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11-30-2009, 01:37 AM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321 Mooncalf
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| Time Heals - Sa13+ JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick Hey everyone! Thalia here. Just another story I wrote dedicated to the lovely ship of Draco and Astoria. I saw that they didn't have one so I felt like I should post this one. It's a one-shot so no further chapters will be coming. Let me know what you think.
Disclaimer - All the characters are owned by the lovely J.K. Rowling. Time Heals The blizzard brewing outside was getting worse, as Draco Malfoy trudged through the snow, to get to his flat in muggle London. After the war ended, he had left home almost immediately. He couldn't bear to live in a house where so much pain had been inflicted others. Not to mention Voldemort himself had stepped foot in it. Draco hated that house. Horrible memories flooded him there.
New Year's Eve was approaching tonight. As he trudged, he saw parties in full swing in peoples' home's. He sighed. No one spoke or approached him if they could help it. Why in the world would someone speak to a former Death Eater?
Christmas had been lonely. This whole holiday had been lonely. No one accepted him. He was an outcast. His Father was in Azkaban. He was sure his time would come in court to join his Father.
The storm was getting stronger. He was the only one outside. Wind was starting to pick up, making snow blow in his face. The lamp light flickered on the sidewalk he was walking on.
Suddenly Draco ran into something.
"I am---," he started, bending down to help the person he ran into. It was a woman.
"So sorry," she finished, grabbing his hand and pulling herself up. "Thank you sir," she brushed herself off.
"What are you doing out this late?" he asked her.
"Trying to get to a party actually."
"Well I think a blizzard is coming. Why don't you come back to my flat with me? I have a spare room. I really wouldn't want you to be caught out here when the storm hits."
"I'll take you up on that offer sir," she replied.
He took her hand and led her back to his flat. It was only a block away. She kept one hand on the hat she wore. Draco held the bag she was carrying.
Once they had reached the inside of his flat, he set her bag on his table and went to light the fire. Draco did it by hand, just in case she was a muggle. He looked over at her. She seemed familiar somehow.
"I'm Draco by the way. Draco Malfoy," he spoke, crouched over lighting the fire.
"I'm Astoria Greengrass, Draco," she replied.
Draco flinched. That's how he knew her. They had been best friends when they were younger. Then in his seventh year they had gotten into a huge fight which ended it. He hadn't seen her in five years. She had grown up more then he last remembered. She looked more like a women. She still had the same silky long brown hair. Her blue eyes met his cold gray ones. He turned.
"How long has it been Draco?" she asked, removing her cloak and hat.
"Five years," he replied.
Awkward silence hung around them. Sure maybe he hadn't seen her in a while, but she was still the same beautiful girl he had once known.
Draco took a seat on the couch facing the fire. He hung his head thinking. When he looked back up, he saw Astoria gazing at him. She quickly turned. Pink crept to her cheeks. *Flashback*
"Astoria," Draco called, coming in step beside her. "What's up? We haven't talked in ages."
Astoria turned to face him. Her face bore scratches and cuts, along with several bruises.
"What happened to you?" he asked, his face confused.
"The Carrows. I've been talking back to them in classes. You know the punishment. You've seen Neville Longbottom, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, along with others," she replied.
"Why?"
"Why what? That I've been talking back? Let's see, because the Ministry is now in control by Voldemort and it sucks," she said angrily.
"I see," he said nodding.
"No you don't!" she rounded on him. "You haven't received punishment once yet! You've been blind for years Draco. Remember third year when that Hippogriff attacked you? You barely got a scratch, and how long did you have that sling? Then we move to fifth year when you got chosen for that Inquisitorial Squad, by that evil cockroach. You used your power to dock kids for doing absolutely nothing. Then you got angry with Potter for landing your father in Azkaban. To tell you the truth Malfoy, he deserved it!" her hands flew up in the air as she threw her words at him. "We reach sixth year, and you almost kill Dumbledore! Draco your a complete git!"
"Astoria, he was going to kill me and my family!" Draco yelled.
"Who cares?! I would've died! You should've realized Voldemort was getting back at your family. Sometimes I don't even know why I stayed friends with you!" she yelled.
"Just because your family isn't apart of the Death Eaters doesn't mean you can blame everything on me!"
"I am blaming it on you! Everything! I don't want to be friends with you you prick!" Astoria screamed.
Draco felt like he had just been slapped in the face.
"Fine Astoria. If that's the way you feel. I would rather not be friends with a blood traitor like you," his voice became low.
"Fine!" and with that she stormed off.
*End of Flashback*
Draco stood up. "Is there anything I can get you?"
"Tea would be fine thanks," came an almost instant response.
Draco returned five minutes later with two cups. He handed one to her.
"Thank you," she took a sip of it.
He took a seat opposite of her.
Astoria set down the tea cup and finally said, "I want to apologize Draco. I wasn't fair all of those years ago. Maybe I was just trying to act brave. I was only fifteen. Things were out of hand." She stared at the tea cup, shifting it.
"I should apologize too. My life and decision making wasn't the best back then as you've seen and guessed," he spoke.
Silence hung around the room. Only the crackling of the fire could be heard.
"I haven't stop thinking about you," Astoria stated. "Guess it was just my luck to run into you. Things haven't been the same in a while. I would've felt guilty knowing that I never apologized. As you can tell I've grown up," she reached a hand out, and placed it on Draco's. "And so have you."
"I missed you," he cleared his throat. "A lot." He stood up and ran his hands through his white blond hair. These emotions he was feeling were unbearable. He was in love with her. What if they got together? Would things crash and burn like the last time?
"You're a man Draco," Astoria said. "A lonely one might I add. Who thinks things aren't going work out. It takes time for things to heal. They do eventually."
He looked at her. She read him so well. Draco sighed and sat back down on the couch. He hung his head again, trying to sort out feelings and emotions. He felt a hand on his back. He looked up to see Astoria.
"Your also the only man I could ever love and be happy with. I forgive and forget your past Drake. You need a friend. You need a lover. You need me," she whispered.
Draco smiled first the first time in a long time. The two of them sat on that couch and spoke of what happened during the time they were apart. Feelings and thoughts were shared.
The clock struck midnight. Draco's arm was around Astoria.
"Happy New Year Tori," Draco said. Then he kissed her gently. It was the first time in a long time he felt there was a meaning to his life. He was sure things would heal in time. Again only a one-shot. Until next time. :] Thalia |
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11-30-2009, 02:26 AM
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| Shrake
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ EPILOGUE!!!!
Please?!?
I can't believe it was only a one-shot!!!
It was amazing Thalia!
Aww Draco and Astoria are so cute together.
I loved the plot as well.
New Years is especially romantic. xD
Jess(:
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11-30-2009, 03:49 AM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321 Mooncalf
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick Thank you Jess! Maybe I will do an epilogue. Guess I'll just wait to see what other people think. I love Draco and Astoria too!
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11-30-2009, 01:04 PM
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| Mooncalf
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hey Thalia exactly...i share my sentiments with Jess,this should have been a longer fiction...but i so would want to read an epilogue for this one...i have never thought of Draco/Astoria shipper much,but you make me think about it and i guess i am liking their shipper!
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11-30-2009, 08:47 PM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321 Mooncalf
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick Quote:
Originally Posted by harita hey Thalia exactly...i share my sentiments with Jess,this should have been a longer fiction...but i so would want to read an epilogue for this one...i have never thought of Draco/Astoria shipper much,but you make me think about it and i guess i am liking their shipper! Thanks, if the idea of an epilogue hits within the next month I'll post. I'm glad you may like the ship!!! |
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12-01-2009, 03:54 AM
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| Ramora
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| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco I was so looking forward to the next chapter (I kinda skipped the being part where you told everyone it was a one shot), and then I got to the end you say...
'Again only a one-shot. Until next time. :] Thalia '
I was like "WHAT?"
Jess is right, you need an epilogue |
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12-05-2009, 09:59 PM
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| Jarvey
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This was SO good!!!!! Aw, they're cute together haha
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12-26-2009, 01:21 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Wow Thalia, i didnt know you were such a brillient writer, man cant believ i hvent read this before!!
Ahhh it was brillient, and really romantic, im loving the new Draco
Awwww it was really cute also
You should sooo write more, and i just cant believe this is a one-shot!!
<3
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12-29-2009, 06:29 AM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321 Mooncalf
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick Thanks Evie. Thanks to you other reviewers too. I may have snapshots of Draco's life then after this. I had an idea... |
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12-29-2009, 04:05 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Your welcome Thalia
if you writting more soon....then i cant wait!!!
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12-30-2009, 07:12 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hey, Thalia, What a sweet story. Thank you for telling me about it, and I'm so glad I checked it out. It'd be alright with me if it was longer, you know, not a one shot. Or leave this the sweet one shot that it is and use it as a lead in to another story of Draco and Tori. Honestly, I don't remember an Astoria in HP. What book do we meet her? I'm off to, "Bring Your Kid To Work Day" I'll catch you later.
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12-30-2009, 02:11 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Astoria was never actually brought into the book by name, but in the last book we know Draco married someone. ^^
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12-31-2009, 05:27 AM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321 Mooncalf
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick
Evie's right. In the epilogue we hear about her. J.K. has a family tree created with her name on it. And, well, we never really know about her and her background so us readers get the chance to create our own thoughts to it. I'll start working on another chapter soon. I promise.
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01-14-2010, 09:11 PM
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| Snidget
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O! This is great! I love it, just perfect..
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01-14-2010, 09:12 PM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321 Mooncalf
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| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick
Ha ha, thank you very much!
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01-23-2010, 04:01 PM
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| Bugbear
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jackson Reagan Hufflepuff Fifth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Norah Reagan Slytherin First Year | Forever Hufflepuff | | Always.
I've never heard of... Astoria....but this was good.
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