hey, it's my first serious poem.
inspired by Radiohead's OK computer whole album (This first one, i mean).


THE AUTHORITY

They
Murmur Monotonously
Giving out
orders

I register
I process
I follow

They see me register
They see me process
They see me follow
They sigh in relief

When I squeak
They oil me

When I think
They thrust in a pacifier

When I nod
They sigh in relief

This is really different from all the other poems on here. In a good way. It's very unique, in a good way.

Thanx! im typing up a new one n ill post it up in no time at all!

Whoops, sorry, but there;s a change of mood over here...!!!
I just found my two piece of papers full with...well.. er.. stuff...
like.. er.. stanzas.. yeah..!!
Anyway i wrote this long and winding stuff in one night in January
and lost it.. but, obviously now i found it back..
so this isnt much about my 'Android' thingie, but an old re discovered poem of mine...
i'll return to Android later

Anyway this got out of me head when i was listening to Duran Duran's
old track called Ordinary World..
i was listening to it for days n each time i listened to it i feel
strange n all.. i wont tell how coz i cant explain meself!
it has nothing to do with the lyrics, no.
but the music..
The chord progression n all...

so something came out which is called .......

THE FREEZER

A white Room
Full of shreds of flesh
Tiles on the wall
Are hostile white

The lights are blue like
The star Sirius

See the bulb sway
Back and forth
Like a pendulum
By a stiff wire

Fish tanks
Fitted in the walls
Amidst the hostile whites
That are stained
With fish blood

anyway, why dont u try interpret this poem. I'd like to know what u think i was thinking about when i wrote this...

there's, of course, a continuation to this, as i have two pages of it over here.

Here's where the Freezer continues...
Like i said before this...
dont forget to interpret after u read through...
2

There’s a door
Grey
Seasoned and marred
With fish blood
in
Hand print shapes
Seasoned and marred
And old and yet
Captivating

Go through it
Light bulb still swaying behind
As I turned back
Shadows under my eyes
Sway too
Make my head spin
Turn to what lies ahead

Another room
Humongous and too dark
Mist on the floor
No
smoke of desertedness
No body

Fat pipes run
Along the room in
One direction
Fat pipes that leaked steam
Gasp, thus I gasp

3

Another chamber it seems
A line of counters
Lit with blue light
Like the sun Sirius

All around it
Mere darkness
All around me
Mere darkness
Fact I am in darkness
Not the counter
No

Line of counters
Stained with fish blood
Another gasp
As
A knife laid
One solitary knife

A trail of blood
Flowing
From the knife
To the edge of the
surface
Frozen fish blood
Reek’s unbearable

I'm sorry somebody killed your fish..lol. Just kidding. It's very good, creative, you didn't use the same words over and over like myself and others, (who shall remain nameless.) But I like the the term of the swaying light light bulb is what stuck out to me the most for some apparent reason. I liked them.

Cool! I really like the way u comment my stuff..
it helps!

did u say u hav a poem?
i think i might have read yours...
whts the title?

Here's a poem. I felt this up when i was listening to
Supergrass' songs. Well, no, actually everytime AFTER listening to their songs. When all the fun of hearing fades This is back to Android

SIGH TO THE GROUND

Descend,
Feel the wind,
Whipping in your
Tresses,

Better
Savour it now,
Before land comes,
They're going soon,

No more
Drums ka-ching,
Guitar ka-rang,
Bass ka-boom,

Better
Savour it now,
Before you touch
The earth,

It's a
goodbye,
Back to
reality,
Like a morning after
All the fun last night,

Back into the arms
Of the Authority
Ready to be oiled,
Again

I must descend
The sighs
Dont do
No help.
The tiny tears
Dont do
No help.

My heart aches
so badly,
It wouldnt feel
Again,
Once i
Touched
The earth

Back to reality
Back to the Authority.


Heheheh.... so... this one speaks for itself, i guess..
wht was i feeling?

I really like this new one. The ending is the best part as the ending of a poem is the most important part. Well to me it is. Good job! Oh my poems are in my signature. Reality of poetry. My poems aren't half as good as your though.

Thanx! U new to this poetry stuff, too?

Hehehe... here's another one. It's part of Android..
They're getting loose...
It's supposed to have a happier tone...
Androids getting loose...

IGNORE THE ORDERS

Go let the flies
Swarm our lunch,
Let them lay
Their eggs in there,

We're going to
Have our fun,
We wouldn't need
Our lunch,

Go hit the notes
On the piano,
Don't worry
About bad songs,

very good very disgusting. It's awesome! Yeah I am pretty new to it.....

Here's a poem i wrote after reading through my old diaries;
when i was 14 or somthing...
This one would summarize my view on boys at that time of my life..
Hehehehe...

I'M A GIRL

Boys,
None interest me,
This isn't funny
At all,

I might end up,
And I shiver
At the thought,
With someone
Too old,

Because,
I simply wouldn't,
Waste my Time,
Waiting,
Waiting,
For Him,
For Him--Them,

Or worse,
End up with,
No one at all,
How cold,
Life could be!


Well, guess what i end up with?
The latter.. ahahahha... i guess it could be better that way..
oh sigh!

lol. Ok, that one was creative. I like your poetry, I haven't been able to write anything like yours.

haha, cool!
I might turn them into songs by next month or somthing!

I saw ur poems (dunno if its the old thread)
and its really dark and emotion driven.. thats really good!

Here are two poems!
One in Android and the second one i wrote last night!

UNIFORMS

Can you tell the difference?
Between each of us
in this room,
Besides our sex?

We are the exact same,
Not just the uniform,
Our heads are too,
SO can you tell the difference?

Can you tell who's smiling?
The ones who really are?
The ones who you'd force them into?
Or do you not care?

Do you like it when we nod?
When we digest,
Without chewing?
When we accept,
Without thought?

Do you think,
This very second,
Your plan's working?
Do you not see one of us,
Rising against you?
The Authority....



Ahahahaha... that's a really rude poem, but 'the Authority' deserves it...
But here's the second one!


BUBBLES

Hey!
Roll the window
down!
Mind driving slow?

I've got,
Bubbles to blow,
OUT through the,
WINDOW,

See if I can make,
someone out there--
SMILE!

lol the bubbles poem is a funny good one. Made me laugh. In a good way. Theuniforms reminds me of something, like people being forced to be something their not. But that's my view upon it. I'm not sure if thats what you were getting at or if it's close to my veiw. Their good. Keep it up.

YEah, u had a shrewd idea...
It was supposed to be a scene in class..
How robotic people are in place, in classes..
learning by books and all..
im definitely against it...!

Here's one about me playing in the rain
last Monday! It's obvious that i'd been a bit bored at home....


SOAKED THROUGH

When I look up,
Drops fall into my face,
It felt like the movies,

Drops fall,
Showing spectacular perspective,
I'd learned that in art class once,

As I jumped,
Splashes of the sky juice flung up,
The ground is muddy and sodden,
But I don't mind,

Hear the faint thunder,
Amidst the grey sky,
Like kettle drums played,
In my school band,

The neighboors,
They just grinned,
Shaking their heads at me,
But all the same entertained,

My T-shirt,
My T-shirt stretched,
Under the heavy rain drops,
I'm soaked through,

It's freezing cold,
But that's the whole point of it now!
Feel the shiver,
Like Scotland when I was there for,
A good, good, good, holiday,
I've longed for this to happen!
Feel the cold!

I love it when poetry is turned into past expeirences. That's what I do. Very detailed. It's awesome.

Hey... Here's a poem..


THEIR FEET (ARE MORE INTERESTING)

Blinking,
I stare at their,
Feet,
Pressed firmly to,
The carpet,
Or floor,

Laughing cheerfully,
They exchange,
Which are the best,
Places to eat,
Where to find,
The best sushi,

Imagine,
All the things,
They would talk about,
Given the whole day,
To themselves,

I shudder at the picture



Who dya think 'they' are?

Lol.. this one is an excerpt from my diary a few years back...
I had no idea who this one was meant for, coz i forgot,
plus i never wrote to whom i wrote it for..
A really naive one.. Not to mention short too!

BEING INVISIBLE

You're so adorable,
You're so huggable,
There's only one thing to say,
Please look my way!

Hullow,.. just adding stuff.. I'm really bored...


COINS, FABRICS AND MEANINGS

Hidden behind their faces,
Are coins and fabrics,
They hide them,
In Vain,

Meanings behind their words,
Were discernible,
They hid them,
In Vain,

Nevertheless,
I sigh in pain,
Sandwiched,
Between their car,
And time,
And a long way,
From home,

Meanings, Coin and Fabric,
I ignored and looked out the window,
As tar and signboards flash by.