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08-19-2003, 05:01 PM
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| | Imp
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Well now that youre here, i guess i should begin by stating this, maybe you remember it, i had it up after one of my poems:
"And that's it. please dont take this or any of my poetry for your own - especially my songs (like this one). I have worked hard on them and I don't like when people use my poetry without my consent. I am sorry for nto stating this before."
Well, someone has abused the fact that i put my poetry up here, and submitted one of MY poems, somewhat edited into the school literary magazine, Bourbon Red, not realizing that i was on the staff. as of now, my poetry will no longer be here for you to see. whoever this person is, i intend to have an apology PMed to me. And just so you know, it wont be in there anyway, Ms. Perry ripped it up. i'm sorry to those who enjoyed my poetry and were kind to it, but i dont trust all the people here anymore. well thats that.
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08-19-2003, 05:02 PM
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Its so buetiful......................Bravo!
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08-19-2003, 05:26 PM
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| | Fwooper
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Qui jordon i agree so true good
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08-19-2003, 06:34 PM
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08-19-2003, 07:37 PM
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| | Gnome
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Whoa, the first one was...graphic, but good! The second one has some pleasing sound devices, but I don't really understand its meaning.
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08-19-2003, 08:37 PM
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Well what am I supposed to say!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! (PS- Post the one Dan made into a song.....remember it!? It's great!)
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08-20-2003, 07:17 PM
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08-20-2003, 07:37 PM
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Wow, that last one was really good. I'm serious, I have a tear in my eye from that one. Not that many poems can do that. Please, keep writing!
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08-21-2003, 02:36 AM
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| | Fwooper
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08-26-2003, 06:53 PM
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08-29-2003, 11:49 AM
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HEY EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JUST WANNA SAY ALYONNA'S MY GIRL, SHE'S THE BEST EVER!!!!!!!!
AND CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-29-2003, 11:55 AM
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I agree!!!!! Your poems are good!!!!! :up: :up:
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08-29-2003, 11:55 AM
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Oh my god, that is one of the most powerful things I've ever read. I really, really liked that. I'm not just saying it because i can't be bothered... I really really like that. I want to write some of my poetry on here but nobody bothers reading it. I like that so much
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09-02-2003, 10:03 PM
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09-03-2003, 08:53 PM
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09-03-2003, 10:26 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by Alyonna@Sep 3 2003, 03:53 PM
Hey I found my poetry, so I'll post another poem today. And I also have a D/G poem that I'm working on right now, I'll post it soon!
Every Night
Every night, I retire
To a world of my own
A world that I own
A world in which
Everything is calm
And peaceful
The way I want it to be -
Warm and sheltering
The wind softly blows
Upon the tall grasses
Of my lonely meadow
I can hear the winds
As they speak to me
Every night, I dream
Of a world of my own
A world that I own
Every so often
I get so lonely
I wish for you to be there
And every so often
You answer my call
The wind softly blows
Upon the tall grasses
Of my lonely meadow
I can hear the winds
As they speak to me
Every night, I live
In a world of my own
A world that I own
And every morning
I come back somehow different
Somehow changed
Like a flower in the winds
Of my lonely meadow
And that's it. please dont take this or any of my poetry for your own - especially my songs (like this one). I have worked hard on them and I don't like when people use my poetry without my consent. I am sorry for nto stating this before.
Enjoy! really really good!
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09-08-2003, 07:25 PM
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09-08-2003, 08:30 PM
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09-09-2003, 09:47 PM
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Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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09-13-2003, 06:46 PM
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10-11-2003, 12:22 AM
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11-12-2003, 11:06 PM
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11-15-2003, 09:45 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by Alyonna@Nov 12 2003, 05:06 PM
yay! someone likes!!!!!! yay yay yay!!!! sorry getting carried away - heres another one:
So we find ourselves here
Under a dark canopy of
Night sky above us
Little can we say of
Important things in the
Great part of man
How is that we do not know what
These things are? Mysterious, interesting & VERY good! Keep it up chica! :sorcerer:
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