, 09:49 AM

your poems are great Zee the first one was phenominal, i mean it was lengthy it told a story it had the same line ending (which i love) and it was still a poem. Keep up the good work.

Sk8er girl · 03-26-2005, 02:08 AM

I'm glad you guys like it, and most of these poems I write when I'm sort of sad or ahving a bad day or something. This poem I wrote at school I write most of my stuff at school. Well this one is sort of like how I feel when I'm at school since people portray me as some "goth/punk" girl.

"Lonely"

I feel so lonely, like a lost kid that you can't find. It seems like no one understands me, like if I'm alone with no help. Like I'm on a deserted Island, I write S.O.S but no one responds I send out messages no one responds. My soul feels so empty I feel like crying. I hear people talking about me I don't care and I walk off, but really deep inside I just wanna scream and say "SHUT UP!" Everyday feels like I'm some experiment and people are looking at me judging me, when they don't even know me. My friends act as if I'm stupid and weird, sometimes I just wish I could walk away from everything sort of like "Walk away (maybe) from Good Charlotte. If only people could take time to get to know me they'd find out I'm a really a nice person and I'm not some "goth chick" or some "punk loser" Thats how lonely I feel.

Hope you guys like that one it doesn't really make sense to me, but oh well lol

Leeness · 03-26-2005, 09:29 AM

i love that poem, the amazing factor about that poem is you can read it and you read it as short sentences butyou havent put the full stop, this is good cause it means people understand your poems more, keep up the good work.

Sk8er girl · 03-30-2005, 01:59 AM

These poems are some of my old stuff, this is the last one Im putting up of my old poems and then the rest of them from here on out are going to be some new ones I've written so yeah lol

"How I feel"

Have you ever felt alone? Like your trapped in the dark and you can't get out, you want to but you feel so unhappy that you just dewll in it. "Yeah, no, maybe? Well I do everyday. It feels like people don't understand you like your the only one who understands yourself, but somedays you feel like you don't even understand yourself. It's depressing I guess? But I hope someday these days I'm having will go away and I'll feel happier about myself and the loneliness I feel inside will go away aswell.

There ya go I don't really know why I wrote that, my friend's got all worried about that poem they started asking me things like "wow thats deep" or they said "Gawd do you really feel like that?" I really didn't know what to tell them but yeah....hope you guys enjoy! I'm working on somemore poems to put up

The Boogeyman · 03-30-2005, 06:52 AM

this stuff is really good. I like it, don't stop now.

Sk8er girl · 03-31-2005, 01:46 AM

I wont stop lol I'm just gonna post some of my new stuff thats all

Sk8er girl · 04-01-2005, 01:27 AM

I would post more but Im having writers block but I promise I'll have something either by tomorrow or on Monday

Leeness · 04-04-2005, 02:16 PM

lol its cool Zee just post more, great new update it sure is deep and i am positivemany people can relate to it.

Sk8er girl · 04-05-2005, 02:06 AM

To tell you guys the truth I don't really like this poem I wrote I feel like I could make it better but I just don't know how. But here it is:

"Tears"

People around me so sad and gloomy. For the tragedy that came and left. For the tears they cried and the prayers they said. The worry and pain they felt. I wish I could make everything better but I can't, I wish that I could wak away and come back when everything is better. But I think I dont have to walk away, because the tears and prayers have now payed off and everything is back to mormal, I guess...............?

There ya go tell me what you think I dont care if there's criticism

Angel8807 · 04-24-2005, 03:59 AM

Wow. you've add alot since I've last been here. They are are great. I agree with lee there are alot of people who can relate to what you are writing about. It helps people to better understand themsleves and know that they aren't alone.
-Angel

Sk8er girl · 04-25-2005, 02:56 AM

Glad you liked them I'll post more later on this week

Leeness · 05-04-2005, 08:57 AM

opps i totally forgot to check out poesm *hits head* anywayz your updates are awesome ZEE, more soon pleas

Sk8er girl · 06-05-2005, 04:53 AM

This one is sort of the beginning of a song I guess its more of a poem than a song

Title: for now its called

"Loving you"

When I first walked in I saw your face.
I sat down and I was so happy to be with you, you could see it my face although we where surrounded in a crowded room.