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05-02-2005, 01:51 AM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | Angel's Poems List of Contained Poems (in order, 54 total) Happiness There's a Monster Under my Bed Shooting Star I'm Just Like You I Am I Trusted You, Called You Friend The Dog Ode to Amaris Ode to My Great Defender Life I Want... Super Mod Sorry Scorpio Love? School My Ode to Jello My Not So Secret Secret ( 2 poems) Lety There's Something On the Roof The Tree My Box, My World Gothic? Love Of My Life Nail Polish Ishy Ish Ish The End Thanks Hufflepuff Harry Slytherin She Dear Ex-Professor Snape Now Listen Real Close Thoughts Can He Do It Again? Do you... I'm Not... Perfection Take Me Away I Bite My tongue Why Do You Drink? Hero or a Zero Dear Journal Snow Fall Happy Holidays Words You're Talking, But I'm Past Listening Invisible All Because of Your Words The Girl and The Boy Just a Kid Children of the Land Happiness If I could see happiness, It would look like young animals playing with each other. If I could hear happiness, It would sound like children laughing in the school yard. If I could smell happiness, It would have the bouquet of blooming lilacs during spring. If I could taste happiness, It would taste like a deep rich chocolate, milky and smooth. If I could touch happiness, It would feel like a purring cat lying in your arms, undisturbed, calm and serene.
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff
Last edited by Angel8807; 01-01-2006 at 09:58 PM.
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05-05-2005, 08:53 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | This poem is one of my first ones that I wrote. hope you like! There’s a Monster under My Bed There’s a monster under my bed, and it snores really loud. There’s a monster under my bed, that tells me all it’s secrets. There’s a monster under my bed, and he needs to take a bath. There’s a monster under my bed, and he’s blue with green and purple polka-dots. There’s a monster under my bed, and who cries at night, for she’s scared of the dark. There’s a monsters under my bed, and they’re all my friends.
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff
Last edited by Angel8807; 12-08-2005 at 08:23 PM.
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05-06-2005, 07:36 AM
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| Granian
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Elijah Wilde Graduated | Farmer Carter | | Ama's Secret
woo hoo you got your own poetry thread! go you girl! i love the second one, the last sentence just makes the whole poem rock! its so mysterious as well. Excellent job! post more soon
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05-06-2005, 09:03 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
Ok i know iwouldnt spam, But i have too tell you they are so good! LOl, I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR MORE!! oh and this will be the last time i post, Keep going!!
Tina
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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05-10-2005, 08:54 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | Thanks lee and tina for reading. Tina you can post as many times as you want, I was just telling people not to spam so people weren't posting stupid things. But anyways... here is another one of my peoms. It just happened to pop into my head one day. Shooting Star You are my shooting star My one and only star I will love you always Because you were my first star My very first shooting star
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff |
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05-11-2005, 09:54 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Mexico
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OOO-HOOO!!
I love the second one, it's great really. Keep going! i also very much like the last sentence in the first one
Oh, and you cant stop me from saying stupid stuff it goes against my nature, lol, jk.
GO ANGEL!!!!
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05-13-2005, 05:12 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
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aaww.. those are cute poems!!
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05-13-2005, 09:19 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | Thanks soo very much everyone. lol lety I know you are just full of a bunch of silliness. *wink* Hey laieesha, my fellow huffie! welcome to my poems. I’m Just like You Why have you put me on such a pedestal? I’m no better than you. I’m no less than you. We are the same, you and me. Why do you all despise me, but when you need me for homework why am the only one? You don’t talk to me like a friend. You talk to me like I’m your slave; I’m only there to help you with your home work. You make me feel like I’m only on this world to make sure you get your homework done. Why can’t you see what you are doing to me? I feel like I’m walking on egg shells when I’m around you. It seems no matter what I say it’s not the right thing. You are taking advantage of my compassion. I only help you all because I don’t want to be the one that causes you to fall. This is strange because you don’t have a problem with watching me fall. Why don’t you notice how you treat me, how you treat others? You treat me like I’m so smart, like I know everything, well… guess what… I DON’T! You treat me like being smart is a disease that you should stay away From me because it could be catching. To bad smartness wasn’t. Why do you act the way you do? You act like you are better than everyone, like everyone should be grateful that you even talk to them. You walk around like you are the one on the pedestal. You make everything seem happy and sane, but it isn’t. “Maybe I’m just not good enough for you and maybe I just don’t wanna be like you” - You Don’t Mean Anything, Simple Plan This is also one of my older free verse poems. I hope you like it. The last part is a quote from simple plan that seemed to fit what I was feeling when I wrote it. Enjoy!
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff
Last edited by Angel8807; 12-08-2005 at 08:25 PM.
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05-13-2005, 09:43 PM
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| Dwarf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia "Mia" Adair Slytherin Sixth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Leigh Upstead Hufflepuff Fifth Year x11
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*stares at that poem in awe*
wow... that is....beautiful... i have nothing more to say than that cause that pretty much says everything.
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05-14-2005, 12:07 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Mexico
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Whoa!!
Girl, you.... are just very good taking your feelings out, wich is very much amazing cause i CAN'T, lol.
Seriously that's a nice one, you should write songs then I could go barkin... singin i mean (im a nice singer). Keep going !!!!!! *throws roses* (or any flowers you like, and if you dont like roses then i'll throw cookies or bricks or anything, *yells: everybody duck!!*)
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05-16-2005, 09:22 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | lol thanks lety. Roses are fine with me, I prefer yellow though. Thank you all for reading. If you want lety we could work on trying to write a song together. I would find it quite fun. Here is my next poem. I hope you all enjoy. I Am I am talented and trustworthy. I wonder why tall towers still stand. I hear tap dancing turtles. I see tiny pickup trucks. I want to stand on top of a tall steeple. I am talented and trustworthy. I pretend to tickle the tops of my toes. I feel hands tightening around my torso. I touch tan colored tigers that have no strips. I worry about too many people talking about me. I cry about true stories and tiny toddlers dying. I am talented and trustworthy. I understand tons of people tell tall tales. I say not all things are true. I dream of tiny toys trying to trap me. I try to take in the world that is around me. I hope to travel to tons of different towns.
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff |
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05-16-2005, 10:01 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | Angels Amazing Poems! ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
[SIZE=3]Angel!! This are good, They so cool and they're getting better per post!
OMG, THESE are so friggin good! LOl, I used to be able to write down my feelings, but now just simply can't. Man.. this reminds me..I might try and write...doubt they'll be any good or even close to yours!
These are good, So, i guess there's more to Angel8807 than what meets the eye? Wait i ahve a question. Do you write while your experiencing it? Or do you jus twrite whenever and whatever? Or maybe you get ideas for poems? Sorry, but this sorta thing really interests me!
Well, i can't wait for more.. I hope they'll be posted soon. But no rush.. I CAN WAIT.. After all.. the best ones take time!
Tina[/SIZE]
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ ..........
Last edited by X-Girl; 05-16-2005 at 10:02 PM.
Reason: Sorry!
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05-16-2005, 10:22 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | Quote:
Originally Posted by XoxXtinaxox09 [SIZE=3]Angel!! This are good, They so cool and they're getting better per post!
OMG, THESE are so friggin good! LOl, I used to be able to write down my feelings, but now just simply can't. Man.. this reminds me..I might try and write...doubt they'll be any good or even close to yours!
These are good, So, i guess there's more to Angel8807 than what meets the eye? Wait i ahve a question. Do you write while your experiencing it? Or do you jus twrite whenever and whatever? Or maybe you get ideas for poems? Sorry, but this sorta thing really interests me!
Well, i can't wait for more.. I hope they'll be posted soon. But no rush.. I CAN WAIT.. After all.. the best ones take time!
Tina[/SIZE] Ok tina. Here are some answers for your questions. 1. There is alot more to people than what meets the eye. Strange enough people here know me better than those that I actually see. 2. I normally write after experiencing things. My poems are a collection of many events piled into one. 3. I do normally write when ever I feel like it. Things pop into my head and I have to hurry to write them all down. 4. I get most of my ideas from my experiences, music, and from watching other people. If anyone else has questions I'd be willing to answer almost anything, but with limits. I plan to post again by next week. -Angel
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff
Last edited by Angel8807; 09-19-2005 at 02:52 AM.
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05-17-2005, 07:07 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Mexico
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OMG and just when I thought I couldn't open my eyes wider in surprise, they pop outta my orbs!*bends to get her eyeballs* followin on Tina's words your stuff keeps gettin better and better, readin the answers you gave I can tell you'd be a great physcologist, how can someone I dont know be so familiar and mysterious at the time? I guess Im nuts....yeap, that must be it. Things pop into my head and I have to hurry to write them all down.
LOL, that sounds a lot like me! but I dont write I draw or paint.
We could go and try to write a song, we'll have a word later about it, meanwhile let us see a little further inside your thoughts, ok? We'll wait for the next poem as much as we have to.
*goes get a cheerleader costume* GOOOO ANGEEEL!!!!
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05-17-2005, 07:17 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Mexico
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Oh, ohhh! I have a question!! *puts hand up*
¿how old are you? just jokin' , jusstt jokin'
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05-18-2005, 10:42 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | well, ... I had more time then I thought so I'll post another poem. Lety, dear, please don't spam more thread please. Take the poke as a warning. Here is the next poem it's pretty self explanitory so I hope you enjoy. I trusted you, called you friend Through all the good times we had. You hurt me, chose others over me. We thought we’d be friends until the end. Through all the good times we had You took advantage of my compassion. We thought we’d be friends until the end, But now we are straying from each other. You took advantage of my compassion. I thought that I could always count on you, But now we are straying from each other. I would give anything for another day with you. I thought that I could always count on you. I trusted you, called you friend. I would give anything for another day with you, But you hurt me, chose others over me.
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05-18-2005, 10:56 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Alcatraz
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Aaww... I feel you on that poem. Sounds like most of my poems, all about hurt and disappointments and all those good stuff.. lol but yeah...I like that one...
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05-20-2005, 12:44 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Mexico
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I am sorry, very sorry...oh so sooorrry!! about spamin' but hey! I've gotten myself a warning *jumps punchin the air*.
This is an understandable one, the poem i mean, it's good now i can feel you.
Keep going.
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05-21-2005, 03:50 AM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | hey I just found this one today. It's rather small so I thought that I'd post it. I hope you enjoy. The Dog Oh, what a dog! He jumped over the bog! He's so cool! He swims in the pool! I thought that it was still cute, and yes it's one of my very first poems. lol
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff
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05-31-2005, 09:17 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | Ode To Amaris (a.k.a. My Twin) I see you here and I see you there. I guess I'm starting to see you every where. I see you in the Great Hall, but not at the mall. I'm going to The Lake, so don't pick me up at eight. I don't think this really an ode, but I say it is, so there. I just made it up this minute. So I don't think it was that bad, besides I was laughing so hard when I was composing I just had to add it here. I hope you all enjoy!
__________________ Luke <3 Angel Pupness loves Angel mooore.Katie Minnson- Third Year - Hufflepuff |
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06-01-2005, 08:38 PM
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| Fire Slug
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LOL, nice one. Amaris is your Twin??? that means you're not ageless *thinks*...weird...
I love the rymes(sp?) in this one.
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06-03-2005, 06:29 PM
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| Antipodean Opaleye
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Minnson | Ode to My Great Defender (a.k.a Luke) I will never forget the night we met We found a common interst and started to chat Through the coming weeks we pledged our devotion You became my best friend my great defender They didn't understand us and jumped to conclusions We didn't always get along but we stuck together Our relationship was odd, but it wasn't full of elusions You became my best friend my great defender I have started a new thing with my poems. I'm dedicating them to people. It's kinda going to become a guessing game for my fellow chatters. Hope you all still enjoy reading my poems, and don't be afraid to post your comments if you have any. Umm... Lety guess what? I knighted Ama with Agelessness a couple nights ago. So you aren't confused any more.
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06-05-2005, 09:48 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Mexico
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Oh what a thing! Ama is now ageless and im supossed to not get confused anymore??? lol
Oh well, just, just keep the poems coming cause i like them very much, and i think its a nice idea about the guessin thing.
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06-13-2005, 10:01 PM
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| Tag Love Porlock
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sitting on the beach
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Wow really great job your a good poet i sure hope you can post even more soon
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06-15-2005, 01:53 PM
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| Kappa
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: @ ShruckleNoofer<3
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ
Omg..Angel I feel so bad... I havent checked this out in like in a really long time!!!!
OMG...THIS IS SO KEWL ANGEL! Ur awesome, and I can't wait to go back and re-read these!
LOL, these are like my favorites on SS. Then.. comes Laiesha's. Oh and Si's are good too! Um.. Well can't wait for more!!!
Love always,
Tina
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |
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