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06-30-2010, 11:30 PM
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#426 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 *Too lazy to quote* Bwaha. xD Quote:
Yeah i like the idea, adds more drama! Fun drama! It's so cute how they both soo totally love each other! Andd would go to any length's to be with each other, well something like that!
Yes. But Draco/ Ginny still wins, hands down. Quote:
YAY! i really wanna read more! I do I do! *jumps up and down*
*hugglesss*
I'll try to update, REALLY soon. <33 |
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06-30-2010, 11:35 PM
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#427 (permalink)
| Hinkypunk
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| Lady Lem|DJ Melfoy|Braedeus ♥ Stumble|Bebé Melón|B2|Andee & Melsse|Melephone Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie YAY!
*dances around in ze Tee!Rain* xD You're welcome.
xD Quote: What ish dramatic, Melellellll? Quote:
Ze Muriel: How dare you compare me to that mad, one-eyed man? *shakes awesome fist* How dare you NOT appreciate these awesome Team Muriel tees? Quote: Muriel is not amused. That woman is too hard to please. -shakes head-
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07-01-2010, 05:02 PM
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#428 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by princess of*hp* You're welcome. OOH! I like the cooool smiley!
I hadn't known that it existed, on SS. xD What does this picture mean, babeh?
=p Quote:
How dare you NOT appreciate these awesome Team Muriel tees?
Muriel: You have... Muriel tees? *interested* Quote:
That woman is too hard to please. -shakes head-
She is. xD
I'm FINALLY writing more of this story.
I feel happy. =D |
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07-02-2010, 01:06 AM
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#429 (permalink)
| Hinkypunk
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie OOH! I like the cooool smiley!
I hadn't known that it existed, on SS. xD OOHH, there a plenty more. Like & .
My personal favorite is .
xD Quote: What does this picture mean, babeh?
=p It meant that I quit being your English teacher. Quote: Muriel: You have... Muriel tees? *interested* -dangles one- You likey? Quote: She is. xD
I'm FINALLY writing more of this story.
I feel happy. =D YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! |
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07-02-2010, 03:37 PM
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#430 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by princess of*hp* OOHH, there a plenty more. Like & .
My personal favorite is . LOL. I never knew. =p Quote:
It meant that I quit being your English teacher. O_O What is an English teacher Melellelll, what eez iiit? Quote:
-dangles one- You likey? Muriel: What is the meaning of this? Unhand that glorious tee at once! Quote:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
Unfortunately, my house flooded and I can't update because my desktop is temporarily out-of-order, and that's where I hash this stowee.
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07-02-2010, 08:39 PM
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#431 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Bwaha. xD Oh scary! LOL! Quote: Yes. But Draco/ Ginny still wins, hands down. No. Harry/Ginny win best! Quote: I'll try to update, REALLY soon. <33 Oh YAY! I will be looking forward to it!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
Beware. |
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07-02-2010, 09:15 PM
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#432 (permalink)
| Hinkypunk
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie O_O What is an English teacher Melellelll, what eez iiit?
xD Quote: Muriel: What is the meaning of this? Unhand that glorious tee at once! NEVER!
Here... what about some Muriel cookies? Quote: Unfortunately, my house flooded and I can't update because my desktop is temporarily out-of-order, and that's where I hash this stowee.
=[ We'll bear with you.
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07-03-2010, 05:15 AM
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#433 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 No. Harry/Ginny win best! Draco/ Ginny. =p Quote:
Oh YAY! I will be looking forward to it!
Like I told Melellell, I can't update right now. =[ My computer is [hopefully only temporarily] out-of-order. =[ Quote:
Originally Posted by princess of*hp* Quote:
NEVER!
Here... what about some Muriel cookies?
Muriel: You expect me to eat... Muriel cookies? *unsure* Wait a second! UNHAND THAT TEE! *back to evil mode* Quote: We'll bear with you.
*hugs*
Me wanted to update. =[ |
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07-03-2010, 12:45 PM
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#434 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
*again too lazy to quote*
Harry/Ginny
And its's alright! i can wait
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
Beware. |
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07-04-2010, 04:33 AM
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#435 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 *again too lazy to quote* Quote:
Harry/Ginny
And its's alright! i can wait
Draco/ Ginny. AND the ships in this ficcie.
I feel restless because I can't update!
*sits in a corner* =[ |
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07-04-2010, 04:59 AM
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#436 (permalink)
| Hinkypunk
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-camps out until Maxie's technology gets better- |
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07-04-2010, 05:14 AM
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#437 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by princess of*hp* -camps out until Maxie's technology gets better- *feels loved*
I’ll post as soon as my desktop is working again.
Melellell want Draco-flavoured cookies, while she waits? <3
*HUG* <3 |
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07-04-2010, 05:21 AM
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#438 (permalink)
| Hinkypunk
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YES! Thank you, love. They'll inspire me to write some more tonight. |
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07-04-2010, 05:24 AM
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#439 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by princess of*hp* YES! Thank you, love. They'll inspire me to write some more tonight. *gives you a batch of cookies* <3
Go Melelelll!
-cheers thouuuu on- I think I'll try to fix the desktop, myself. Why do I want to update so much?
O_O |
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07-04-2010, 05:24 AM
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#440 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 You updated!
And you're on a new page! Congrats!
Love,
~~Jay~~
__________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life |
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07-04-2010, 05:26 AM
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#441 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Jessica You updated! Hope you enjoy, sweetie. <3 Quote: And you're on a new page! Congrats! The story eez. xD |
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07-04-2010, 05:39 AM
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#442 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes; I love the start of this poem! It clicks every time I read it. Lovely pick. I see you left out the second stanza. Quote:
Ginny gathered her dress, its pink sea of silken foam cascading to her dyed high heels in beautiful, rippling waves
Two things here. One, I love how you put life into the description and two, how you give us a glimpse of how the life she is now leading is different from her true. Dyed high heels. It shows how important it had suddenly become 'to match.' G'job!! Quote:
Outside, the sky rolled by in thick, rolls of blue. The houses rose against the skyline like expensive toys, magnificent but flawless - devastatingly plastic - in each detail.
Good bit here. I like how you show that the flawlessness is in itself a flaw. Ginny comes from a family where you kick out gnomes, cook, get dirty every once in a while. There is no perfection but the little flaws make life more real. 'Devastatingly plastic'........... aptly put. Quote:
She pushed aside a curtain and almost peeked out, before she realized – thankfully, in time – that that, too, was a most unladylike act, and that if anyone saw her do so, Aunt Muriel would think of it what Fred and George thought of Percy singing in the shower.
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Lights burned from the windows of the mansion, but they were dimmed by the wave of illumination that curled into twists in the confines of the vast, beautifully-kept gardens: it seemed that others had already arrived, and their presence made her shift slightly uncomfortably, for they were clearly men and women of high repute, none of whom seemed to have landed here by a stroke of luck – and, of course, the persistence of a mother who was a little plump, loved her children dearly, and had once thrown a shoe at a gnome and ended up thwacking her husband on the head, instead.
To begin with beautiful description at the start. I love the way you have with words! To end (my comment on this portion!) with, love your description of Molly. It sums her right up. She's a mother and a dear little lady but she does carry a fire. Remember Bellatrix? Quote:
The moment that carriage reached back to the mansion, she was dead.
Dead. Deader than Merlin's fat pink cat had been, when the Merlin in Ron's self-invented, baby-time story had realized that it had chewed through Merlin's favourite set of underpants.
DEADER than Fred and George had been, when they had sneaked into Great Aunt Muriel's temporary bedroom at the Burrow in the middle of the night and realized, just when they had been about to sneak back out after replacing the Great Aunt's solemn, brown slippers with fuzzy, neon blue bunny ones that could make any amount of immature, rude faces, that Aunt Muriel was standing in the doorway.
I love how you slip humour into this chapter. Ron's self-invented Merlin! Fred and George......... heeeheeheee. GOOD work! Quote:
Glad for the refuge, she came to a silent stand beneath it and, from a distance, any onlooker would have been breathless, had they looked at her, right then -- for the moonlight washed down on her, filtered into quiet silver by the splendid canopy of moonlit leaves overhead, and it brought out the glow of her dress, the brown of her eyes, the precise yet gentle cut of her face -- danced across the red of her hair in a way that made one unable to look for her faults - which there definitely were, though the scene then had little, if any, place for them -- in a way that made one want to touch her to see if she was real, or a doll or a dream.
Breathtaking description! I love how you show that she does have flaws but that the picture is altogether so pretty that it is impossible for one to dawdle on them. I hate Mary-Sues and I'm glad to see you say that Ginny does have little flaws appearance-wise. I also love the way that despite that declaration you've given us a perfect picture of how lovely she must look. Quote:
It was the moment Lord Rostov saw her.
Bless my heart! The man is a goner!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
__________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life
Last edited by Jessica; 07-04-2010 at 05:45 AM.
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07-04-2010, 05:51 AM
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#443 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] I did.
Because she doesn't have raven hair.
:] Quote:
Good bit here. I like how you show that the flawlessness is in itself a flaw. Ginny comes from a family where you kick out gnomes, cook, get dirty every once in a while. There is no perfection but the little flaws make life more real. 'Devastatingly plastic'........... aptly put.
That was the aim. Plastic is a metaphor of 'flaw,' for me. But then, how I use it also depends upon the situation. Quote:
To begin with beautiful description at the start. I love the way you have with words! To end (my comment on this portion!) with, love your description of Molly. It sums her right up. She's a mother and a dear little lady but she does carry a fire. Remember Bellatrix? LOLOLOL! Bellatrix. Even though she's actually one of the characters that I like. Still. *poketh her* xD Quote:
Breathtaking description! I love how you show that she does have flaws but that the picture is altogether so pretty that it is impossible for one to dawdle on them. I hate Mary-Sues and I'm glad to see you say that Ginny does have little flaws appearance-wise. I also love the way that despite that declaration you've given us a perfect picture of how lovely she must look.
I don't take well to Mary Sue-ism, either. That said, I would say Mary Sues CAN exist in real life, and can be brilliantly used in literature, too [and not just for the sake of humour, or making a point.] It basically depends upon the writer, how or he or she works with the character. You can write a Mary Sue or Gary Stu, and still make them sound human. Quote:
Bless my heart! The man is a goner!!
In what sense? =p |
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07-04-2010, 02:09 PM
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#444 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie I did.
Because she doesn't have raven hair.
:] I guessed as much. =] =] Quote: That was the aim. Plastic is a metaphor of 'flaw,' for me. But then, how I use it also depends upon the situation. Yes I've known you use it for perfection. Flawed perfection though. Quote: You can write a Mary Sue or Gary Stu, and still make them sound human. Most people can't handle them though. In the SMITTEN sense! XD XD XD
Lovely chapter! Now MOOOOREEEEEE!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
__________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life |
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07-04-2010, 02:12 PM
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#445 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
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Originally Posted by Jessica Yes, but the fact that plastic has certain qualities allows it to be a metaphor for perfect perfection, too. The un-flawed kind, I mean. :] Quote:
In the SMITTEN sense! XD XD XD
Hehe. It might be so. Thank you, and I'll try to update, as soon as possible.
*clings* |
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07-04-2010, 02:14 PM
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#446 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
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| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
Hehe. It might be so.
Might? I think Lord Rostov is definitely smitten! For now at least. Can't say how it will shape up. He may be an evil character for all we know. Quote:
Thank you, and I'll try to update, as soon as possible.
I'll be waiting!
Love,
~~Jay~~
__________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life |
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07-04-2010, 02:17 PM
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#447 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
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Originally Posted by Jessica Might? I think Lord Rostov is definitely smitten! For now at least. Can't say how it will shape up. He may be an evil character for all we know. Well, it could go a lot of ways from here. It could be love, or a very temporary sort of attraction or, in fact, none. He only saw her, I never said he fell for her. Hehehe. *evil* xD
... and yes. We still have to see what kind of person he is. Since I've fixed ze desktop [thank GOD!], I'll update today, or tomorrow. Hopefully, I can today. <3 |
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07-04-2010, 02:19 PM
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#448 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 None? Now that's a possibility I didn't consider!!
Why so shifty?
He isn't evil in actual is he? :O :O :O
Post todayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
__________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life |
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07-04-2010, 02:20 PM
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#449 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Jessica Why so shifty?
He isn't evil in actual is he? One can never tell.
xD Quote:
Post todayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!
O_________________O
I can try. LOL. xD |
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07-04-2010, 03:43 PM
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#450 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
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good atlast i caught up...nice nice...to read your post after so long...Lord Rustov...nice name...waiting for more...Maxie... |
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