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05-02-2004, 03:57 AM
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| Billywig
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Yeah I like that.... would you meet me in Chicago this coming august? :flowersmile:
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05-02-2004, 04:01 AM
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| Snidget
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I meant the one here.Silly! :flowersmile:
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05-02-2004, 04:04 AM
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| Billywig
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Well I meant a real trip to Chicago, so we can meet each other
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05-02-2004, 04:10 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
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Umm....My dad would kill me,He's already paranoid.That would literally make him flip and I won't be able to talk to you anymore. :/
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05-02-2004, 04:14 AM
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| Billywig
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well he can go with you , is going to be like a family vacation, my parents are going as well.
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05-02-2004, 04:16 AM
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| Snidget
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But He probaly won't,cuz He will only go to South Dakota
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05-02-2004, 04:18 AM
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| Billywig
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:/
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05-02-2004, 04:21 AM
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| Snidget
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I know
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05-02-2004, 04:31 AM
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| Billywig
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I really would like to meet you . So badly
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05-02-2004, 04:35 AM
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| Snidget
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I can tell.LOL
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05-02-2004, 05:04 AM
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| Billywig
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Really? do you really mean it as well?
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05-02-2004, 05:53 PM
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| Snidget
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I can tell you want to meet me on the accoubt since we have never seen each other face to face and I would too like to meet you,but my dad is still paranoid about you.
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05-03-2004, 06:17 AM
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| Billywig
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Chris J. Theroux Graduated | why is he still paranoid about me..? lol
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05-05-2004, 06:32 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
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Ok I feel like writing a poem.LOL
I love you
Everytime I see you,
I feel at ease,
Like I finally found someone,
who looks at me,
talks to me,
and loves me for me.
I always long to hear your voice,
to feel you hand,
or your kiss,
but I see how you really are,
You are in love with another,
you do the same things,
that you do to me,
with her.
It makes me sad,
depressed,
and tormented.
Don't you see,
Don't you know,
That I love you,
That you are the only one I love.
Your girlfriend doesn't love you,
Like I do,
She will never be there for you,
Like I will,
She won't know what to say,
When you need words,
to make you feel better.
I will do all those things,
And so much more,
I will always be ther for you,
In your time of need.
I wish you could see it,
See how much I care,
How much you mean to me,
How much I love you.
Thsi is dedicated to a friend of mine.That person knows who he is.
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05-05-2004, 06:34 AM
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| Puffskein
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Your poetry's pretty good! Keep it up!
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05-05-2004, 06:42 AM
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| Hungarian Horntail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: November {Noe} Franze First Year | Brain Twin | MASTAH ASHURRII | Reisdent PokeNerd | Digifangirl Awwww..... that one's sad. I know how that feels. I like your poems. They remind me of my fanfics. LOL Darkness and stuff. |
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05-06-2004, 03:39 AM
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| Billywig
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Ashley, that's is so beautiful :flowersmile: Thank you baby. Now I understand your....... :wiltedrose: :rose:
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05-06-2004, 07:03 AM
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| Snidget
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Now yuo understand what cuz about 3 of them had to do with you,but I dare not say which ones.
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05-06-2004, 01:02 PM
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| Billywig
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Thank you so much Ash :flowersmile: I love all of your poems , every one is spacial to me. Thank you baby :rose: :rose: :rose:
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05-06-2004, 11:58 PM
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| Snidget
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Thank you Chris! :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:
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05-07-2004, 01:24 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Hmm.... I dunno.....
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MP Baby Ash :flowersmile:
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05-07-2004, 07:18 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: California
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Here's another poem.I think you may like this one Eric.LOL
In The Shadows
Everytime I'm alone,
I think of you,
I think of holding you,
Feeling you,
Loving you,
But it could never be.
It could never be that way,
I could never hold you,
Because You love someone else.
You're in love,
I know,
you don't have to keep telling me,
and rubbing it in my face,
because everytime you do,
I feel more,
And more worst.
I start to feel horrible,
depressed,
and my only way,
I can get away,
is to write.
I write of my feelings,
but you will never understand them,
You don't care,
You don't love me,
and you probaly never will,
but if you know at least how I feel about you,
You would know.
You would know how I feel,
How I love you,
How I care about you,
How I wait until you realize that,
How I would give you the world,
and risk it all.
One day you will realize that,
And I'll wait near by,
To comfort you,
and be there for you,
to love you,
but now I wait in the Shadows.
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05-07-2004, 07:21 AM
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| Puffskein
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I'm speechless. Okay not nearly speechless enough to stop myself from saying...WOW! I totally related to that poem.
Okay, one question, did you mean me or is there some other Eric out there?
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05-07-2004, 07:31 AM
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| Snidget
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I meant you!I wrote it for you.I know what goes on with you,cuz I go through it too,Except its with a boy I know.Plus it seems you need someone to say it like I did.
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05-07-2004, 07:43 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hehe...Thanks, Ashley. I needed that poem.
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