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09-14-2007, 10:18 PM
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#276 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lilly Young
Second Year |  Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Is sad its coming to an end. But I wil so read your next one. Hope Ginnys okay.
*goes back in tent*
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09-22-2007, 02:05 PM
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#277 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *luffs THe MMN!* / s
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Jacqueline (Jackie) Sampson
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 Thanks for comments So sorry I haven't posted this week, I've been sooo busy it's unbelievable but anyway, here's next post! Harry had finally managed to fall into a disturbed sleep, for the first time in weeks. But about 5 minutes later he was shook awake by Professor McGonagall.
“Get up quickly Potter, the Headmaster needs to see you.”
Harry sprung out or bed and pulled on pair of jeans and a T-shirt. Ron was already awake and waiting for him.
Once in Dumbledore’s office, Harry saw a fair few Order members standing around the desk looking impatient.
“Ah Harry please have a seat quickly. The Order has discovered a possible Death Eater hide out, more than likely where Miss Weasley is being kept. The Order disagrees with me, but I wish you to go with them to rescue Miss Weasley. I fear, do forgive me, that if we make you stay behind you’re likely to do something… stupid…” Said Dumbledore and Harry smirked to himself.
“You’re really going to let me go with them?”
“Yes Harry, Dumbledore and I think it is appropriate.” Replied Lupin. “Now let us go quickly!”
The Order and Harry filed out of Dumbledore’s office and out of the grounds. They stood outside the gates and Dumbledore picked up an old newspaper.
“Portus!” The newspaper glowed temporarily. All the Order members started discussing where to go, so Harry had time to think.
What if they ended up in a battle? Would they all assume Harry needed gallons of protection? He would have to use non-verbal spells of course, or he wouldn’t have a chance. But he’d only just got the hang of non-verbal spells… Suddenly he noticed everyone had his or her hand on the portkey, so he did the same.
His stomach lurched as the world spun around him, he felt strangely sick. But then it stopped and he began to fall backwards. Lupin caught him and he felt his cheeks burn, it was embarrassing falling over around all these professionals who hadn’t even twitched through the journey. Lupin smiled encouragingly and Harry trooped off after the Order.
They approached an old Cathedral and sneaked in through a side-door. But the entrance wasn’t quite as sneaky as they intended.
They were in a large stone room, on a balcony. They heard voices below them.
“We have to find somewhere better hidden! They’re going to find us here!” Said a male voice.
“Don’t be stupid, this place is in the middle of nowhere! They’ll never find us…”
Replied a rough female voice.
“I wouldn’t be so sure about that!” Yelled Dumbledore smiling. The Death Eaters looked up at the Order on the balcony and immediately began shooting spells directly at them.
Hell had instantly broken out and Harry ran straight into the middle with the Order. Seeing the Death Eaters had lit up a fire inside him and all his fear evaporated. Harry was instantly locked in battle with a brown haired wizard who looked a lot like Crabbe.
“Oh! Potty come to save his ladyfriend has he? Oh how precious…” Said Crabbe and he shot spell directly at Harry. Harry thought “Protego!” as hard as he could and the spell backfired instantly, sending Crabbe flying backwards. He looked shocked and retaliated. Harry dodged the spell, spun around and thought “Stupefy!”
A jet of red sparks shot out of his wand and hit Crabbe square in the chest, he smashed into the pillar behind him and fell to the ground.
“Not bad!” Yelled Kingsley, looking impressed. But something else had caught Harry’s eye. Bellatrix Lestrange was running towards a tunnel of stairs going down into the dungeon, she was holding someone with long red hair…
Harry skid down the stairs and towards the tunnel, running past all the Death Eaters and the Order. He ignored the shouts of
“Harry! Come back!” as he charged down the tunnel after Bellatrix Lestrange and Ginny.
Halfway down the stairs he stopped as he heard voices further down. On his right was another balcony and he peered over the edge. Bellatrix Lestrange was nowhere to be seen, but there was Ginny. She was tied to a pillar being guarded by two large and burly Death Eaters. Her eyes were closed and she wasn’t moving, but he could just go charging down there… those Death eaters were big…
Harry rose his wand and tried to decide which guard to stun first, he might be able to deal with one, but not both of them. Naturally the idea to get help never crossed his mind. He was about to cast a spell at one of the guards when his heart stopped. An icy hand had gripped him roughly by the shoulder. *dun dun dun*  I'd just like to say, that my next FF will hopefully be much much better than this one. For one, I wrote this about 2 years ago now when I was a ickle year 8 at school I'm now in my second GCSE year and my strongest subject is now english, so hopefully my writing skills have improved considerably! I'm hoping my next FF is a little more organised, less messy, gramatically correct and with a more detailed plot without any holes in it  I've become more adventuraours with my writing so I'll be using BIG words *gasp* and I'll be using structure and language techniques to increase the effect of my writing! In short, it's going to be much better and hopefully more enjoyable to read!
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09-24-2007, 05:22 AM
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#278 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lilly Young
Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
Great chapter. Evil cliffy again. Goese in tent and waits for more.
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09-24-2007, 05:54 PM
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#279 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D
Posts: 5,309
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Laylee Lynn Russell
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YAY!!! So amazing!!
Me loved it!!
Im excited to read your new ff!!!!
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10-03-2007, 03:14 PM
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#280 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *luffs THe MMN!* / s
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Jacqueline (Jackie) Sampson
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Thanks guys Here's the next post, sorry it's late...
Chapter 23: Furry Little Problem…
Harry was whipped around but was surprised to see not a Death Eater, but Remus Lupin looking directly into his eyes. But something was wrong… He was different somehow. His skin was pale, his breath was heavy, his eyes were a sickly yellow… Harry peered out the window high up on the wall, and saw a ghostly full moon glaring back at him.
Lupin collapsed on the floor and began yelling, as his body changed right in front of Harry. Ginny’s guards ran upstairs, but when they arrived on the balcony they stood stock-still. Lupin stood up and saw the Death Eaters. He pounced right on top of them and Harry ran. He could here screams behind him, but he had to warn the others and get help…
Harry ran all the way up the stairs and straight back into the battle. He saw Dumbledore on the balcony looking for something, probably him. Harry zoomed up to the balcony and stood in front of Dumbledore, lost for words.
“Harry! What is it? What’s happened?” Asked Dumbledore urgently.
“We’ve got a furry little problem Sir.” Said Harry and Dumbledore’s face changed to panic. At that very moment, Lupin the werewolf bounded up the stairs and charged at the nearest Death Eater, making everyone scatter and run around wildly. The Order was trying to stop what they knew was Lupin, by firing stunner after stunner at him. But he was moving so fast no one could hit him! It was then that Harry remembered.
“Ginny’s down there…” he muttered and threw himself down the stairs towards the dungeon entrance. Dumbledore was running after him with surprising agility for so old a man.
Harry ran straight past the balcony in the dungeon, not wanting to see what the werewolf had left behind. When he reached the bottom of the stairs he stopped dead. Ginny was still tied to the pillar, with no sign of life at all. Harry heard three people approach behind him; he turned and saw Dumbledore with Mr and Mrs Weasley.
Dumbledore walked up to Ginny and touched her face. She woke with a start, breathing heavily.
“Wha… I… Where am I?” She said, looking confused. “Harry? What are you-“ But she couldn’t finish her sentence, as Dumbledore had untied her and she’s collapsed on the ground. Harry caught with a worried expression.
“Ginny how do you feel?” He asked.
“Ok… but I don’t think I can walk… they put this weird weakening spell on me…”
“That’s ok I’ll carry you…”
Harry picked her up and saw Mrs Weasley smiling at him. Dumbledore headed up the stairs and they followed.
“Harry I want you to get Ginny out as soon as possible, there’s an exit near the top of these stairs that leads outside.” Said Dumbledore and he sped upstairs to rejoin the fight.
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10-03-2007, 04:24 PM
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#281 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Will they get out????
Ahhh!
Great post!!
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10-03-2007, 08:01 PM
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#282 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lilly Young
Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
*Comes out of tent to read*
Great post. So hope they make it out okay. Evil Evil CLiffe. Loved it thoug. So can't wait for more.
*Goese Back In Tent and Waits*
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10-12-2007, 10:14 PM
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#283 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *luffs THe MMN!* / s
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Jacqueline (Jackie) Sampson
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Thanks guys Here's next post:
When Harry got to the top of the stairs he saw the exit Dumbledore was talking about. Lupin was still charging around attacking anything that moved, but the Order were managing to keep him under control. The Death eaters were all being chased by Lupin much to everyone’s amusement. Harry headed towards the exit with Ginny in his arms and tried to find a way out.
Suddenly, all the Death Eaters turned around a faced Lupin head on. They fired stunners simultaneously and ever so slowly, the werewolf collapsed. The fight broke out once again. But Bellatrix Lestrange had seen Harry run towards the exit with Ginny. She went after them cackling maniacally.
Harry found himself in a large room, full of heavy wooden crates. He stood there, panting, looking for the exit. Ginny was now over his shoulder, weak and powerless. Just as Harry saw an open window, the door burst open and Bellatrix Lestrange walked in smirking.
"Oh dear, ickle baby Potter's trapped... what shall we do..." She said, with a distinct air of madness in her voice. All the beauty that was once there had gone, she didn't seem human...
Harry looked around desperately thinking of a way to get out alive.
"I know, I shall torture your little friend first, followed by you. Doesn't that sound fun! Now... shall we get star-"
"REDUCTO!" Harry bellowed and the pile or crates by the door collapsed right on top of screaming Bellatrix.
Silence.
Harry didn't know if she was dead, he didn't care. He began climbing the remaining crates to get to the window.
Looking out, he saw it was just above the ground. He jumped out and saw he was outside of the Cathedral front door. Not so far away he could see the rock Dumbledore had charmed to be a portkey, ready for their quick escape. He ran to it and waited.
Two seconds later the front gate burst open and the Order came out, followed by the Death Eaters. Several of the males were carrying Lupin, but most of the Death Eaters were injured and struggling to keep up even those carrying Lupin. Upon seeing Harry with Ginny, the Order eagerly increased their speed and zoomed towards the rock. Harry already had Ginny’s hand and his own on the portkey; he was just waiting for the others to grab hold.
The Order finally approached with the Death eaters far behind, but before they could grab the portkey, Lupin fell to the ground. It as early morning and he was transforming back. Lupin couldn’t use a portkey while he was changing, no one had ever done so before and no one knew what would happen! The Death eaters came closer and closer as the Order waited, panicking. Hexes were soaring past their heads now, but Lupin was still half a werewolf.
Suddenly, Lupin stopped wailing, and sat bolt upright. He was human again. Dumbledore grabbed his hand and the portkey worked, just as a hex came flying at Dumbledore’s head.
Mere seconds later, the entire Order, Harry and Ginny landed in a huge heap in the Great Hall. Many gasps were heard as the students watched in awe. The journey back had almost knocked Ginny out, as she lay weakly on the floor. Harry noticed a large bump on the side of her head. They must have knocked her out before… Dumbledore scooped up Ginny and headed for the Hospital Wing. Harry was about to follow when Ron and Hermione ran up to him, demanding to know what happened. He told them it would have to wait and he followed Dumbledore and Ginny.
Just one more posty left! I'm writing my next FF and hopefully will have it done by about next Spring
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10-13-2007, 05:24 PM
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#284 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D
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Ahhhhh!! Only one more post!!!
Im freakin' out!
*freaks out*
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10-15-2007, 03:23 AM
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#285 (permalink)
| | Murtlap
Join Date: May 2007 Location: Waiting on Breaking Dawn
Posts: 69
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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WHAT?? That's great!! I can't wait to read it. I'm sooooooooooo sad that this FF is almost over *wails loudly* Oh well life must go on I guess *sniffs dramatically* But it's so hard. Better now.*smiles* Can't wait to see how the story ends. Its been Soooo great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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10-15-2007, 10:54 AM
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#286 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: On earth
Posts: 135
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aeon Weasley
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NEW READER!!!!
WOW that was a great FF
and i arrived before the last post 
well anyway hope u post very very very soon
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10-16-2007, 09:25 PM
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#287 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lilly Young
Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
great post. is sad the last one is coming. can't wait for more
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10-17-2007, 03:55 AM
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#288 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lilly Young
Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
please delete compeuter had a glitch in it.
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Last edited by Little Trooper; 10-17-2007 at 03:56 AM.
Reason: sorry for double posting
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10-18-2007, 06:48 PM
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#289 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *luffs THe MMN!* / s
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Jacqueline (Jackie) Sampson
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ok guys, last post Thanks to everyone who's read this FF, I really appreciate every single comment   I'll post the lyrics to the song this FF is named after soon after this post aswell...
Chapter 24: Aftermath… Again…
Ginny was administered with a strengthening Potion and she would hopefully be released in a few days time. Harry stayed with her and watched her sleep the whole time, wishing that beautiful face would smile at him again. He stayed with her until Madam Pomfrey insisted he needed some fresh air, forcing him outside.
Harry sat by the lake with Ron and Hermione, staring at the Hospital Wing’s windows. He wished Ginny would suddenly parachute out the window to see him, but strangely enough it didn’t happen. They sat in silence for about an hour. But just as they were about to go to dinner, a rather happy red haired girl jumped on top of Harry and thought it appropriate to kiss him senseless. Ron laughed and pulled Ginny off him to give her a hug. But she soon let go and went back to Harry.
“Thankyou for saving me…” She muttered.
“Well… I didn’t really it was mostly Dumbl-“ Replied Harry, naturally modest.
“You’re not supposed to tell me that part you idiot.” She smilled and hit him playfully. The trio and Ginny got up happily and were about to go to dinner again when Harry remembered something.
“Ginny, I believe this is yours…” He handed her the ring he’d given her for Christmas. She put it on gratefully, smiling. But then Harry remembered something else.
The prophecy… He still hadn’t told a soul, he’d been too occupied this year…
“Guys…” he said “c’mere…” Ginny, Ron and Hermione approached him quizzically.
“There’s something I have to tell you…”
The Very Cheesy End!
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10-18-2007, 07:39 PM
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#290 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
Posts: 10,764
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lilly Young
Second Year | Keeper of Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity
is sad its the end. it was so good. loved how it ended
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10-19-2007, 10:07 AM
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#291 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *luffs THe MMN!* / s
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Jacqueline (Jackie) Sampson
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Thanks again  Here are the song lyrics by Kate Rusby: You Belong To Me See the pyramids along the Nile
See the sunrise from a tropic isle
Just remember darling, all the while
You belong to me
See the market place in old Algiers
Send me photographs and souvenirs
Just remember when a dream appears
You belong to me
I'll be so alone without you
Maybe you'll be lonesome too
Fly the ocean in a silver plane
see the jungle when it's wet with rain
Just remember till you're home again
You belong to me
I'll be so alone without you
Maybe you'll be lonesome too
See the pyramids along the Nile
See the sunrise from a tropic isle
Just remember darling, all the while
You belong to me
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Last edited by Madfish; 10-19-2007 at 10:08 AM.
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10-19-2007, 01:25 PM
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#292 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: On earth
Posts: 135
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aeon Weasley
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awww man no more from "you belong to me"
that was a great FF, man.
loved it sooo much wish it would never end
but i guess if has to end sometime
well tell us if u have any other FFs in SS please
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