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12-12-2003, 07:43 PM
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| | Dugbog
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Hey Chica! I at least have an excuse for not posting more writing! What's yours?????????lol hee hee hee...How have ya been? Give us more, we need more! The crowd chants:
WE NEED MORE!
WE NEED MORE! :sorcerer: :adminchase:
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12-17-2003, 02:23 AM
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12-17-2003, 09:07 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by Alyonna@Dec 16 2003, 08:03 PM
oh wow i havent been on in awhile! so many projects fro school! gah! well here's one for you -
Since when do you care to
Understand me? The real me?
For so long you weren't there
For so long you didn't care
Only now You coem to me
Caring about me like I cared about you
Another day will pass and still i will not care
Today is the day I have learned that
Eternity goes on without you
did i already put this one up? It's okay, I haven't been online in awhile either...in fact, I've been in the hospital. But I'm sorta ok now. Anywho.... I absolutely love this poem! I especially love the part where you said that you realized eternity can go on without that person. That was classic! I love it, I love it, I LOVE it!!!!! Give us more! :sorcerer: :wub: :flowersmile:
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01-31-2004, 03:52 AM
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01-31-2004, 03:55 AM
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01-31-2004, 03:57 AM
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01-31-2004, 03:59 AM
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01-31-2004, 08:51 PM
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Those are awesome! Wordy, but awesome! Keep'm comin!
WHo's Tina?? :sorcerer: :flowersmile: :wub:
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02-06-2004, 11:42 PM
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02-08-2004, 06:13 AM
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One word: WOW! These poems are so increblible, its like I am almost feeling what you write! But one of my favorites would have to be ur first one, it just really touched me! lol. (tear) The way you write these poems just are amazing! You can tell the was alot of deep thought placed in ur pieces and feelings, which really makes it amazing and unique! keep it up!
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02-08-2004, 06:25 AM
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The lullaby poem hurts.
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02-08-2004, 02:54 PM
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I like Alonnya's poems a lot. You did very well, my friend! 
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02-10-2004, 10:50 PM
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02-17-2004, 12:18 AM
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LLLLOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ya my girl!!!
SRY to much sisterly love there!
I LUFF u!
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02-17-2004, 01:37 AM
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02-27-2004, 02:31 AM
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some of your poems are really exceptional. I just found your topic today and a part of one poem you posted a while ago really haunted me...it went like this:
"And so it began
Every night, she'd sit in bed
Crying, weeping for him
Until she could cry no more
That's when she'd take the knife
Out from under the pillow
And carve his name
Onto her legs - over and over
She'd watch the blood
Trickle down her legs
And stain the already
Blood-red sheets
And then she'd tuck into bed
Crying, weeping for him
And every night, she whispered his name
Into the darkness, hoping he'd hear...
"Draco, Draco, Draco..." '
You have written some poems more poetic than that but that was one that made me cry..I don't think I've ever cried over a poem before..
Anyway good work! if you want to read some of mine they are in my protfolio called "Muses"
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02-27-2004, 03:17 PM
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Hmmmm...thoughtfulness, thoughtfulness-ah yes! Alonnya's poems! :flowersmile:
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03-13-2004, 02:36 AM
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03-15-2004, 03:00 AM
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ahhhhhhhhhh Alyonna! When you first reviewed my poems i didn't realize you were the author to the first poem to make me cry!! And it remains the only one that's ever made me cry. Wow, your poems are good. I too, want to get mine published, and i hope both our dreams come true! great job n keep writing!
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03-15-2004, 09:21 PM
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Your poems are really fantastic!
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03-16-2004, 01:15 AM
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03-17-2004, 01:03 AM
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03-20-2004, 12:28 AM
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its great!!! yes, alignment doesnt seem to work on here... =/
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03-23-2004, 01:49 AM
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#74 (permalink)
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Well, im done posting my poetry here, ive lost all trust. Admins, could you please leave this up for the time being, and then maybe delete it later. thanx.
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03-26-2004, 10:57 PM
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*gasp* no way!! Alyonna you have to keep posting, please?? You can't just give up your talent! | |
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