What? All this happened when? It's almost over? Noooooo!!!! Don't post more. I don't want this to end.
Jessica

NOOOOOOOO! HALLIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Sirikins. That's like Eminem losing his daughter. That's so sad, I want to cry. PAMS!!!!
Amie

what the heck man? That's probably the most sadest chapter I've ever read, but I still love this story. Poor Vi and Hallie

*burts into tears* I can see now why you cried!! *sniffs* That is so dreadfully sad!!! *continues to cry* Oh, just think of the tears to come when this is over.. *sighs* I want to you to post the next part but I don't want you end the story!! *wanders away crying*

Hi everyone! I'm so incredibly sorry! I really didn't want to kill them, but I kind of had to, 'cause they weren't in J.K Rowling's books.

Anyhoo, technically for me anyways, tomorrow is in 2 hours...... and since I don't have school tomorrow, I'll be posting then.....urrggg the anticipation is killing me!

*madtackleglompstoall*

if tomorrow (for you, that is) is only two hours away, then you better get some sleep and rest your big creative brain

PAMS!!

Well... you didn't have to kill them off. That's what fan fics are for! Making up new characters... Or making the story you see it should go. Like some people think.. Harry and Parvati should be together... Or Ginny/Draco... Justs an opinion... Oh.. I just had to point out the parts I really liked

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Originally Posted by K-T

Dumbledore patted Lily on the head; his eyes were glassy as well. “My dearest Lily,” he said, lifting her chin. “I have dearly cared for each and every one of my students, but none so much as you.”

As Lily let go, Dumbledore shook James’s hand. “James Potter, thank you.”

“For what, sir?”

“For making my school so much more enjoyable,” Dumbledore replied with a twinkle in his eye.

“It was my pleasure sir,” James replied with a small chuckle.

Dumbledore turned to baby Harry last (Hannah and Hallie were in the playpen in the next room); Dumbledore rumpled his hair a bit before saying, “You…. you will be a great wizard someday.”

As Dumbledore took his leave, two tears strolled down his cheeks; for as much as he didn’t want to believe it, he knew that he would never see James or Lily Potter again.

Yeah.. That whole bit. Makes me.. er... happy? Or sad...? Something in between... Limboland!! Oh.. And I'm jealous you guys don't have school... *sighs* This story ends tomorrow.. And Charlie is going to die.. And marks are due Friday.. and I have a band test on thursday... Oh the tragedy!!! *sniffs* PAMS!!! Hey... If you finish this story, that means we get a sequel! Ok, so there's some good in you ending this off...

My big creative brain.....I'm not sure whether that is a compliment or an insult. Big Brain..... is that like saying I have a big head? Don't worry I'm just teasing you! And I'm going to sleep after I post..... I just can't sleep now, I'm too anxious. I'm counting down the minutes.....only 26 left to go.....I'm so strange

Limboland!?! It sounds like a fun place to be ! Who is Charlie, and why is he dying??? Sorry about all your tests. Yes, I have already submitted the sequel!!! It sould be up in a few days!

no, I'm not saying that you got a big head, I'm sayin' that you're a smart and creative because after reading this story, I don't see how you're not

To my readers:
It has been exactly 9 months since I began this fic; we have reached 18 pages, 43 chapters, and 435 posts! It’s been fun, hasn’t it? Now as promised, the final post to The Traitor

Chapter 43: The End

“James, darling, where’s your wand?” Lily asked.

James took it out from his back pocket, and handed it to Lily. “Why do you need it?” he asked.

“Well, I feel bad,” Lily said. “It’s Halloween and we don’t have any candy for the children.”

Lily waved the wand and conjured up a few small, hard candies. “Here,” she said, handing James the candy. “Go give these to Harry and Hannah.”

James smiled, kissed Lily, and walked out to the living room. He paused to watch the children momentarily. Hannah looked longingly at Harry’s small teddy bear, and when Harry realized she wanted to play with it, he handed the bear to his baby sister; and then Hannah let Harry play with her rattle in return.

James patted them each on the head, and when handed them the candy they giggled.

“James, I’m going to start dinner now,” Lily called from the kitchen. “Do you have any preferences?”

“I’ll just have some of the left over chicken, from last night, Lils,” James called back. “Do you need any help?”

“No,” Lily replied. “You can just watch the children, if you want. Oh I know,” Lily said. “Why don’t you read that book I got for you on house-cleaning potions?”

James smiled, and mumbled, “Oh yes, that should be quite a read!”

Lily smiled as well, and called, “I heard that!”

James sat down, reading the ‘fascinating’ book potions, when he heard the front door open. At that moment, he knew; he just knew what was going to happen.

James stood up, and grabbed his wand from the table. When he looked up, Voldemort was standing there, smirking in his face.

“Hello Potter,” Voldemort said, “You don’t look happy to see me. I’m dreadfully sorry for just dropping in; perhaps I should have called first.”

James did not reply; he simply stood there, glaring at Voldemort. “Well, aren’t you going to run, or hide?” he asked. When James did not reply, he said, “Fine, have it your way.”

With a simple wave of his wand, Voldemort flung James across the room; he landed on top of the coffee table, smashing it. His head was bleeding, and he couldn’t move, all he could feel was pain.

Voldemort walked over to the playpen; and James slowly started to stand. Voldemort took one look at Harry, and said, “You are the one who is supposed to bring about my demise? I don’t think so. Avada Kedavra!”

“NOOO!” James shouted.

Hannah had blinked and transported herself directly in front of Harry. James hit Voldemort with a spell, and propelled him into the next room. Tears began freely falling down James’s face as he looked down on his baby girl; he placed her on the couch and walked in the other room to battle Voldemort.

Lily, who had been upstairs at the time, came running down, shouting, “James I heard a crash! Is everything all right?”

Lily ran in, and saw her baby lying motionless on the floor, she began to weep hysterically. James could hear her, he wanted desperately to hold her, but he had to stay and fight.

James yelled. “Lily, take Harry and go! It’s him! Go! Run! I’ll hold him off-”

Lily grabbed the crying Harry and ran up the stairs. She ran into the nursery, locked the door, and set Harry down in his crib.

All of a sudden there was a loud bang, and a thud; Lily knew exactly what that meant. “Oh James!” she cried, silent tears running down her lightly freckled cheeks.

Harry started to wail. “Shush, Harry, shush,” Lily said. “Mummy’s here, it’s all going to be all right.”

Suddenly the door burst open, and there was a high pitched cackle of laughter.

Voldemort slowly advanced towards them; Lily knew she didn’t have a chance, especially without her wand.

“Not Harry!” she cried. “Not Harry! Please- I’ll do anything-”

“Stand aside!” Voldemort commanded. “Stand aside, you silly girl!”

An eerie green light shot from Voldemort’s wand, and everything went black.

Katie! I am really crying here..(from just one eye...strange)...*sniffs* Poor Hannah!

That ending may have given me a couple of tears, but I still think that this was one of the greatest stories I have ever read! I'm just so sad that this is actually over poor Hannah, Lily, James, Sirius, Remus...oh the heck with it, poor everybody!

Oh, poor Harry! Hannah and Hallie are gone, so he is all alone *tears* You did an awesome job, though Katie.

*bursts into tears* Nooooo!!!!!! *sniffles* If Charlie dies today, I'll be really sad (Charlie is from Lost.. the TV Show)

Oh.. Well.. I'll be stalking.. *wanders away in tears* Oh the sadness of the last postage.....

NO. NO FREAKING WAY. OMG. Katieeeee that was so sad. And tragic. I don't like Voldie anymore. But then again, I still do because he's so evil. This fic rocked my socks Katiekins!!!!!!! Hope there's a sequel. Love ya
Amie

*nods* She is writing a sequel. It takes place during Ginny's 7th year; she already submitted it, but it isn't up yet.

Oh goody. Thank goodness.

KATIE I have a question. Did Hallie die or just get kidnapped? Just want to make sureee

omg
that was soooooooooooooo sad

but it did have to end like this... great story
please tell us when the sequel is up

Roshni

Just one eye???

Thank you! I know, it's just so sad isn't it...poor Harry is all alone now *cries*

Merci Beaucoup! Je t'aime!

Did Charlie die? I was so happy last night 'cause I thought Meredith (from Grey's Anatomy) was gonna die, but she didn't!!!

Are you stalking me? Or Charlie?

You still like Voldie? You ish strange

Errrr *thinks* You'll just have to wait and see

<3333 Katie


I know....I was crying as I typed it!


Announcement:

Okay everyone! The first time I submitted the sequel I forgot the rating ! So I resubmitted it this morning...and hopefully it will be up soon. I promise to let you know when it is.

Hey fabulous readers! I'm at a cheerleading competition, and I have an hour to wait before we have to go on....so I decided to bring my laptop and steal the school's interent And I just saw that the sqeuel is up

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