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| | Honeydukes Register (Finished Fanfiction) Here you will find all the completed works of fanfiction and poetry belonging to our talented SnitchSeeker authors. | 
02-10-2010, 10:29 PM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: The Dog Park
Posts: 6,390
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Casper Duluth III
Fourth Year |  A Blue Fire and a Holy Sin - Sa13+ Whoop!Phyre || ❤LiliAnzaScarNatAmyEmi || Professional Vigilante || The Flying Tomato
Hello, guys. This is BluePhyre here. And, if you're wondering about the name, I figured two things: First, gotta keep it high up on the alphabet. Second, it's named for my School and Ministry characters. Sapphyre - her name is the blue stone, her nickname Phyre, as is mine, or, phoneticaly, Fire - and Aveira - Aveira means sin, she's trying to erase that meaning and make herself better and whatnot.. Better explained in my fanfic. Eh, anyway, here's the first poem, which I belted out randomly. I hope you enjoy.  I'll put up the next one when I get replies. 
Deathly Three
The Cloak, the Wand, and the Stone
Three Deathly items they be
Most possess none
Or at most, only one
But the beholder of three
Never will he be
Because then Death will be done.
The Cloak, to hide
The Stone, to seek
The Wand, to kill all those who peak
Only one can possess all three
And with scar on head, that he be
Too noble to carry each item through time
And so, witht the Death of two
One Hallow remains
All that is lost
Now can never be gained
Weep, some will
But only them will be still
For or noble has won us the world
Last edited by demented_death_eater; 12-24-2010 at 07:51 PM.
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02-13-2010, 04:29 AM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year |  The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
Great poem. Welcome to the poetry forum, be sure to read the rules and announcements and HAVE FUN!!!
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02-13-2010, 02:11 PM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: The Dog Park
Posts: 6,390
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Casper Duluth III
Fourth Year | Whoop!Phyre || ❤LiliAnzaScarNatAmyEmi || Professional Vigilante || The Flying Tomato
Thank you! And here's the next one. I wrote it a while ago as a song for my band. And now, I've tweaked it to be a poem, also.
Devil's Snare
A mystery, a history,
The tale of my life
Haunting, creeping
Lying, sleeping,
In the pit
The pit of your heart
Ashamed, flamed
Shrunk back from the light
Waiting, baiting
Lying, crying
Slowly breaking
Slowly breaking my way free
'Cause I’m your Devil’s Snare, Devil’s Snare
Deadly fun, I sulk in your sun
For I’m the dark in your heart
The scar on your head
I tear you apart
With the life that I’ve shed
You hate me, you fear me
You dread to be near me
I hurt you, you hurt me
It’s a fight
A fight that must end
Trapped, scrapped
We’re both the same
Discarded, unwanted
We’re always the odd ones
The odd ones out
I’m your Devil’s Snare, your Devil’s Snare
Deadly fun, I sulk in your sun
For I’m the dark in your heart
The scar on your head
I tear you apart
With the life that I’ve shed
What are we doing?
What are we doing here?
Why are we fighting?
Why are we fighting this war?
‘Cause I’m your Devil’s Snare, your Devil’s Snare
Deadly fun, I’ll always sulk in your sun
For I’m the dark in your heart
The scar on your head
I tear you apart
I tear you apart…
I’m your Devil’s Snare, your Devil’s Snare
Deadly fun, I’m sulking in your sun
For I’m the dark in your heart
The scar on your head
I tear you apart
With the life that I’ve shed
I’ll tear you apart
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02-13-2010, 06:22 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15,697
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sebastian Price
First Year | The Harpy of Hogwarts | Dungeon Mistress | Bimba di Serpeverde
I likes it!!!
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02-13-2010, 08:46 PM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Westeros [EST]
Posts: 6,444
| caffeine princess ♬ lunchbox adventurer ❀ little rose
Person!!!!!!!!!  yay now I'm not like, crazy!  | |
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02-13-2010, 08:50 PM
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|   SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated  x12
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Beautiful poetry. I shall review more properly, later. For now, let me just say that your poems are pretty well-written. Great job!
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08-27-2010, 07:20 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Canada
Posts: 795
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Parmis
Fifth Year | carrot lover (not) // torturously friendly // secret spy // HP nerd // <3 sparkles // who am I?
Phyre I'm a fan of your poetry. You're a very talented writer. Keep up the amazing work!  | |
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02-18-2011, 08:10 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Underwater (:
Posts: 6,570
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Charles Fitzgerald
Fifth Year | Heart keeper ♥ l Rawrrr ll domestïc equïne ll cherryy''
Phyyyre!  I love your poetry! Pretty!
I especially like the first poem, "Deathly Three", it's very intriguing! Keep it up!
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